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This story is a sequel to A Coven of Sisters
Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, along with their thralls Spike and Rarity, now find themselves in the human world, attending Canterlot High to keep from being conspicuous. However, in order to, the human world counterpart of themselves had to go.
Now, just realizing how that could compromise their cover, the Coven must do what ever it takes to keep their cover, while still pursuing their Witchcraft studies in secret.
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Ummm you made Sunset look like a villain...
6228814 *nods* but let me ask this, and this is the angle I'm playing at. How would you react to seeing someone who crippled one of your new friends?
6228814 I'm not upset or anything. I'm just trying to get some insight to what others think, while giving my own. If the scores keep going like this, I might scrap this and redo it.
6228838 Oh that's fine, I know you're not upset. I'm just confused with why Sunny Shimmy had to act so... Villainous, like how she laughed after made Sweetie Belle cry. That part did have it's strengths, like how it produced irony and a bit of compassionate mood, making the Coven Crusaders seem innocent while in reality they were the ones doing the crimes. However I am a bit unsure on how you made Sunset act like that.
6229701 How I envision it, she's of the mind, "You hurt my friend. I'll make you suffer!" Maybe I went a little over board, but I wanted her to be someone the CMCs would fear and want to avoid. I didn't feel I could do that if she wasn't in their faces.
On that note, how often do we look at the bold good guy who's such a bad ass that he's like, "You got something to say?" or "You look at my friends wrong, I'll kill you." and say that's cool. This time, we see that sort of act, but from the bad guys point of view, thus, the good guy looks like the bully and the bad guy a victim.
6229740 Okay thanks, that explains it. Now it's all cleared up!
6229761 Now I just need to do the same for the reader.