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Prologue: Where it all began2,692 words
Chapter 1: 7.8 out of 10 not enough cum7,607 words
Chapter 2 - The Walmart Trip: Save money, Can't live better, Lunar Night3,529 words
Chapter 3 - The Toys R' Us Trip: You'd think Starlight Glimmer is involved in this3,261 words
Chapter 4 - Hot Topic Trip: Fans Vs. Haters. Who's going to win?2,740 words
Chapter 5 - The Reveal: Sorry Sunbutt but, your cake is a lie2,815 words
Short Chapter: I am the Night and Bat Stallion1,224 words
Epilogue: One Week Later1,402 words

Epilogue: One Week Later

Epilogue: One Week Later

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July 21,2015

Dear Journal,

I thought this would be the perfect way to describe how my life as a bat pony has been for the last week after the princesses visit, by writing in a journal. And even though I'm gripping the pencil in my hoof as I write which was sorta easy, at least my erm... hoof writing is readable! Anyway...

I guess I can start it off by talking about what happened in the bathroom on the first day. Damn am I glad that William helped me pee because being twelve inches big meant it was harder to aim and trying to take a shit was even more of a pain in the ass. But as the days went on I eventually got 'going to the bathroom as a pony' learned quick enough. Thank you book on bat pony anatomy! Even taking showers got easier for me! And learning my body is great.

After all of that was over, I was able to spend some time with Luna as she gave me the basics of flight. Now, you might assume that flying is easy, but it's not! Especially with a few failed attempts at first which I'm glad that she was able to use her magic to catch me before hitting the ground. In the end it was worth it since I got to go out with my mother a few nights ago where she almost got robbed by that dumbass.

And speaking of him. He's 'happily' rotting away in jail for a long time which puts a smile on my face and happy that I was there to save the night.

Now onto to family. While my mother eventually accepted who I am. The looks on my sis, her BF and my niece, nephew when they saw me were priceless, but nevertheless was fine with it after I explained everything and they didn't mind that I was a bat pony now since they know I love ponies a lot. As for why none of them went pony? That's beyond me since I would assume my niece would have gone pony already. I'm the only one in the family that is a pony... for now anyway.

As for friends... well, I was able to go visit Kate at Walmart who went ahead to go pony and is a happy unicorn mare which put a smile on my face to know that I was able to help a random stranger and she still gets to do what she loves doing.

Ashur and his friend decided to be a bat pony guard like me and once word of me spread, some more agreed and some decided they were fine being human. So now HQ is filled with day and night guard and humans.

For any other humans that wanted to join our side. Last I heard before coming to Canterlot was that the princesses opened up quite a bunch of portals around the world when it became known that Equestria exists and that becoming a pony was possible with hundreds and hundreds of humans coming and taking either the portal, magic or potion option. I still believe that they must have read some 'The Conversion Bureau' stories to come up with the potion option... I just never got around to ask for sure. Also, equestrian ponies decided to come to earth to check out my old world which is nice to see something like that happening. Hopefully they got to enjoy their time on earth... if they notice humans eating meat anyway... then that's a different story.

But enough about that, time to talk about my time in Canterlot. Living in equestria looks like what you expect and that being very 'cartoon-ish' like in the show and I'm not complaining because the view here is amazing when you live near the castle, meeting very friendly ponies which is shocking knowing how Canterlot ponies usually are on the show, and doing our job... oh damn the job. Night and I sure had a 'good' time learning what it takes to be a night guard from captain Night Wing. Totally worth it in the end making us 'Real Stallions!' as he would say it. And our first true night on the job is not for a few more days. And we were only about two to three days into our training with Night Wing at that... at least it's something that we both love so there's no reason for neither of us to complain about the hard work.

And Night Blade ... he is the best coltfriend I could ever have! To that night on the roof when he was still human pleasuring me so damn much that came so hard from being so pent up to all of our sexual moments after he turned into a bat pony... and I'll stop there about that. I need to keep this story Teen/Sex after all.

I guess I might as well start ending this entry by saying that our place is huge! I knew Luna said that she has a place for us, but I didn't think it would be this big! Luckily she was able to teleport all of our stuff here and place them in perfect spots because magic.

Usually at night I can hear her rage at playing Super Mario 3D World since I know for a fact how hard it can be which causes Night and I to laugh at her rage... not that she knows it anyway.

I even adjusted to the night! Like a true bat pony should and if for any reason Night or I have to be out during the day then depending on how much sun is out then we'll wear our sunglasses.

And finally I have plans to travel to Ponyville with Night Blade in about two days to go visit the Mane 6 and give them those Funko Vinyl Collectibles of themselves to see how they react and I have plans to do that with the other ponies to. In the meantime, Night and I will stick around Canterlot to get ready.

And since the princesses knew how much I love Blueblood, I was able to get a friend back on earth to make me some similar Vinyl Collectibles of him in the regular and clear variants with matching packaging too! Which should come in a few days... although Luna did tell us that he's afraid of us for some apparent reason or so she says... something doesn't seem right about that. So I guess we'll figure that out in a few days time when we go and surprise him with the gifts.

Overall, life here in Canterlot is perfect, I have the best coltfriend, I have a job and it's just totally perfect.

Until next time....

"Damn, writing that lengthy journal entry made my hoof hurt too much..." I muttered while waving my hoof to make the pain go away.

Afterwards as I got up, Night Blade came in with a grin on his face. "Hey, Lunar! What were you up to? I was calling you for almost a minute now."

"Oh..." I smiled sheepishly. "I was just writing a journal entry about my life as a bat pony since it's been a week among other things. What was you calling me for?"

"Just to see if you wanted dinner. I'm starving and the place we're going to a few blocks away actually sells meat! I'm tempted to see what our reactions will be to eating equestrian meat."

I chuckled remembering how I reacted in the mall eating popeye's for the first time as a pony and walked up to Night Blade, nuzzling him softly. "Of course. It will be quite the experience for sure and then after that we can have our nightly sex fest."

That caused Night Blade to blush and a pomf! from his wings before he quickly said, "Well lets go already!" and ran off.

I only laughed at his reaction as I followed him out making sure to close the door and getting bits.

"Yep, life here in Canterlot is the best life ever!"

The End

Author's Note:

I was wondering how I should do this Epilogue and I felt that doing it in a journal entry format was best.

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And that ends this story before I start on the 2 one-shot sequels

This whole story takes place between July 14,2015 to July 21,2015 since on the 14th was when I started on this.

Some key points to this story

- This story is suppose to be a different/better version of Thunderclap and Thunderlane Go Shopping

If you thought it was better then great! If not then oh well I tried.

- This story is posted as is since my editor could get to edit my chapters I posted them as is and tried to fix what I can find... but! I know it still probably has a lot of errors.

At least I'm admitting that this story will have errors ... not a lot of authors would admit that.

- If you somehow made it this far in reading my randomness then sweet!

I'm a very random guy after all and all of this is my mind at work

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Seeking Dusk

Seeking Dusk #1 · Oct 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Yeah, I was debating commenting or not. But I suppose it's rude of me not to. So... general comments away!

I have to agree, it is better written than the previous one, but there was a lot of influence from it's predecessor. I suppose it was following the same formula, so that was to be expected. I had a minor issue with the hater's part, because really... just gonna up and attack a living breathing intelligent critter that proves a show reflects a reality? Pah...

Writer's License I suppose. You can do a whole lot with that.

In fact, most of my gripes are more Reading Sins worthy, little nitpickings that I won't elaborate on because I've been trying to kick the habit.

Story wise, it was a fun ride. Victor isn't a bad name for a pony. Neither is Will. But meh. Name changes are fine too. The fall out should be interesting at the higher level. Government and legal and such. I can say I didn't regret reading this and actually enjoyed it.

Hmm.... 7/10 will recommend to a friend for a quick read.

(Sheesh... good thing I came back, forgot to hit the like button!)

EDIT: Oh, right! The other side of a constructive comment. Nothing really leapt out at me in terms of grammatical errors and such, and nothing jarring of the sort that messed with my immersion into the story.

Flash_Magnus

Flash_Magnus #2 · Oct 8th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah, I guess going over board in terms of the haters seems like a bit much... but, lets just blame it on magic from the princesses

In all seriousness it's just my random mind at work even though at the same time I have no idea if the people around here would act like in the story if I suddenly was Lunar Night. I'm not even aware of any fans here in Jersey ... much ... maybe one person. Overall I just wanted one chapter haters, one chapter fans and the Hot Topic chapter ... it's crazy that I even came up with that XD

But hey, I wanted to do a different version of that other story while in similar style and that's what came to me

Victor being me and William being a friend of mines if you wanted to know. And everything you read of what I did in the story is what I would most likely do for real if I was a bat pony... especially in the short chapter which I just loved typing up. Lots of fun.

After thinking about it some... I think I can actually add more to the Epilogue, but I'll wait on that.

So thanks for the rating and like and I'm glad that you enjoyed this story and that any errors didn't bother your reading.

I used "And" way too much in this reply

Chrome Masquerade

Chrome Masquerade #3 · Oct 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Were I to sum this story up in one word, it would be... amusing.

I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I only wish that there was more of it to enjoy.
There was some action, comedy and I enjoyed some of the awkward moments too.

4 points on the itude meter! Looking forward to the sequel you mentioned, if it was to happen.

Chrome Masquerade

Chrome Masquerade #4 · Oct 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

After all of that was over, I was able to spend some time with Luna as she gave me the basics of flight. Now, you might assume that flying is easy, but it's not! Especially with a few failed attempts at first which I'm glad that she was able to use her magic to catch me before falling.

More accurately, to catch you before you hit the ground!

Flash_Magnus

Flash_Magnus #5 · Oct 8th, 2015 · · ·

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Corrected silly me XD

And I'm glad you enjoyed it The first sequel I plan on releasing next week is where Night Blade and I go visit the Mane 6 to give them those vinyl collectibles of themselves to see how they react among other craziness that will happen when we get to Ponyville.