What if a changeling accidentally takes a small filly? What if that filly was all alone from the start? What if the very thing he fled from was what saved him in the end?
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rainbowtiger00
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This is good! Don't stop there! Please!
7042524 Thank you so much! Don't worry, I'll have the next piece up soon!
Dude... That is awesome!
7048340 Thank you! This is a first try at a story, and to see someone enjoy it makes me happy.
7048439 No problems mate! But... Can you help me with mine...? I like stories that are hook and sinker in the first few lines. I hate prologues, but ever once in awhile, like yours for example, I find one that is slow that I like.
So far, pretty good. I'm looking forward to seeing where this leads. Keep it up!
That is amazing tiger! And I see you got rid of those dislikes.
So far, so good! And when you gonna do your Equestrian War version? I really want to compare the chapters...
7057270 I have most of the first chapter planned out, and will start putting the plan to paper tonight!
7058062 Awesome! Can't wait to read it and put mine on Hiatus setting and work on my new story, Human Magic.
7060712 I do try my best!
7061013 And your best is a hell of a lot better than mine!
Well that was cute and funny, poor waiter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Epic lols!
*dies from laughter*
Waiting for the next. Have a like and favorite!
7064242 The next has come!
7113197 nice! Glad to see this! Already waiting for the next! Also is there any way you can make the chapers slightly longer and a bit more descriptive for the scene?
7113797 I can try!
7113885 Thanks!
So when's the next hitting?
7123743 Perhaps in at most two days.
7123755 Sweet!
'A Thousand Years' will have a lot of questions about King Sombra answered. And a lot more will appear.
7141155 And we haven't even met Selena's father yet.
BWAHAHA! Awesome! She gets more pissed than Luna when everypony runs from her screaming Nightmare Moon!
my experience with french men tends to differ. sad as it is. Most french i met were gigantic assholes who never even heard about anything like manners.
I know not all Frenchman are like that but I met a fair lot and most of em had their head up their own asses.
...and french cuisine...I'll be honest I think it is a bit overrated but the tastes are different and everyone has their own point of view.
... stop it with the stories inside your story already. I understand you want us to know you backstory for your chars but you are telling us everything. I would have liked to find a few details myself. And the many stories hinder the progress of your own story. I mean we already know more legends and stuff than your story has proceeded.
Get on with it. patrickmclaurin.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/get_on_with_it.png
Liked the beginning but you lost me with all the backstory
nice beginning but yeah, too much interstory plot threads.