It has been a long day for Daring Do. Alone with her thoughts, what does she think?
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Wow... not bad! Nice read!
This is quite an adorable story, and has some very interesting ideas. I love it!
Well here is my first question. Why is he called Aztuiol and not Ahuizotl?
7209384 Aztuial was the name he was born with. But over the years it became Ahuizotl. He keeps Aztuial around for a nickname, even though most ponies know him as Ahuizotl.
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I thought the same thing, but I noticed that Yearling never referred to herself as Daring Do. I assume that Daring Do and Ahuizotl were the works of fiction, and Yearling and Aztuiol are who they are in reality.
The author should probably have made that a little clearer, though, to avoid confusion.
An interesting take on Daring Do and Ahuizotl's story. A little confusing at times, particularly with your clunky dialogue and tensing, but overall an okay read. I'd recommend finding someone to proofread through this and future works before publishing. A story is much easier to read with correct grammar.
It was a little sad at some parts, but I loved it and it had a cute ending!
Could the meaning be dreams? Or stars?
7585390 It is part of a poem called Song of Nature, I think it refers to Nature itself.
A nice Story, I really enjoyed reading it.
Daring do's author name is A.K. Yearling not J.K. Yearling so you'll have to edit her name from Jean to Alice or Amy or some other name that starts with A
here in case you don't believe me:
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Daring_Do
I will be honest this is an awesome and very well written fic of this ship i have read, the detail and pacing and the overall feel, is so satisfying. Thanks for a hood read, you made my day
This was beautiful! I loved it. Thanks for the great read. :)
Well this was a very interesting story so apparently daring do a long long time ago she discovered the Fountain of Youth but her thirst was getting the best of her but Ahuizotl warned her do not drink it but she ignored it and she drank it and now she has immortality not only that her family is pretty much gone and she's the only one left still young as ever it basically it's torturing her so much but Ahuizotl help her to get through this knowing to the fact that he also have the immortality as well and he gave her the idea of Daring Do and ak yearling and she's been living in the jungle for a long time and I guess this is growing season four when Rainbow dash and the others met her but yet they don't know her Secret and basically she rather keep it that way but also give Rainbow Dash a Liberty to hang out sometimes and apparently daring do and Ahuizotl got much closer and became a couple and this was a pretty good story keep up the good work