That Which We Become

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This morning I woke up... I had a dream of sirens and fear.
Now, the sun is shining and birds are singing...
What is going on?
Where am I?

Preread by Shiny, Aza, and Raiden
Edited by Stahl and Zodiac

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Crystal Moose

Crystal Moose #1 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Ooooo, reminds me of something I started writing for Halloween, then gave up because I am lazy.

Nice job, Foals.

DiscordFan

DiscordFan #2 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

I'm so confused yet fascinated... What are you doing to me, Foals Errand?

Brother Uriel

Brother Uriel #3 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · 4 · ·

I like it... But... I'm just... Confused... It's really good... But again.... I'm so confused...

Cold Spike

Cold Spike #4 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

*Twilight Zone Music Queues*

Scohinyha Sanka

Scohinyha Sanka #5 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · · ·

Interesting story which raises quite a few question in a short amount of words. Very nice.

Might be wrong but shouldn't

I wandered down to where several ponies had stands set up stands.

be "Had set up stands." or "had stands setup." ?

Hairy Rainbowish Thingy

Hairy Rainbowish Thingy #6 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · · ·

*INCEPTION SOUND*

Azure Blackstone

Azure Blackstone #7 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · · ·

I blinked once and missed it.

Night Music

Night Music #8 · Jul 3rd, 2015 · · ·

What?

Asashi - Dark Fist Inari

Asashi - Dark Fist Inari #9 · Jul 3rd, 2015 · · ·

So a story where Ponykind and Equestria came to be because of an evolutionary virus? *Shrugs* A new concept that I've read to be sure.

Fracturedheart

Fracturedheart #10 · Jul 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Nice story.

Ghostrama13

Ghostrama13 #11 · Jul 5th, 2015 · · ·

Hmmmmm...it seems a to be a seribial virus though the ability to even manipulate the waking patterns of living creatures is astounding... Oh sorry got a little nerdy there. Good story

Europa

Europa #12 · Jul 14th, 2015 · 1 · ·

So... alot the ponies are at one point replaced with a human who is forced into their body, but they are forced to walk and act as though they were the original pony and are only 'them' within their thoughts?

Holy shit does this earn that Dark tag! Have a like.

gardrek

gardrek #13 · Oct 1st, 2015 · 1 · ·

Closing my eyes and laid back down to listen to the birds sing their chorus in the bright morning.

I stared down at the rest of my furry body and ran a hoof down at marveling at the texture of it.

I gazed around the room. I was in sure the normal occupant had a mirror in their room.

I don't get it. I think maybe this is what you were going for:

I gazed around the room I was in, sure the normal occupant had a mirror in their room.

A grumble erupted from stomach growl.

This sentence is weird.

I wandered down to where several ponies had stands set up stands.

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