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Twi-Fi


“You use a glass mirror to see your face; you use works of art to see your soul.” George Bernard Shaw

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Wow, the first CMC clop I've read... Very... :moustache::yay:

But Twi-Fi... the story... there must be the story.

Okay... fine... not really my thing but I will support the psycho who I started watching by reading this... tale of woe... or for Scoots it will likely be more a tail of whoa. We'll be right back asfter a word from our sponsors. Also after I read this thing.

Okay time for the verdict... that was it? this is the mythological "clop story" we've all been taught to fear and shun? It was cute. Kind of funny, but really all things considered this was harmless. I think I'll keep an eye on this and see if the CMC eventually invite DT and SS(because that would be hilarious). Also I hope that the lack of story will not last forever and we will eventually get some romantic ScootaBelle romancery.

I'll see you at the next chapter.

Other than the plethora of spelling and grammar mistakes, this was pretty nice. <3 Moar plz.

I definitely enjoyed this. Awesome story! Thank you. :pinkiehappy:
I hope that there may be a chapter two or a sequel. I would really like to know how long Sweetie Belle had been standing there and how much of the show she actually saw. Also, what her reaction is if she had been there for any length of time.

In other words... I WANT MORE, please! :scootangel:

This was recommended by a friend....oooooh It's perfect! Thank you ! Great job!

I could not get excited from this, it felt disturbing.
A good kind of disturbing, hoot!
God help me.
I'll help you all night!
All I wanted was to write cute fanfics!

Gah! Cliffhanger! Right at the best part too.

I enjoyed this chapter quite as much as the previous. Great job!

A couple of minor grammar oops, but it was still an amazingly good read.

6149648 There's minimal story here. But there's plenty of plot.

She was relieved her parents wouldn’t be back until later tomorrow, giving them plenty of time to fool around in the morning.

Yeah, until a frantic Rarity comes banging on the door to see if Scoots knows where Sweetie Belle went, then you're going to get it. Hehe.:twilightsmile:

Straight to the point, I can appreciate that.

this was amazing i love all your scootabelle stories
I LOVE SCOOTABELLE 2ND OTP

Let's get those likes to 69 people!:pinkiecrazy:

6156457 Thanks :twilightsmile: I think Sweetie and Scoots are the cutest couple ever. :scootangel::heart::unsuresweetie:
6156646 That's the spirit. I was going to screenshot it when it got to 69, but sadly I missed it.

6166143 NOOOOOOO! I MISSED THE 69!:fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry:
On the bright side that means your story is doing great.

Fuck me, that was hot. Thumbs up!

I'm not into clopping that much, especially foalcon, but this was pretty hot. Good work

Quite the story old chap, I only hope the ending is as thrilling! :moustache:

The winking slowed and the pressure eased. She took a few minutes to feel the rhythm of her winking. The way her clit flung forward and locked in place, spreading her lips and dripping fluids before returning inside.

Winking! Fucking love how much you incorporated winking in this! Sooooo hot!

Scootaloo withdrew her tongue from her, licked around her rim again, then pulled back to admire Sweetie’s plot hole. “No. It tastes tangy, but I kinda like it.” She then returned her tongue inside, pushing further than before. She pulled her tongue back to the tip then pushed the full length back in.

Liar! Sweetie Belle has been in school all day, and has had no way to clean her anus. This means that no matter what her anus will taste like shit. So, I read that as "I'm Scootaloo, and I loooove the taste of shit".

6338414 Sweetie did go home first, so maybe she did.

I very much enjoyed this clopfic please do keep going.This was an amazing book and if its not weird to say I would clop to it lols.:scootangel::heart::unsuresweetie:

This made me realize that Im a pervert, a lonely pervert... :scootangel::unsuresweetie: = :heart:

HOLY SHIT MAN THIS WAS HOT AS HELL, I LOVE IT (even though I don't clop!!!)

6338414 I'd imagine White coated ponies need to be very clean at all times down there cause it would be obvious if they weren't.

well I guess that could be the equivalent to the mile high club. :raritywink:

Thanks for the fic!

This was an excellent and somewhat endearing story. Kudos! :twilightsmile:

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