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VitalSpark


Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.

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6185289
It's actually Claire Corlett's 16th birthday today. What year would that mean she was born in? What's the word count on this story? :raritywink:

6185302
that's fairly clever of you:ajsmug:

Well, that happened. As cute as to why and how that all happened, I have to say that was a really nice, yet bittersweet, ending there. That whole picture makes more sense now AFTER you read the story.

Not sure what to say. It's certainly quite the gift you made for Claire I'll tell give you that. :twilightsheepish:

Um, Happy 16th Birthday Claire! (lol I'd love to see her comment on this story, that'd be hilarious! xD)

6185425 OMG! If she saw it. :twilightblush:

I would love to see Claire's reaction for that :trollestia:

When I opened the story, I thought it would be Rarity but DT was an interesting choice.

I am both immensely proud and deeply ashamed of myself.

Story of my life.

In case you were wondering about the significance of Diamond Tiara's gift, take a close look at this screen capture.

Looking at the image, the closest I see to any reference to DT would be the coloration of the pillars throughout the room. Beyond that...

6186389 Take a look at the framed pictures on the wall.

6185302 She was born in 1999.

6186438 Indeed, hence the story's word count. It was quite a challenge not to overrun.

6186400 One framed pic on the wall. The other two are wall scrolls. One has a tree, the other two have ponies... but not the correct color for DT.

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Sweetie sat up in her bed and unwrapped the gift that Diamond had brought her, a framed painting of an apple tree. She'd have to find a way to thank her next time they met.

Author's Note:
In case you were wondering about the significance of Diamond Tiara's gift, take a close look at this screen capture.

6186482 Ah, ok. Now I understand. I misread the AN.

Neato! Ever since the .gif pop, I've been longing for some DiamondBelle!

6186644 I don't even know what that is. What that is?

6186752 Oh, that one. Yes, I know that one. :rainbowlaugh:

I am as immensely proud as I am deeply ashamed of the fact that I enjoyed this.
...Nah, just kidding.:pinkiehappy: This story raises an interesting question, though: why wasn't DT at Sweetie Belle's fifth birthday party? Especially when the scene called for a generic bully stereotype, it seems a little... lazy. :facehoof:

Sorry this story was unpublished for a while. It's back now though. :heart:

I started reading but halted when I realized just what time frame this was in, 5 is a little too young for my taste but I'm sure others won't mind.:twilightsheepish:

6349829
I kinda agree, but it's her only canon birthday party, and the lipstick and dress was just too cute.

6397716
I did have vague plans for a follow-up with Apple Bloom, but I don't think that's likely to happen.

Comment posted by NeutronStar deleted Jan 9th, 2022

I am both immensely proud and deeply shamed of myself.

Yes. You should be. :ajsmug:

*squirrel voices* :rainbowlaugh:

I'm half happy I read this and shameful that I did.

I love the story but I'm not sure if I should be ashamed of reading it. Either way great story :raritywink:

Sparkles, that was adorable :heart:

7049152
Thanks.

Age-adjusting the CMC for the purposes of clop is quite common, though normally they get adjusted in the other direction. :twilightoops:

7049941 Hehehe true, although I liked it in the other direction *shifty* Anyhow back to work and writing before people lynch me

Great story, I loved from beginning to end.
And capture screen to highlight the gift. Very good idea.

Congratulations 10/10 and a green thumb.

This was adorable in it's own sexy way. With foals. I don't know if I should be ashamed because I like this, but... I do. A lot. :twilightblush:

8136251
Glad you liked it. I've got another Diamond Tiara foalcon story lurking around my account somewhere. (And one more that will come out in a couple of months.)

8136260
You can count on me reading that, and all the other clop you have.

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