Hello! I am Golfin420 and I love to write! My favorite character is Spike, and my favorite pony is Pinkie Pie! Please read and review!
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Spike has put up with a lot hasn't he? He's always had to be the sidekick to somepony else's hero. Well not anymore! Spike sets off on an epic journey Across Equestria, determined to finally be the hero he knows he can be. Along the way he will make new friends, allies, and dangerous enemies. Will Spike succeed and become a true hero?
Only one way to find out!
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...... concept sounded good for the plot.... reading this really brought that straight to hell and past...
sloppy, no real capture of character and this into was unorthodox.
Good idea, looks clean. Very bad execution and not faithful to the characters at all.
Way too quick, slow down.
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5946212 if 3 huge Spike fans are saying basically the same thing should i(as another huge Spike fan) even read this?
5946820 No offense to the author, but this is a little painful to read, at least as it was when I read it. I'm sorry if that hurts you.
5946920 the picture kinda threw me off also
At the very least you may want to add an Alternate Universe tag. The character's personalities aren't really loyal to the show.
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I second this as well.
This was a little too meta for me. Sure, sometimes even I can think the mane 6 treats Spike a little unfairly, but Spike himself never really complains about it, so having him say he hates Twilight and the rest of the cast definitely warrants the AU tag.
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I actually think the concept proves for an interesting read. However, its execution leaves much to be desired. I suggest reworking the story to move more slowly. Perhaps giving some back-story to Spike's early life and how it lead to the current situation. I would also suggest actually proofreading the story before upload.
You need to add Comedy to the list up there.
....Yeah.... This needs work. I'm not going to repeat what everyone else said already, but I will admit one thing:
Imagining Spike backhand slapping Twilight Is gold!