Chapter 1
“What’s this about, Twilight?” Applejack glanced around the throne room of Twilight’s castle, finding herself, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash all standing in a line in front of the princess. At their sides, each had a bag, the contents of which Applejack could easily surmise.
“Well, Applejack, I’m glad you all decided to come. As you have no doubt guessed by the provisions I’ve asked you each to bring, I thought tonight would be a great night for a sleepover.” Twilight flashed a smile to her friends. “Fillies only, of course. Spike’s in his room for the night.”
Rainbow Dash shrugged. “I guessed that was what you were up to.”
“Woohoo!” Pinkie jumped into the air.
Rarity, Applejack and Fluttershy exchanged some skeptical glances. “Um, Twilight, why a sleepover all of a sudden? Not that I’m opposed, it’s just…unexpected.” Rarity looked back at Twilight.
“Well, after getting this huge castle, and spending a few nights alone here with just Spike, I realized something.” Twilight frowned slightly. “You girls are my first real friends. I’ve missed out on so much of my childhood, so I thought it would be a good idea to try and capture those memories.”
“Um…I don’t want to be a downer, but…we’re all grown mares. It won’t quite be the same as if you were a filly, Twilight.”
Twilight flashed a cunning smile. “Right you are, Fluttershy. Which is why I have done a little research.” Twilight levitated a book into view. “I found a temporary age regression spell that will turn us back into fillies for one night.”
“Wait, so you want to turn us into fillies for a sleepover?” Applejack raised an eyebrow.
Twilight nodded with a please smile on her face.
“Sounds fun!” Pinkie rushed up to the book, snatching it from Twilight’s magic. “Could you imagine how much fun we could have? And it will be like we’ve all known each other since childhood!”
“It seems a little farfetched…” Rarity placed her hoof to her chin. “But, I suppose it would be fun to relive my youth. I’m in.”
“Well, as long as we turn back, I don’t suppose it would hurt to do it for one night.” Fluttershy nodded.
Rainbow contemplated for a moment before shrugging. “I guess it could be fun.”
“Well, Applejack?” Twilight asked, taking the book back from Pinkie.
She rubbed her head. “I suppose. We can turn back in the mornin’ right?”
“It’s an automatic process, so yes.” Twilight flipped open to the right page. “Are you girls ready?” After a resounding ‘yes,’ a purple cloud of magic formed around the group of friends. In a bright white flash, it was done.
Standing where the six, fully grown mares once were was now a group of little fillies. They were no taller than Cheerilee’s students. The group of friends looked over their shrunken bodies, Applejack pulled her head out from her now oversized hat. “That was a trip…” she muttered, rubbing her head. She tried to place her hat so it would stay, but she found it sliding over her eyes.
“Oh, this brings back so many memories! I was a quick little filly, you know!” Rainbow called out. Her voice cracked at the end,making her flash red in the face before covering her mouth. “Don’t say anything, okay…”
Everyone giggled.
“Wow, my hair was frizzy when I was younger.” Pinkie pulled a strand of her mane tight and watched as it bounced back into place once she let go of it. As soon as it snapped back, her whole puff of a mane shook like jello and she giggled again.
“Oh, my goodness, Fluttershy!” Rarity called out. “You look adorable with a shorter mane, dear.” Fluttershy was the tallest of them all, but not by much. She had a short, pink mane that still tried to cover her face. She blushed as Rarity inspected her.
“T-thank you…” Fluttershy tried to hide behind her mane, but found it much harder to do when it was so short. “You’re…cute too, Rarity…” The designer’s mane was shorter as well, but still expertly curled.
“I still have wings…” Twilight remarked as she looked down at her sides. She was smaller and her mane a bit shorter as well, but she looked relatively the same as she had before the spell. “Oh, well. So, what shall we do first? Should I get my sleepover book?”
“No!” Rarity and Applejack said in unison. They looked at one another cracking a small smile. “I think, perhaps, we should…” Rarity paused, finding herself at a loss for words. “We should do whatever it is fillies normally do at sleepovers…”
“Oh!” Pinkie bounced up, landing on top of Rarity and pulling her into a hug. “We should make some popcorn and tell scary stories!”
“S-scary stories?” Fluttershy tensed.
“Sounds awesome!” Rainbow chimed in.
“I don’t think everypony’ll be okay with that.” Applejack’s hat slipped over her head again. With a sigh, she pushed it off, deciding to abandon it for the night.
“Perhaps we could just gossip, like we normally do?” Rarity offered.
“I would prefer that…” Fluttershy nodded.
“Alright. I can make the popcorn. You girls head on up to my room and get ready for some stories.”
After a few hours, an empty bowl of popcorn and a few jugs of juice gone dry, Twilight and her friends were all laying on her bed, laughing. “Anyway, that’s how I found out Gummy likes to play hide and seek!” Pinkie squealed in a high-pitched voice. Another roar of laughter came from the circle of friends.
“So, that’s why Mrs. Cake gets so jumpy around him.” Rainbow laughed.
“She was pretty mad about that one.” Pinkie started to laugh but was cut off by an exaggerated yawn. Her little mouth stretched wide and she found herself feeling drowsy. “I’m not usually tired so early,” she said, rubbing her eye.
“Now that you mention it…” Applejack yawned as well.
“Stop passing it around the room, you guys! We got to keep this party go—” Rainbow yawned as well. “Dang it, now you’ve got me doing it…”
“The spell tends to make you tired earlier than you normally would.” Twilight stretched her back and tiny wings before nestling back down into her spot on the bed.
“So, bedtime then?” Pinkie asked, her mane deflating and turning straight.
“Looks like it.” Rarity yawned as well and moved to the head of the bed.
“Let’s get some sleep then, girls.” Twilight used her magic to turn off the lights. “There’s more than enough room, so you can all just sleep in my bed.” Her nodded and slipped under the sheets under the cover of darkness. Just as Twilight laid her head down on her pillow, she heard Fluttershy whisper to get her attention.
Twilight rolled over to face her. “What’s up, Fluttershy?”
“I just wanted to say that I think this was a good idea tonight, Twilight.” Fluttershy smiled, though Twilight couldn’t see it. “I had fun.”
Twilight smiled back. “I did too.”
“Maybe we can do it again sometime,” Applejack added, joining in on their conversation. The rest agreed, their fatigue showing in their voices.
“Well, I’m glad you all had as much fun as I did tonight.” Twilight friends closed in around her, each cuddling close to one another under the huge blanket. She cozied herself up to her friends as well, feeling their warmth against. Twilight’s heart filled with joy. “Goodnight, girls.” Twilight closed her eyes and nestled into the embrace.
The End
My first attempt at writing a story, I hope you all enjoyed it! 
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There is not enough cute for how words this is.
How did you obtain that cute tag?
That was a really good and cute fic!
My only suggestion is that it be longer because I want more dawws :3
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Thanks!
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It's a super secret.
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I will try in the future. Thanks for the helpful feedback!
D'awwwwwwwww
A good story for the old book shelf. Great job on your first story!
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Thank you!
6415963 Tell me, I wanna know!
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If I did, I'd have to stick a cupcake in my eye. You wouldn't want that, would you?
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*vomits*
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Like that?
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They added an image to their story description and linked it to other stuff.
cute overload
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Could have used some more jokes or events through the night, but it's written well enough. Not bad.
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6416106 Darn it, I was hoping it was something I could utlize as well.
Needed a knock-down, drag-out pillow fight.
SO CUTE!!!
Add in a pillow fight and I'll die from cuteness.
This was adorable.
Now are they going to wake in the morning at there normal size?
Cause that bed would be crowded, and who would end up waking from hitting the floor.
This was cute. ^^ It's strikingly similar to an idea I had once, actually, so it was interesting to see someone do a story along those lines.
If I have any criticism, it's that the story doesn't spend any significant amount of time with the Filly Six exploring their new condition, which could have been very interesting, as all of them would have different perspectives on it. But from a technical standpoint, this is not bad at all for a first attempt. I look forward to seeing more cute things from you. :)
Well I'll admit that was adorable and the premise definitely sounds like something Twilight would pull if she had the time. Though it also felt like it went by a little quick. I mean they transform, debate, gossip for a few hours and then pass out. Just saying some other stuff could have happened, like the whole pillow fight thing or perhaps other people reacting to their appearance, something else for a little extra humor. Just saying.
Still nice idea overall and not a bad execution
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My secret's out!
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Thank you, I'm glad you found some enjoyment in it!
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I should have done that, you're right!
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Twilight's got a big bed. They won't bonk their heads or anything once they poof back to normal size.
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Thank you, I'll work harder in the future!
awesome story
Great story so cute
How do you get the "cute" tag?
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It's a coveted tag granted only to stories deemed the cutest of them all by members of the almighty staff. Many a writer would, in a heartbeat, give up their pen hand to see it placed upon their story. It is said that if you fall on your knees before knighty himself and sing hymns to his greatness, he may bestow upon you the knowledge necessary to write a story of such caliber.
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I wish my story had it. I love cute things and the cute tag would be such an honor...
...plus the cute tag is cute.
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Maybe they should draw hearts or frills or something around the cute tag to make it even cuter.
And then the spell didn't work and they stayed fillies.
Honestly, this was adorable and well written. Pretty good for a first attempt. Could be a little more lengthy, but I think it's fine how it is. Nice job.
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It's not an actual tag.
>:V
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6417002 Gotta leave material for the sequel!
Having reverted to normal size during the night, the fire department needed to be called in order to untangle the six mares; Spike never let them live it down.
Nice intro, and wrapped up pretty well too. Only trouble is you forgot the part where you write a story. You set it all up and then skipped over the entire plot. Once upon a time they lived happily ever after, the end.
6420881 It was still cute but need a bit more.
That was a sweet evening. Could have gone into their fillyhoods more, other than just how Rainbow Dash's voice used to crack.
So cute! I love this story. It was a little short though...
Wish they could make a real episode like this lol
ehhh...
it's alright
To be young and free…
One of my fave stories, ever. You get a cookie!
This is a great story- sweet and simple and to the point just the way I like it!
Hey this story is great I think that for a first (or even 19th) is amazing keep writing mkay? Good.
My only complaint is that this wasn't longer.
Adorable. I wish it was longer!
So sweet
So sweet
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I’m sorry what?