• Published 23rd Apr 2015
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A shooting nightmare: The tables have rotated - The Psychopath



Crescent wants to deal with her own nightmares and decides to cast a spell to send her back to Equestria, but Mathews won't let her. Stuck with a new body and old one, the two meet creatures never before seen by pony-kind in millenia.

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Stronger than a titan

"What is that?!" Crescent shouted.

Venethix stepped forward and spoke to her like a jumpy, excited young filly. "That is theh Yuhis! Theh brainger off theh shadows and theh annoouncer off theh new lunair cycle."

"We need to get out of here!"

"What for? This wehll be fun!"

"What are you talking about? I need to find the foal. Mathews? MATHEWS?!"

Crescent started to gallop around while the Nebwezar all returned to their homes to grab their weapons and armor, as indicated by the large amount of them coming back out with ancient-styled weapons and armor. With each movement, the world shook under the immense weight of the Yuhis, and with each step it took, the world reeled in fear as darkness started to devour its light. Both of these couldn't be ignored by Crescent who fell and tumbled with every quake.

"I have to find him as quickly as possible and get out of here! These creatures are simply insane! It's not safe! I'll find a way back to Canterlot through another path."

The mare was caught in her gallop by metallic hands and forced to sit down. Angry, she looked up to see Querthix looking a her with his emotionless stare.

"We air not crazeh like yeh think. This is aye celebration announcing theh nehw cycle off theh moons."

"Then what does that gigantic abomination have to do with anything?"

"Not much. It's jest comes bey when theh new cycle stehrts."

"And where's Mathews?! He was with you!"

"Theh teiny pony? He's right thehre." The blacksmith pointed to something next to the alicorn's left.

To Crescent's joy, it was Mathews covered in breezies. He was getting the hang of walking but was still pretty slow in his pacing. The alicorn was quite surprised, and his evolution was giving her much needed relief in these times of turmoil and even made her briefly forget what she was worried about.

"Mathews, you can walk! How is this possible?!" Crescent looked around to see the itty bitty breezies staring at her with their big, beady eyes. The cuteness was overwhelming. "Huh. I guess these fae aren't despicable horrors as the others. Still, we need to leave!"

Crescent wanted to pick up Mathews with her right foreleg, stress preventing her from thinking about her magic, but another loud thud shook the land much more violently, causing Crescent to fall forward and accidentally toss the tiny foal out of her foreleg. Looking over her shoulder, Crescent had a better view of what was causing the tremors.

"What...The sheer size of it...Almost three hundred and fifty meters? It couldn't be. A hecatonchires class?!" Crescent screamed at the top of her lungs.

The Yuhis was now in full view, and it simply towered over anything in the area, even what was left of the mountain tips. Its body was simply pure black and surrounded by what appeared to be a mist of darkness swirling around it like rings of flies. It possessed two long, bony arms that reached all the way to the ground, and at their ends extended three, quadruple-segmented claws serving as fingers. The head itself was very narrow and resembled a three-sided pyramid placed on its side. The two lower edges extended slightly backwards with the upper one extending further than the neck and bending towards the left. Halfway through the edge, the head smoothed and the side of the 'pyramid' became a rounded, stretched surface. Three bright, white eyes could barely be seen on its face as they were almost completely closed. Unlike many creatures in this world, this gigantic beast was a tripod with a bizarre anatomy. The front leg was the shortest of the needle-like structures, the two in the back about the length of its body and pushing it along. Due to its strange leg structure, its upper body was forced forward into a hunching position, shortening its possible, maximum height. Because of all these physical impairments, it was extremely slow and did not seem to enjoy this aspect of its existence.

Nevertheless, the Nebwezar were all covered in armors made of thin sheets of metal while others just wore a leather cap. They were all dressed differently and equipped with too many weapons for Crescent to count, but she did notice several types of weapons she had never seen before, and instead of running towards and attacking the Yuhis, they were standing around and looking at it, as though waiting for something. A vicious sense of dread overwhelmed Crescent and even the breezies, but Mathews was still unaffected by whatever this world had. With some effort, he managed to hoist himself back onto his forelegs without the aid of the breezies and smiled. He was proud of his accomplishment. Looking up, he noticed that the swirling vortex of darkness started to break apart in tiny bits and pieces after another shockwave rammed the ground. The darkness slowly came closer and closer until it was clear they were projectiles intent on destroying the landscape like meteors falling from the sky.

Houses were crushed, trees were broken in half, and one of them was coming directly towards the ponies. Crescent didn't have time to think of a proper spell but focused her mind nonetheless, and her armor became much brighter. In an instant, a strange blanket of darkness flowed off of her body and caught the black ball before crushing it between its massive claws and receding back into the armor. The pony just stared agape at what had happened and looked down at the smoldering mess.

"I just created an astral projection with my mind without any effort. These enchantments are surreal. This is...this is amazing!"

A roar attracted every pony's attention to the left where they saw a bipedal beast with reverse-knee legs and a completely black body step out of the ruins of one of the houses. Its arms were quite long and bulky as were its three claws, but it had no facial features, strangely. It got sight of the alicorn, pointed at her, then screamed. It couldn't even make a step forward that one of the Nebwezar rammed into it and continued charging across a lengthy amount of time through the village grounds and what was left of the building. Another shadow creature, this time a tripod with similar arms, jumped off a cliff overlooking the village with an intent on slamming onto one of the infants firing at the beasts with crossbows. Unfortunately, it got impaled on a pike raised by a protective parent. Instead of growling in anger, the parent just howled in joy and victory.

Even the lunar alicorn started to feel something well up inside her. A joy she never felt before. A thirst for combat? Two more of the bipedal creatures ran towards her after throwing a gigantic nebwezar far across the landscape. They were the same height yet had no difficulty throwing such immense giants far away. What chance did Crescent have? Well, she had magic, for one, and she intended to use it.

Gathering up her energy, the lunar alicorn only intended to blast the creatures away with a ball of energy she would build above her and use as a trap. Once again, her intentions changed due to the armor. A shower of white, lunar energy crashed down upon the creatures, crushing them and burning the path several times. Even a tripod tried to mangle the alicorn when it attempted to tackle her from the side, but she jumped, twisted her body over it, and projected energy through her hooves, effectively launching the creature through a hill like a rail cannon shot.

The alicorn was having so much fun with her new powers and armor that Mathews didn't want to interrupt her. She had been the happiest he had ever seen her. It's a shame it was with violence, but she always showed that kind of preference even the day she crashed in front of him and ruined his drink. Good times.

"I'm concerned. Wasn't she trying to avoid all of this...this violence? I thought she wanted to avoid this sort of thing as much as possible. I'm worried she might regress to whatever it is she used to be."

Mathews' thoughts were cut short by a quad-winged piece with a very narrow head and sharp beak squawking at him from above. It had sneaked in behind his protector and planned on...eating him whole? These creatures were still unknown, so the two ponies knew not what they wanted. Being heroic, the breezies charged in front of Mathews and blocked the beast, but it only bellowed a screeching tone, knocking the tiny fae unconscious and onto the floor where they did naught but twitch and drool. Alerted by the sound, Crescent turned to witness her adoptive father helplessly under the gaze of a starved beast, and she couldn't reach him in time. She tried to cast a spell, but she couldn't muster up enough energy. She didn't know how to use the armor yet and it cost her all her magic. She tried to gallop towards Mathews to jump up and punch out the beast, but she was too slow and too far. She felt as if the whole world moved in slow motion as she watched, helplessly, as the bird dove towards the small foal with its beak opening while said foal protected his face with his left foreleg and lift his right towards the creature in a desperate attempt to keep it away with distance he no longer possessed.

Crescent cried out, tears of fear welling up in her eyes. "MATHEEEEEEEEWS!"

Comments ( 76 )

scary magic time?

Cliffhanger, we meet again... :rainbowdetermined2:

6417734 I'm starting them up again this time for realsies good dealsies. I used to do them in the past but never got to continuing them. :pinkiecrazy:

6417738 Cliffhangers are a good ploy to keep readers interested in your story, but only if you update quickly afterwards. If you don't, then it can discourage readers from reading your other stories. (at least, that what happens for me! :twilightsheepish:)

6615277 Why yes! How did you know?

THIS IS CRAZY SOMEONE PLEASE EXPLAIN :raritydespair:

6784916 Wuzzae matter? Ya dinnae loyk theh accents oy made by mixin' Sco'ish, Irish, 'n southern States dialacts? Dinnae ferget: If'n it's nae Sco'ish or dinnae has at least sem Sco'ish innit, it's crap!

6784934 THE ONLY THING THAT I UNDERSTAND IN THAT IS : Wuzzae matter? Ya + it's crap!

Please it hurts, I beg thee to give us a TRANSLATION BOOK PLEASE:raritydespair:

END MY SUFFERING, I WANT TO UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY AND YOU ARE SAYING:raritycry:

6785183 That was the point of their accents. Make it so damn difficult to understand (and it worked perfectly.derpicdn.net/img/2014/1/23/532533/thumb.jpeg )

It's a mixture of Scottish; Irish; and thick US, Southern States accents + dialects.

Wuzzae matter? Ya dinnae loyk theh accents oy made by mixin' Sco'ish, Irish, 'n southern States dialacts? Dinnae ferget: If'n it's nae Sco'ish or dinnae has at least sem Sco'ish innit, it's crap!

Dinnae = Don't
Loyk = Like
Oy = In this case it would be 'I'
Sco'ish = Scottish
Ferget = Forget
If'n = Slang pronunciation of 'If'
Nae = Not
Sem = Some
Innit = In it, Isn't it

6785245 THAT PICTURE MAKES NO SENSE

WHO would put a straw up Celestia's ass and suck ON IT. LIKE WHAT!? I SAY ITS HERESY:flutterrage:

Who da heck is that anyway?:rainbowhuh:

Thank you for that translation now all you need to do is make a whole translation book of all the other chapters so that us poor readers can understand what the characters are saying and to end our tears. Please:fluttercry:

ALSO WHO CARES IF THERE IS NO ACCENT, IT CONFUSES AND ANGER US:flutterrage:

I want to understand:fluttercry:

6787237 Thats Princess Rosalina. She first appeared in Mario Galaxy and is actually worth something and can defend herself, unlike Peach.

And nop. Yeh're gon' have tae figure it out yerself! That's theh point!

6787979 You see that last line is perfect and I can understand it. NOT LIKE THE REAL STORY THOUGH.

BUT NO seriously man tone it down a bit. I find it extremely uncomfortable and un-enjoyable to read and I am sure others agree with me as well. I really want to enjoy your story but the accents its TOO O.P.

You wouldn't mind telling me why you included the accents? I am a bit curious to know for its reasons.:twilightsmile:

Princess Rosalina hey:trollestia: Never heard of her, well at least she isn't afraid to get her hands dirty:derpytongue2:

6788023 I made the accents because I wanted to try my hand at one of them, but the purpose was to not only make the creatures appear brand new (because they are) to the ponies, but also make it so that it's equally difficult for both the reader AND characters to understand as they've never met these creatures or heard their accents before.

6788078 Ok I can understand that, just in the future could you make it more readable.

6788078 soo... is it↑ dead?
It seems like it from 2015. Or it gets so little and rare updates?

7155106 It's more like I'm stuck in a rut because this thing barely got any attention from the people in the past who liked the first story and wanted a sequel, and lack of commentary kinda killed me off. If it got attention again then I'd feel like I'd be writing this story for a reason again.

7155107 Thanks for the answer.
To the "possibly dead" shelf it is then.
A pity.

7155127 Well, you can always read My Last Shadow, Deer Me: Black Snow, and Blank Sheet (tell me what you THINK about this one:pinkiecrazy:).

Why? Did you like this story? What did you like about it?

7155133 Actually now im reading Deer Me: Black Snow , currently at "unexpected-reaction" and then im planning to read "shooting nightmare", so i came here for downloading a sequel.
Tx for advising other stories, i'll look at them later.
What do i like about this one? I'll answer that in 1-2 days ;)

7155141 You're welcome. There's also a non-pony novel I'm writing right now that you could read as well if it interests you. I'll link it to you here.

8Gaaaaasssp* MORE BREEZIES, BREEZIESBREEZIESBREEZIES AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA :pinkiecrazy::trollestia:

7286076 Yes, quite, the description that you gave the fairies Equestria is that of most physical attributes as well as behavior of that of a breezie :pinkiecrazy:

7362844 Someone gets it! Mmmmm. You think I should continue this story?

7362856
Such a thing would be most appreciated, it would be a shame to leave such an amazing story to end.

7593215 I'll try what I can, but I'm writing Deer Me's sequel, rewriting The True Psychopath (I should probably also rewrite the From man to mare stories and wipe away that shitty time hop), and my novel Lux Locus: Familial Troubles

7593509 Meant to write 'From man to mare' instead of 'Deer Me' in terms of rewriting.

7593537
Hehe, I misspell some things to sometimes.

Oh and since I have your attention, who runs FimFiction and how can you send them a message without anyone else seeing it?

7593544 This is the site creator and you can contact him directly via the 'mail' button at the top of the page to the right in the task bar next to the profile pic.

Don't bother, though. He doesn't answer or talk. He's a Brother of Silence.

7748142 Yeh dinnae knehw whet yeh're tekin' abowt.

7748145

:pinkiehappy:

Well Oi aint gonnae out roight nick yer axents were Oi.

7748169 Dats cuz you'z a humie, 'n humiez iz akk squish 'n fings. Now, an Ork iz right tough.

7748200

Oo you callin' a humie ya slimy git, I'll pound ya face inta the floor wiv me choppa 'n send ya off to the Dok.

Then we can git dis ere WAAAAAAGGHHH goin propah.

7748227 Dere ain't no WAAAAGH! wif a gobbo like you in wif da boyz!

7749297

Don't let da Nobz ere you say dat, deys ull smush ya inta paint for da wagonz ya Squig

7749352 Deyz can try, but oy'm da bigest 'n greenest of da orkz!

7749522

Youz ain't nutin one ov ar boyz in one ov dem Killa Kanz can't sort out.

7750175 So anyways, you want this story to be continued?

7750195

Yes, I'm rather excited for the inevitable interaction between Crescent, Kane ;), and the Princesses.

And also learning more about the blood moon magic

7750202 Good grief. DAMN MY DETOX! Okay, but bare in mind that, like Cutiemark Crusaders: 10k, I haven't written for this in quite a while. Plus, I need to update Deer Me a little more before updating these two.

"Arise pony arise"
"Arise pony arise"
"Boss I don't think it's worki...Owww!" *SMACK*
"Arise story arise"
"Arise story arise"
>.> <.< :facehoof:

8720752
I forgot about this story :/. You're right. I should resume it, but there's so many like this that need that to happen, like Roborganics.

I think I stopped it because I was pissed that it wasn't getting the same reception as its predecessor. *scratches head* Not really a reason now that I got that comment need out of my system.

8720808
No problem. I was confused about why I was following you so I went through your story list and found this and a few other stories that were either in my favorite or read later list. And I figured the previous comment might get chuckle.

8720860
You, sir, just explained, indirectly, why I keep losing followers (But gaining more).

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8720752
I shall help!
"Arise story arise"
"Arise story arise"

9853148
Hm. A ton of people seem to have read this, and it's got plenty of likes. I don't see it as a waste of time to resume it, then. Alright. Give me some time to try and remember the ending.

9853148
Do you REALLY want me to resume the story?

9854611
Yes, I do want you to resume the story. I enjoyed the first part of the story and I want to be able to enjoy the continuation of the story, but it is kind of hard to enjoy it without more to read for it.

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