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Gaylord The Decider


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Forest Star is just hanging out with his friends. He adores his friends and does his best to help them with their problems no matter what they are, yet when he does something so small that nopony cares because everypony else does it he hates himself and mentally beats himself up for it.

WARNING: some bad language and some gore are in this story.

*this is a self insert story*

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 8 )

Lets see here.

Title of story: Forest Star: The pony that cares and hates himself
Username: Forest Star
Mini bio: Silly me thinking everyone cares when really hardly anyone cares. Who wants me as a friend?...nobody, but then again I am nobody and nothing.
Story description: Forest Star is just hanging out with his friends. He adores his friends and does his best to help them with their problems no matter what they are, yet when he does something so small that nopony cares because everypony else does it he hates himself and mentally beats himself up for it. WARNING: some bad language and some gore are in this story.
Last chapter title:The End of Forest Star...or is it?

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OP. This just screams of being a self insert wish fulfillment story.

5825781 I wrote this story because I was depressed at the time. This is a self insert. so what?

So what happens to his relationshipd with the other ponies? you kinda left a lot of questions unanswered

5830002 Sorry about that. Basically I need to go back and answer those questions in the last chapter.

5830002 The questions have been answered in my update of the last chapter. It should be fine now. Let me know

5825781 Weather it does or not, no matter what the story is about, you should give it a chance. I'm sure he worked hard on this story. Not every pony is a great writer, but he posted his story for others to read. I think that is reason enough to give it a chance.

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