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The Hat Man


Specialties include comedy, robots, and precision strikes to your feelings. Hobbies include hat and watch collecting. May contain alcohol.

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Bulk Biceps is Ponyville's biggest, toughest pegasus. But all the YEAHs in the world can't save him from the humiliation of a butterfly phobia. But maybe a certain yellow pegasus can...

A tale of two ponies with opposite dispositions unfolds in this story about making new friends.

Submitted as an entry into the Everfree Northwest Convention's writing competition.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

Bulk Biceps' lack of an inside voice reminds me of... family. :twilightsmile:

That's my ship

5780752 Yeah, heh heh. We've got a lot of teachers in my family, including me, and we tend to address any group of people more than one WITH NO INDOOR VOICE.

...Sorry. Thanks for your comment!

Very creative story, and cute as a button, too. Thanks for writing!

5808416 Oh, well thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

This is adorable. Fantastic. 10/10

5907049 Oh man that is SCARY accurate.

5907049 that's pretty accurate

BULKSHY FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

I mean if that's OK with you:yay:

6743104 Ah this old story... I honestly am not entirely happy with it. I had a much more detailed version of this laid out, but I had to cut it down to meet the Contest requirements. Though, given what I know now, I think I could still do a better job on it than what it is now.

Still, glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! This was so funny!

6895617 Glad you enjoyed it!

This was a funny, yet super adorable little story! I'd LOVE to read some more stuff like this <3

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Ah, my first story on FiMfiction. I’m glad folks seem to like it, though I liked it better before I had to edit down to fit within 3000 words, the then max limit for the Everfree Northwest Contest.

Hee. This made me smile. A wonderful lil' story and a fun one! :yay:

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I'm glad you liked it. I personally feel like this story could have been considerably better, but I suppose it did what it was supposed to do. I just wish it hadn't originally had such a strict word limit, or else I could have included more from the original draft.

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That does seem like a limitation from the word...er, limit, yes. It could have benefited with a chapter at the games for Bulk and Flutters to bond further, along with Rainbow wondering just what their deal is. (Speaking of, I can't imagine how it would come up, but a real good test for him would be the butterfly wings Rarity had at one point. :trollestia: ) Still, for what limits WERE in place it's a wonderful work, and I enjoyed the interactions the two had together!

He stood up, overjoyed. “YEAH!” He saw her flinch. “Er… yay?” he ventured cautiously.

:yay:

This was a sweet little story and actually provided a great explanation for why Bulk was good enough to join the Reserves and help with the tornado, but then later visibly struggled with flying. Great interplay between him and Fluttershy, and a great sister moment from Rainbow and Scootaloo. Kudos!

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