• Published 18th May 2012
  • 24,615 Views, 200 Comments

After School Special - Your Antagonist



Curiosity is amidst in the hearts and minds of Ponyville's youth, yet it's anything but innocent.

Comments ( 36 )

kill it with fire

I'm trying to decide if those little poems are cute or creepy...


Sorry, I'm gonna go with creepy. Really, really creepy.

Being an Earth filly, it's understandable that Diamond Tiara would be stronger than the Unicorn colt, but I don't think Snips would be considered weak by unicolt standards. After all, he needs big strong legs to carry his big fat ass around.:ajsmug:

1397424 I'm in tears laughing my ass off:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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I am pleased to hear that.:pinkiehappy:

1398295 The hearts are a symbol you can access on google docs by clicking: Insert> Symbols> Game Pieces and locating the hearts symbol, there are two of them.

Foalcon, eh? Well, I've been dodging the subject for a while, but as I have tasked myself with reading whatever clop I find, no matter how questionable, I suppose I have to read some foalcon eventually. Let's see where this takes us!

*Tries to hop down the rabbit hole, but is way too fat and gets stuck instead*

... crap.

What next?
>Snails and Twist

...

NO GOD PLEASE NO. NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOO!

As much as I enjoy this well-written clop, I have to say that the sex scenes really could use more variety. The same elements are always there: It starts with oral, the guy ejaculates, the girl always spits it out, when they move on to vaginal the filly feels pain which immediately subsides and she insists they keep going, and the guy ejaculates again. (Artitstic license only goes so far; is every colt/dragon in Equestria naturally multi-orgasmic?)

Really, the author could stand to get a bit more creative. I had a far better imagination when I was that young. :pinkiegasp:

1407031 See, the thing is you make an interesting point but, it's irrelevant because of the story formats. and also because this is closer to actual 'first-time' sex, than most stories on the site are going to get you... except for the last one though. This also isn't the story to explore any fetishes, only the characters. So basically think of this as generic 'vanilla' clop with a character focus instead of a sexual focus, as a sort of training grounds for my kinkier stuff to come like: rape, s & m, M/M, F/F, tentacle, and so on. If you want something different check this one out

This is probably the highest-rated foalcon fic on the site right now, congrats! Awesome story, can't wait for more :heart:

Thank you for compiling this list!

Read the story, thought it was interesting (liked it a little less than Shutterbug and IGAGWCP) but what really caught me was the last sentence. You're shipping Silver Spoon and Snips together? Granted it'd be when they're older, but if he's SS's only... Are you planning on writing their story? (I know you've got other works going on, including the SilverBelle ship (which I am also a fan of(seriously it's great so far)) but is that something you'll do? A SnipsXSilver?)

These were dang good :pinkiehappy:

1818459 Yes! I grew up speaking English, but I still have a bit of French heritage from my mother.
Jusqu'à ce que nous nous reverrons
(Until we meet again)

Not as good as the last chapters...

I think I've seen this one before. Great job, never read the whole thing. :ajsmug:

SILVER SPOON YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO JOIN IN NOT SHY AWAY
:flutterrage:

That's sad. I always liked Silver Spoon more than DT.

This was funny and weird..... It was ruined in the last act :( But it was enjoyable all the same. Maybe Diamond Tiara isn't my fetish. Bit Ironic that she had no idea what was going on and had to rely on her minion to fill her in. Usually it is the other way around. I have a MAJOR weakness for CMC shipping.... I will LOVE them with anypony and was on edge with all the stories they were in. This reminded me of a Simpsons episode with a similar concept. It all happened on the same day but a different view point. That was one of the funnier episodes. Was that your inspiration or was it coincidence that you had it all happen simultaneously? I am starting to fall for Applebloom as well along with Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. Applebloom could rule the world if she wanted to.

WOW:pinkiegasp:just awsome dis is da bomb:pinkiehappy: you sir have made my day:twilightsmile:

You attack my brain with your stories........... I defy your logic with randomness... KuKuKu...

This story was fun, and you should feel fun! Really, nice job. Keep on keeping on. :heart:

omfg... I just remembered this series... you need to do more! maybe one with Twist or Babs.

he was still Diamond Tiara’s “first”. Incidentally, when that time in his life finally came, he could also proudly lay claim to the honor of having been Silver Spoon’s "only”.

Okay that last part is either-
A. REALLY REALLY SAD if Silver Spoon has had no other colt or filly in her life by he time he is a stallion.:pinkiesad2:
or
B. Really REALLY sweet if he is her one and only special somepony.:pinkiehappy:

Yay! Something to wrap up my stupendous evening! Went out for Korean with several old friends and now can enjoy these stories with alcohol and nicotine in my favorite lay-z boy

I just realized after reading it again, that neither Diamond nor Silver had a climax. Diamond got the pain of her virginity taken but never got to experience orgasm.:pinkiegasp:

Do you know what episode that vector is from?

5278766 Family Appreciation Day.

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I think we can safely assume that not only Snips was the the one that deflowered Silver Spoon, but Silver Spoon became Snips' special somepony. And I for one would be quite pleased with that; I get the feeling that Spoony is a lot nicer than she's usually protrayed. Snips may be the one that gave Spoony the confidence to call Tiara on her B.S. and tried to reform herself from being the follower of the alpha bitch to standing on her own four hooves.

6050205 yeah I like that synopsis for her life. Good one.:twilightsmile:

Incidentally, when that time in his life finally came, he could also proudly lay claim to the honor of having been Silver Spoon’s "only”.

God damn you really don't care anymore do you

7984992 No. All fucks are gone.

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