Ok ... so far I've only made it to chapter two, but judging by those two chapters I deduce you're about to end every chapter with a bomb like that ... NICE
“Son.” Featherweight’s father looked Featherweight directly in the eyes. "I just want to tell you—” his father looked left and right to ensure that the coast was clear from the lady of the house. “I’m proud of you son, and I’m sorry.”
Sounds like my father when I came house from my first dance at 2 am, he knew what I was doing.
Oh boy, this one was VERY cute! Awesome piece of work right here.
How'd you get the little hearts in there? Also, I loved the chapter
"Deal with it."
Ha!
-Delta-
Letter at the end has twentynine words not nineteen.
I commented on the single story before so I'm not repeating my praise.
Bronydragon
omgilovethissomuch!
Ponyville, where colts become stallions. *salutes*
That was surprisingly cute.
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I'm not sure how to feel about myself when I find this scenario cute........derp I guess
Nice work, ending was funny and adorable
Father of the year right there!
DEAL WITH IT.=
THAT TITLE IS SO OVERSHADOWING YOU HAVE NO IDEA
HUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHH
Ok ... so far I've only made it to chapter two, but judging by those two chapters I deduce you're about to end every chapter with a bomb like that ... NICE
Wait, did his father....to pictures of...?
OH SWEET CELESTIA!!!
5301092 What? That's basically what you've just done
5978068 TRUUUUU
Sounds like my father when I came house from my first dance at 2 am, he knew what I was doing.
SEX