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thechicken95


trying to be a voice of reason one comment at a time

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Most of the time people can change their fate. But, if a certain action is performed by a certain person at the right time, then their fate is sealed. Permanently. Twilight Sparkle is about to learn this the hard way.

On vacation visiting her brother, Twilight is left with a choice that will not only decide her fate, but the fate of Equestria.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Love this already and even though its stupid FIRST

Needs editing, but the story has promise.
:moustache:

Reviewed story for the Goodfic Bin. Since it hasn't gone far enough into the story for me to form an opinion and the grammar needs work, I'll be rejecting this for the moment.

Details are here. Call me when more is written.

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