Shiet its over...

That was a great story. It is a shame it ended it just so quick Still it was a great story I look forward to see what other stories will come.

a beautiful ending to this beautiful story
I hope to write more stories how are you in the future
thanks for creating one of the best fanfics I've read in my life
and good luck in your convention in Kansas

*sniff**sniff* I smell a potential sequel

Please write a sequel.

I'm so happy the new chapter is out but so sad it's over. THE CONFLICTED FEELS!

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After much consideration, I have decided that there will definitely be a sequel sometime in the near future.
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And thank you very much. The convention went extremely well and I had a lot of fun.

6014161 THANK YOU!

6014423 No need to thank me, friend. I was just as sad to see this story end as anyone else. I'm happy to write it's sequel and I hope you enjoy it.

6014161 that's amazing!
I can not wait to see

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Feels like something is ending!

VERY good

6043942 Why thank you.

And with the passing of this story I can truly say it lies with legends in its closing slumber. I loved this story start to finish bro and I think I quote a genius when I say this but I read every detail and I "regret absolutely nothing" lol please continue to be the great author I know you are destined to be and good luck in future endeavors I look forward to every one of them. But there is one unfinished that I will continue to harass you about untill it's complete...you know the one... *heavy breathing*...so goodnight and good luck.. And I still know where you live

After reading this story, I have to say, it made me so happy to see Adagio feel better after the battle of the bands. I'm glad I read this story and will be keeping an eye out for a sequel. Keep up the amazing work.

this story was incredibly cute and feelsy for porn. it started as shameless clop and ended in snuggles... awesome

I liked it.

6316887 I'm glad you did. Feel free to check out the sequel if you like, new chapter should be out any day now.

This is one of the best mlp story's that I have had the pleasure of reading and I hope u have more just like it it was sad that it had to end

You really teased me with what Adagio wanted to say. 'will you marry me?'
I really loved how they knew the story was coming to a close.
And the 'coming' jokes throughout the entire story.

The entire story was great altogether

I don't like endings either...

so doesn't regret ending the story.....

6738656 That's why there's a sequel.

subtle fourth wall break, clever clever

7541130 Well, now I kinda have to don't I?

yup, i wanna see a sequel to this, this story made me actually feel again. it's sooooo sweet i had to go to the dentist to make sure my teeth were ok, after i had stopped gushing over how good it was of course

7678066 I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The sequel so far is much longer than this one, but I think I've done a much better job with it so far. Please feel free to tell me what you think of it as well.

7678150 i will be sure to tell you, if it's anything like this one i have a prediction of how my reaction will go *clears throat*: i will cry, laugh, cry again, gush over how amazing it is, then comment about everything i just did while and after reading it

7678150 when would you say the sequel will be finished mr./ms. havok, cause i myself am dying of anticipation to read it, as im sure all of the others who have read this are as well

7678639 Well, what I have done so far is up. You can find it here. Also, thanks for not automatically assuming I'm a guy. I get 'sir'ed a little too often for my taste. But, I am not old enough to be a Ms. either, so just Havok is fine. The sequel is much longer and more serious than this story. Far less sex and much more drama, but I still hope you enjoy it.

7678667 sounds like an emotional roller coaster im gonna be on then, i will be sure to tune in for a sneak peek when i awake, cause im not kidding when i say this i have spent literally 12 hours reading your stories, they're just so good, and i wanted to see if the next one would be just a good and they were, sorry to gush, but you are a really good writer, so really all i gotta say is keep up the amazing work "just Havok"

YES! Loved this