very good chapter
I loved
I hope to see the continuation soon
you are very good writer

5773924 Why thank you. You have no idea how much that means to me.

5773930 seriously
really, you're very good

I think i have been reading to many tragedy romance story on this site but, I feel like something bad is about to happen . Anyway great Chapter and has Mixtle23 said you are a really good writer .

5775549 Well, I dunno. I guess you'll have to wait and see. And thank you very much, it always makes me feel better to know there are people who enjoy my writing.

You have very little nothing to regret. This story is amazing and I would be totally on board if there were like 10, 15 more chapters, or one that's up to you really, but still keep doing what your doing because you're great at what you do. Take these it's dangerous to go alone.

5787386 Well, thank you very much. It really means a lot to me to know people actually care about the stories I write. Also, originally the story was only going to be chapter one and chapter four, but I just can't stop. I like this story personally and I'm glad to know you do as well.

Man. If there's one cartoon character that's hot as a lesbian, it's sunset.

Also, I'm really enjoying this. Especially my lower half.

"You're only human." this is singularly, simultaneously, the cruelest and the kindest thing said in this chapter.
"I think I just made a bunch to show off." oh shit that's so adorable! (shame on you Sunset, your stomach shrank from being hungry all day!)
very sexy, very cute... I just imagine Pinkie Pie knowing exactly what happened 'cause they'll return the backpack unopened

Get some sleep

She opened her eyes to see Sunset Shimmer smiling down at her with a kind expression. "What's fur dinner?" Adagio asked, sleepily

Not sure if deliberate, or a typoed 'for'.

Otherwise, good story so far.

hi