While following the Rainbooms one night, Adagio Dazzle gets the show of a lifetime.
The, Fluttershy, girl sat on the edge of the bed
Shouldn't it be "The girl, Fluttershy, sat on the edge of the bed"? Over than that, good fic.
This sounds suspiciously similar to my fic.
5725251 I'm sorry. I've never read it.
5725143 Thank you for pointing out that mistake, I've fixed it now.
You have my attention.
The six girl sat in the front of the movie theater taking up half of the front row.
girls.
That's all I found.
6036766 Fixed
That...was......AWESOME!
huh, I never imagined any of the sirens being virgins considering how long they lived, but I suppose being immortal and having no appreciation for bodily things will do that for a person. hot and kind of sweet, very nice
Huh, that very last part got me by surprise. Alright, let's see where this goes!
Why do enyoy?
I found one that might have unfortunate implications...
She then sat up, still straddling Fluttershy's waste and slid her own shirt off.
Waist, right?
Shouldn't it be "The girl, Fluttershy, sat on the edge of the bed"? Over than that, good fic.
This sounds suspiciously similar to my fic.
5725251 I'm sorry. I've never read it.
5725143 Thank you for pointing out that mistake, I've fixed it now.
You have my attention.
girls.
That's all I found.
6036766 Fixed
That...was......AWESOME!
huh, I never imagined any of the sirens being virgins considering how long they lived, but I suppose being immortal and having no appreciation for bodily things will do that for a person. hot and kind of sweet, very nice
Huh, that very last part got me by surprise. Alright, let's see where this goes!
Why do enyoy?
I found one that might have unfortunate implications...
Waist, right?