5805081 you welcome. friend and your glad my day reading your fanfic I love so much this fanfic has lust, but simultaneously feeling I love that kind of fanfics I hope you can continue it soon, and if possible to do so more fanfics
The plausibility of the story suffers somewhat from every girl in story being in lesbians with another mane character AND having sex on the same night AND Adagio somehow always ending up watching them in one way or another, but it was a well written, well meaning and enjoyable story.
wait, why do Aria and Sonata know where Sunset lives? Adagio herself didn't even know. I'm surprised Sunset called them so soon, I expected them to drag it out a few more hours before pretending to have run into each other (or whatever) it's actually very endearing to read an inexperienced Adagio I have a nitpick or two... you seem really into the one-hand-in-hair/one-hand-in-sheets things, while this is totally realistic to sex and hot as hell, it seems a little played out that you had three separate sex scenes display this trend. secondly if Adagio is disappointed that it was fast, they should've just kept going - multiple orgasms, no refractory period and all still a fun read
VERY GOOD CHAPTER!!
I loved
I hope to see the continuation soon
Very good job, all
you are a good writer
5802829 Why thank you very much. I always appreciate your comments, they really make my day.
5805081 you welcome. friend
and your glad my day reading your fanfic
I love so much this fanfic
has lust, but simultaneously feeling
I love that kind of fanfics
I hope you can continue it soon, and if possible to do so more fanfics
Whahoo!! Sex baby!
The plausibility of the story suffers somewhat from every girl in story being in lesbians with another mane character AND having sex on the same night AND Adagio somehow always ending up watching them in one way or another, but it was a well written, well meaning and enjoyable story.
I would like some more please...
5816432 Glad to hear it. Hope I'm worthy of the attention.
Good. Fucking. Job.
I NEED MORE!
5816761 I'm on it... s.mlpforums.com/uploads/post_images/img-1741730-1-mlp%20my%20little%20pony%20meme%20bronies%20pinkie%20pie%20brain%20is%20full%20of%20fuck%20jackie%20chan.jpg
5817012 I know how that feels.
Keep this story going.
5888396 I intend to.
wait, why do Aria and Sonata know where Sunset lives? Adagio herself didn't even know. I'm surprised Sunset called them so soon, I expected them to drag it out a few more hours before pretending to have run into each other (or whatever)
it's actually very endearing to read an inexperienced Adagio
I have a nitpick or two... you seem really into the one-hand-in-hair/one-hand-in-sheets things, while this is totally realistic to sex and hot as hell, it seems a little played out that you had three separate sex scenes display this trend. secondly if Adagio is disappointed that it was fast, they should've just kept going - multiple orgasms, no refractory period and all
still a fun read
how many nothings do you regret???
This. Just this.
Have a moustache!
Nothing but lesbian sex.