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VitalSpark
Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.
VitalSpark
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Fun and action-y. I like the competitive vigor in the chapters so far, and this one has the bonus of some cute RumbleBloom flirting.
5849445 It seems I have a fetish for ponies pinning down ponies.
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It works best with an earth pony pinning down a pegasus though.
I'm considering a side story from their perspective.
Wow. Rodeos have always turned me on. This story is hot
5849495 omg I know that fetish, all too well
I see people commenting on an Applejack vs. Flitter chapter, but it doesn't appear to exist anymore
5875348 The comments are from pre-readers. The Applejack vs Flitter chapter will be formally published tomorrow, and there are two more lined up to be published in quick succession after that!
5875356 Ohhh, gotcha! Thanks
Loving this so far.
Part of me was hoping that there would be some form of punishment for the loser.
I do have to say the pair ups are refreshing, not just the same tired old pairings we've seen a million times.
So I'm assuming this is like a tournament bracket? how many matches are in the first bracket?
5875396 These are the initial ponies in the contest:
1. Rainbow Dash
2. Applejack
3. Twilight Sparkle
4. Pinkie Pie
5. Rarity
6. Fluttershy
7. Vinyl Scratch a.k.a. DJ-PON3
8. Apple Fritter
9. Cloudchaser
10. Lyra
11. Minuette a.k.a. Colgate
12. Amethyst Star a.k.a. Sparkler
13. Sweetie Drops a.k.a. Bon Bon
14. Cheerilee
15. Flitter
16. Coco Pommel
That's in "seed" order. Like in tennis tournaments, in the first round the #1 seed is paired against #16, #2 is paired against #15, #3 against #14, etc.
Although the first two chapters do happen to be the Rainbow Dash and Applejack chapters, don't expect the rest of the first round to be published in any particular order — I'm mostly going by the order I receive them from the contributors.
The next round will be the quarter finals, and even I don't know for sure which ponies will be in it! Although I've instructed some of the writers who should win their pairings, I haven't done that in all cases.
5875451 So how are the pairings in the upper bracket decided? Will Rainbow Dash be going up against whoever wins the AJ VS. Flitter match because it is next or will the order be decided once the first round is over?
5875519 It will use these rules, without reseeding. So the pony you mentioned will be going up against either Apple Fritter or Cloudchaser. This is because it's silly to allow two highly seeded individuals to meet at an early stage, knocking one of them out.
I bet Flitters will win. Applejack will put up a fight but still.
5875585 Flitter's seeded 15th in the contest. Those are long odds you're betting on.
5875625 I could see Flitter being really kinky with that bow. I'm putting my money on her.
Still a bit confused for the quarter final pair ups. So Rainbow Dash will go up against Fritter or Cloudchaser and Applejack is going up against Vinyl or Lyra?
I still wish their was a punishment for the loser. Nothing severe like "Now you are a sex slave. MUHUHAHAHA!" but at least something. Like the winner gets to come up with one herself that the judges approve or pick from a list like public spanking, forced to dress in humiliating outfits, etc. It would make the competition have more weight to it as opposed to just "aww I don't get the title"
Also why are they allowed to wear accessories to battle? You can't use toys but something that can be used as bondage equipment can be used? Seems a bit off.
I'm not sure how interesting the foalcon one would be if you exclude the CMC from it for being markless. They are the ones I specifically want to see, especially if they get paired with Diamond Tiara or Silver Spoon.
5875709 Yes, you are correct in your quarter final line-ups.
You are thinking with the wrong body part.
But basically because it's a collab and the authors have mostly been working without having seen each other's chapters, the set-up and rules are intentionally rather vague and will probably be applied inconsistently. Blame any inconsistencies on Cadence being distracted by what Shining Armor is doing under her desk.
Some readers and writers take a cutie mark as a sign of coming of age, and the difference between writing about a child and writing about an adolescent. So the out-of-universe explanation is that I thought it might increase volunteers to write the chapters. I do already have some volunteers, but not enough.
The other part of the explanation is that I think the CMC get quite a lot of attention on this site already, and there are some really cute background fillies that have hardly any stories written about them.
That said, because they're excluded from the competition, doesn't mean they're excluded from the stories. I'd be open to publishing bonus chapters along the way covering, say, how a pony decided to celebrate their victory, or how a loser was so upset that they went out, got drunk, and banged a load of stallions, or providing some back story on how a contestant trained for the contest, or even how two audience members got so turned on watching that they decided to run off and try out some of the things they saw for themselves.
If you have an idea and want to contribute, just PM me. This goes for either the adult or foal version.
*coughs* I *am* working on my chapter, honest. I've gotten up to the part where the actual contest starts, and trying to keep it a little different from other entries that have been read thus far.
Trying to decide if I should read. If I do, I will either hate it, or write for it, both of which will cause me problems. ARG! For now, on my read later.
When did Applejack turn into Blossomforth?
Anyways, so my thoughts. Well, first off, this sets up a world where this has been going on for fourteen years, so while I still HIGHLY disagree with Fluttershy doing something like this, I can see how it is plausible given the setting, which is astronomically better then what another story I've read that was this shameless of clop did. And that one had probably a collective follower count of over 5k, at least.
However, they had writing ability, and Ragabash doesn't, while Vital, you were decent. However, though Ragabash suffered from grammar and spelling, Vital, you suffered from focus. Splitting up the sex with the random chat between Rumble and AB throws the person out of what they're here for, which is the clop. My suggestion would have been to make their whole conversation at the end, so Rumble speaks to her while she is excited and therefore also distracted.
I do kind of like the premise, but I do think the writing is why it got so much negative response and therefore why it will unfortunately stay fairly anonymous for the moment. However, like I said, I did like it decently enough and am a sucker for collaberation. Expect my PM soon.
Also, if you get past the few awkward decisions and eh writing grammar wise, it is good. The clop is hot enough and able to be understood to a degree where you can enjoy the mindlessness of it without entirely shutting your brain off.
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Twelve actually.
I absolutely agree. In earlier drafts it was worse, with the two narratives being even more mixed, but I now see I didn't do enough to improve it. I'll re-edit immediately!
Zecora VS Derpy
I really like it when clopfics are turned into a game, whether its a choose your own adventure or a competition like this. Makes things a lot more interesting.
5881333 Derpy would win. Zecora has a 'muffin' and that mailmare would stop at nothing to eat it!
5877223
Yep, 12.
Year 0: First Biennial, etc.
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Year 2: Second Biennial.
Year 4: Third Biennial, wherein a minor scandal disrupts things when one of the competitors drops out on the eve of the finals. (Future chapter. Assuming it's not edited out before that gets posted.
Year 6: Fourth
Year 8: Fifth.
Year 10: Sixth, Twilight Sparkle takes the title.
Year 12: Our story begins!
If you need more writers for these or the Jr's competition later, I'd be willing to write some. Just let me know which ones to write.
Just by reading the title I want to smack my forehead and laugh. I'll be sure to read this later.
Will all of these stories be female/female?
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Yes. As per the prologue:
Keep it coming. These are pure gold.
Um... I agreed to be in this a while back on the grounds that it would be completed...
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It's not cancelled. It's just going slowly.
Yup. Definitely slow... a whole three years slow. You should probably get a new calendar.
But seriously, is there a reason you never finished this?
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seem VitalSpark was banned so seems this will never be complete