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Spirit Shift

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Crepusculo
Crepusculo #3 · Feb 15th, 2015 · · ·
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Funny with a good dose of Coco cuteness 10/10 good author!

Pinkacalypse
Pinkacalypse #4 · Feb 15th, 2015 · · ·
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The story being Rated teen kinda made it obvious that nothing too bad was gunna happen. So that left the story a tad predictable, it was still ok though.

Spirit Shift
Spirit Shift #5 · Feb 15th, 2015 · · ·
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5626858 Well that was mainly me just not wanting to have a mature rated story on my page. But let's see what happens if I change the rating.

Pinkacalypse
Pinkacalypse #6 · Feb 15th, 2015 · · ·
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5626941 Lol ya, probably would've tricked me if it was M rated :rainbowlaugh:.

Imperator Knoedel
Imperator Knoedel #7 · Feb 15th, 2015 · · ·
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Dash had finally slowed her her laughter, and was working herself upright;

Superfluous her, apart from that this was perfect. :rainbowlaugh:

LightningSword
LightningSword #8 · Feb 15th, 2015 · · ·
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Always happy to help give the Pride Lands her new cub, Spirit. :raritywink:

Discorded SheepcityUSA
Discorded SheepcityUSA #9 · Feb 16th, 2015 · · ·
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This has to be one of the greatest things I've ever read. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

howard035
howard035 #10 · Feb 17th, 2015 · · ·
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Awesome. This feels like that Game Grumps clip where one of them storms off. I was really worried this would turn into a big CocoxSun pivot for the narrative, but it's just blushing marshmallow instead. :raritydespair:

Pink Rocket
Pink Rocket #11 · Feb 20th, 2015 · · ·
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Was kind of hoping for this, out of hilarity.
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Oh well, still cute.

Noctus Umbra
Noctus Umbra #12 · Mar 25th, 2015 · · ·
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There was a moment of silence before Coco’s response. “W-well. Every girl uses a different one. Mine is rather small and easy to use. I guess that Rarity likes the big ones.”
“My word! Big what’s? Please don’t let them be talking about… that!
Sunset hummed. “Interesting… should we use it?”
“S-Sunset no! We couldn’t! It’s Rarity’s… also…” Rarity had to strain her ears to hear the shy girls next line. “It might not be clean,” she whispered.
“Why wouldn’t it be clean?” asked Sunset.
“Well… it looks old and there might be some blood on it from Rarity’s first time.”

sewing machine? :trixieshiftright:

“And as it turns out, all they'd been doing was finishing the dresses for me,” Rarity finished telling the story, “They'd found a spare roll of silk and used my largest needles for the hemming and other such things.

eh, close enough. :trollestia:

lazyreader19
lazyreader19 #13 · Aug 6th, 2015 · · ·
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Coco blushed, much like she had a week before, but she was clearly smiling this time, “Maybe she just needs to get laid.”

Oh my sides! X'D

5646457 that also would have been hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

Emperor
Emperor #14 · Sep 16th, 2015 · · ·
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I expected a trollfic, and I got one.

Saying that, it doesn't help that some of Coco and Sunset's choices of word certainly would be suspect unless they were deliberately trying to create that impression for an eavesdropping Rarity :pinkiesmile:

Spirit Shift
Spirit Shift #15 · Feb 9th, 2016 · · ·
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5637610 I dunno, bro, Valentines day is coming up again... I might have something more genuine planned.

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