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Sir Hat


Done.

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Sooo... Sweetie Belle is a Filly Fooler, and she's coming to visit. Glad to see that York has gotten past the being with a pony. It's more about being with the one you love. It's obvious there's feelings he has about her.

Well, this shall be fun.

Whenever I see the name "Caleb," I immediately think of The Giver. I prefer York.

Huh. Babs experimented with Sweetie Belle? Seems legit.

Now, let's see what these two get up to... assuming they can work past the hangover.

Always knew she was a tank

Fukken yusss! Thank you, you glorious bastard! I could kiss you (through the glass, no homo)!

I have never seen an author deliver on a sequel as quickly as you have. Thank you.

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I don't care if someone comes and kicks my ass the next day, just make it happen.

Welp, sounds like someone's gettin' an ass whooping.

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And as we can see here, when the York is startled it hides behind its natural protection of a mare. This particular specimen is exceptionally strong, and able to keep the York healthy and strong.

Y: "HEY FUCKER, WANNA FIGHT!?"

Fucker: "YES!"

Y: "Oh shit...Babs!? Babs help!"

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Truly, a fascinating example of symbiosis.

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Truly. A lot of fun writing Babs and York though, one's a boxer, the other is a singer, both of them are teens, it's all fun.

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You forgot about how they're both absolute ruffians!
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But boy, do I love their sass.

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BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA--BSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

*explosion*

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More pony, and 100% less cauliflower ear.

... I can't do it man. I'm uncomfortable at drawing for clopfics and I can't think of anything for your babs fic. :raritydespair:

Noice. Babs is the kind of girl I like. Tomboy that can be sweet and girly if she feels like it.
Bring more. :yay:

Well, there's a newscaster who'll never work in this town again. At least, not in front of a camera. Or so I assume.

Also, I do love how you made the show exist in this reality. And called it "Twilight Time." I'm sure that went over great with Rainbow Dash.

Still, I have to wonder how Sweetie's handling the snow...

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the herd will always find a way.
DONT DOUBT THE HERD.

cool chapter, amazing idea on holding babs off from hitting the peak, I like the creator's creativity.

Comment posted by killa_beez14 deleted Feb 18th, 2015

Well, with the narrator possibly concussed, it's no wonder this chapter ended early. I do feel kind of bad for the yellow pony, though.

That yellow pony must have one hell of a kick.

lol too bad the chapter was so short, I can't wait for the next one!

when is this thing going to update? im getting soo impatient

It's like York has ADD or something.

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He's just a dumb teenage shithead. Sadly his mouth runs about ten miles ahead of what he can actually do.

good latest chapter, can't wait 'til the next one to read what happens.

so this chapter was him just going whats on the menu? Cause i would like this...PLEASE? (i cant believe i post up a please update and within 24 hours the same story updates i feel like i should be cocky but im just glad the story updated at all and didnt fall into LIMBO of the unupdated)

Is he high?

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Stircrazy and painkillered. Fucking bashed his nose earlier. That, and this chapter wasn't even supposed to come out, but I figured it couldn't hurt.

5804385 well than I have to aks are you high?

What? Best filly can't be replaced!

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Best filly got fucking hijacked! :raritydespair:
By fucking marshmallow filly too! :unsuresweetie:

Damn, Sweetie, you got scary.

This is certainly an unexpected direction, and I'm very intrigued. How much time has passed? What does Babs think happened? Is that actually Sweetie, and if so, when did her moral compass start pointing due Bitch?

You have left me wanting more. That's always a good sign.

My first reaction to seeing the chapter title was "Finally".

Now...I just don't know what to say. Oh wait, maybe this would work:

"What the fuck just happened?"

I need answers!

Fuck, there's some serious shit going down.
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I would like to know more.

Mindfuckery My least favorite kind of fuckery. (BAD BEST CMC BAD)

so confused right now...like was it all a dream? age jump? alternate reality? And how can you make sweetie belle a bitch man? out from the left field with that one (did greatly enjoy it though)

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Basically York got put into a walking coma while Sweetie did what she wanted. It'll be explained, just give me a bit.

that was... weird, to say the least.

whoa... Im looking forward to what's to come in the sequel!

5879315 why doesnt the sequel exist?

5915163 well fuck i loved a bunch of your stories and the readers and staff are driving you away

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More a few of the staff....

My readers can be dicks, but they don't really hold too much sway.

5915186 well i for 1 am gonna miss your clopfic writing and stories they were so hot

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Man, that link floating around is gonna have everything I write. Space porn, dragon porn, porn porn, whatever.

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