David and Spitfire are dragged into the war between Equestria and the Gryphon Empire. With a filly back home, both Dave and Spitfire must do whatever it takes to get home and keep their child safe, even if they have to give their life to do so.
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Spitfire down already. I just died a little inside.
It never said she died though
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>> ThatGuyReadingYourFic, Sees what you did there
She better not be dead or hell and brimstone shal rain down upon you dear author
You named the human "Taylor" from your "bon bons lament" story, this human is "David"
That is the ONLY mistake I can find.
But I have to say...DAMN YOU FOR WRITING THINGS THAT HITS MY "FEELS" BUTTON SO HARD THAT MY EYES WANT TO WATER UP BUT I FIGHT IT SO HARD THAT MY EYES BURN!!!!!¡I!!!!
Still love the story though
BUT THE BURNING IS STRONG!¡i
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Fixed that. Got caught up between the two stories.
I love pushing the feels button on people. It appears to be a special talent of my writing both here and elsewhere.
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I can tell
Category 5
Bon bons lament
Wake of destruction
They all hit the feels button like a "street fighter" button masher.
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What the hay man the princesses should have a rule about no couples with kids together on the front lines. Also where's rainbowdash she's a wonderbolt to, well reserves anyway.
Why is this on hiatus? WHY?
Lay down ; try not to cry ; cry a lot
I just died a little when she was shot
Wait, this isn't in line with the ' lament' series, is it? Because I thought Applejack was with that Jake guy
OOOOOHH NOOOO WHY IS THIS IS ON HIATUS!!!??? WHHYYYY!!!!???
When will the next one be out and dose spitfire dies
Oh man this is just getting bad I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter keep up the good work man hope Spitfire survives this though
Been almost a year I'd like to know what happened.
When is the next chapter? :) I need more :)
Any info on the hiatus??