Best way to end the old year and begin the new one!

Happy 2019 my friend and I hope a sequel of this comes soon!!

Aww sweet way to end the year!

alt tittle "give those bitches a bone"

Nice. It is good to see this finished. A... "Unique" relationship like this is quite sweet in its own sick twisted way xD Thanks.

Great ending to a great story. Feeling kind of sad that it's finally wrapped up, but all good things come to and end.

My only thought is: Why after such a long time with Roxy would I still be acting like a little bitch? I'm fucking, fighting and living with a Diamond Dog Alpha who is whipping me into shape. I've fucked her multiple times, I knocked her up, why would I be embarrassed at seeing and sucking on her tits?

Roxy was a great character and this was fun to read, but it doesn't feel like "my" own "character" grew at all over the course of this fic. I just took it like a bitch the entire time.

Apart from that, it was pretty decent.

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Nah, this wasn't even supposed to be more the one chapter XD

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Nice and simple ending :P

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Would that be an alt title? XD

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Over all it works out in the end

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Yeah, and I felt like I had been dragging it on too long.

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I didn't want it to be just a: Roxy is a bitch then does a 180 and become super nice and submissive wife who will service my mate and be a good mother.
But I decided to make it so she has changed but not 100%. More like a 90.

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Okay, well thanks for making it, either way, there aren't that many diamond dog stories out there.

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That is one of the reasons I wrote this XD

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Oh, I never expected Roxy to do a 180. Her character was exposed and developed over time. Even at the end she is different that at the beginning. However you did miss one thing on my post:

Roxy was a great character and this was fun to read, but it doesn't feel like "my" own "character" grew at all over the course of this fic. I just took it like a bitch the entire time.

"I" never changed. Roxy clearly wants a mate as powerful and as dominant as she and her kind are. Being with that over time would have you adapt to that or she'd keep you as a sex object. She changed with me and made me her mate, but I never changed with her. A better arc for myself is that I would start out weak and helpless, something she would despise and I would end up being her sex toy like the beginning. Over the course of the fic you'd start seeing some changes. Yes she is still dominant and over the time she can show her slightly more affectionate side because I earned it. That way you see me rise above ponies and become somewhat of her equal, something she could be proud of having as a mate. However at this point it just feels... off.

Roxy can still be powerful, with a mate that is powerful in his own way and shows way less weaknesses over time. I very much HIGHLY recommend reading "Her Most Faithful Servant" by Flutterpriest for a good example. He raises a very weak and submissive Anon being dominated by Celestia to become a stronger individual. Doggy Style could have greatly benefited the human becoming less "weak" like a Pony and being "stronger" like a Diamond Dog. Maybe not in the traditional sense that Diamond Dogs see it, and maybe when he's made that change over time, Roxy could see that there is more than one way of being strong, like being a better leader. Both of them change and have full arcs.

Remember on your next fics that BOTH characters and their dynamics will change. THIS IS NOT me hating on the fic or saying the fic is shit. It isn't. However, I believe that everyone who has potential can have their ass kicked a little bit and be shown what could be a better idea. I can't tell you how many times I have had ideas for my fic and upon discussion with other people, changed them to be BETTER either next time around or just plain getting better plot points.

You're a good author, and I am extremely impressed you didn't let this fic straight up fucking die like 99.99% of the rest of the authors on this site, especially after 3 years.

Keep going. Keep getting better. Keep learning. Keep writing about that sweet, delicious aaaaaasssssssssssssss

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Oh the reader. It is hard to develop a second person story if it is suppose to be you with making them too different from when it started.

But I do understand where you are coming from, want both of them to develop and the reader didn't seem to develop much.

Very well done! Loved the story! Great job!

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Thank! Glad you enjoyed it :D

That was some top-tier waifu smut, I tell you what.

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Thank you!

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Anytime.

Nice story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Still hate doormate male characters!

This was not only a damn good clopfic, but also a good romance story too.

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Thank you!

I honestly want to see these kids grow up

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That could be an entire story of it's own.

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(I know I am late XD)

Trust me things are different later on with that. Just didn't bother writing it.

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Dude thanks for writing one of my most favorite stories and wank material

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I am glad people enjoyed it as much as they did, it started off as a one off story and it blew up way more then I expected it to.

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I know it’s been a few years since you posted the story but is there a chance you’re planning on making a sequel or can’t make a sequel to the story about there kids a bit older

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Don't have any plans for a squeal, but I do have alt universe ideas of doing similar things with other none pony characters (Dragon, Griffins etc.)

And possibly even a rewrite but got other stuff before that.

Please let there be a sequel

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Thinking of a spin-off in a similar world with another creature like dragon griffons and either more ass or different part of the body.

That was great I wish there were more diamond dog fanfics like this

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There are so very few. I felt the need to fill the gap at the time of writing this after seeing some art (the cover) back in the day.

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I know there not much and the ones thats are on this website are either short 4k fanfics or not complete and its good you did now there is atleast one long 22k fanfic

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This story wasn't even meant to be that long. It was suppose to stay a oneshot, but people loved it enough decided to keep writing it. The first chapter is still the best imo.

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Yeah thats good and glad you kept writing it and my favorite part was when she become submissive and started loving him

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Happy you enjoyed it :D Thank you so much for enjoying the full thing, makes all the additional chapters worth it.

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No problem keep up the good writing