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MasterBrony Forever


Hey! I writer anything with my favorite characters, Spike, Ember, Smolder, Discord, Fizzle, Garble...that is most of works and coming works.

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This is an awesome story!!! I hope you in a way continue it! I do love ember x spike fics! They are my #1 mlp ship

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Hey I am glad you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:
We aren't sure how we would keep it going but we do have others ideas we are tossing around.

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Wither you wish to or not it is all up to you :pinkiehappy:
I cant wait to read more of your fics and i do hope you more great ember x spike fic when you can^^

You know, I thought I knew exactly where this was going because I've seen this before. Spike goes mad with power after "awakened dragon instincts," becomes an asshole, and is the new ruler of the Dragons. Typical stuff, really.

Only... you didn't. You kept him in character at the end. His first instinct is to give the power back to Ember. And on top of it all, the sex was hawt.

Great job! :twilightsmile:

If there was a sequel, would you include Smolder?

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In this stories Universe, maybe. But we recently did another with Smolder involved so won't jump to her again for a bit currently.

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We honestly take so long writing trying to keep characters together within reason. And Longer stories we make the changes seem more reasonable. If we can.

Very nice! Great job and very well done!:moustache:

I Hope there will be a Sequel

Great story, hope to see a sequel with more of this Dom/Sub relationship.

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It seems like people really want a squeal to this story :twilightsheepish:

What if Spike unlocks the Bloodstone Scepter's Power of Submission and use that on other ladies?

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Well it gives him complete control over dragons so he pretty much has it unlocked by default XD

This was awesome and sweet can you add to his female herd like Smolder in a sequel.

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But if he modify it to do other creatures......

This was a great story. I hope if you make another one, that Smolder will join Spike this time.

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Lots of people have been asking for it lol XD With Smolder exactly.

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Don't think he would need to. Has just natural sex appeal :moustache:

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Not the first to request it lol but maybe another shall be done at this rate.

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He should prove it.

First, you get the sceptre, then you get power and then.... you get the scalie waifu. :pinkiecrazy:

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Step 1: Scepter
Step 2: ....
Step 3: Profit (Sex and a Waifu)

Reading along, then suddenly, clothing! Oh.

So, I'd put a mention in the very first paragraph of her pulling the scepter out of a loop on her pants or something, so we wouldn't have to retcon all the visualization. Especially since the art hasn't got them wearing anything (though that's hardly an inconsistency, just an untaken opportunity for it to have been established)

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Well it is anthro, didn't think it was important to mention it until they met up seeing as they were going to be admire each other anyways.

“Nope! Not gonna happen...” He said, hiding his blush as he looked away, “I am never gonna command war or... demand... sex... of someone without their consent! I mean, I can’t even imagine having that sort of power, to just be able to say, ‘Ember, I command you to suck my cock,’ and you being forced to do it!”

Spike.... You just said it. :rainbowlaugh:

makes em wonder how absolute the scepters orders are and just what spike can order.

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Rather powerful could do more with it honestly or even do something about the power and origins.

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have to wonder if spike could alter someones body through orders, change age, gender, etc etc. just a curiosity.

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I wouldn't do that far lol physical changes would be far too much even in a land of magical creatures. At this for this stories focus.

Glad I finally read this. This was great.

God imagine the converstaion spike going to have with twilight
"Hi, twi, yeah I'm not coming home. Been made full dargon lord until we find away to transfer the power again. Oh yeah on a side note your going to be an Aunt again. Bye"

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That would be an interesting conversation. :trollestia:

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Now imagine the conversation between ember, spike, and ember's dad torch.

That will be interesting.

That's not mentioning how garble will take it.

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Well thing is if Spike freaks out he could command Torch to not kill him or to accept him, but he would be more nervous unless torch in proud to have Spike take over after hearing his exploits could go two different ways.

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Ok that makes sense. Now I'm wondering how the other alicorns will react. I don't expect much of a reaction from Luna but both Celestia and Cadance would freak out. Maybe shining armor can calm down his wife or join in. I bet that would be funny to watch.

I would love to see this turn into a full blown sequel of stories And I even have sone ideas that can help with it

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I would love to do more with this premise and I have ideas for at least 1 sequel just wouldn't know what to do after that so it would end after the second story if I ever do one.

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I can help with the other sequels as I am so many ideas and maybe I can throw in some ideas from things that I want to do for stories but never get around to writing at all

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Thanks for the offer but I am all good. Already have too many ideas of my own as well.

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Ok but let me know if you need any ideas I will be goad to help

This was a awesome reread I hope he stays the Dragon lord forever.

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Thanks! I am happy you enjoyed the story.

I wonder how Twilight will feel about this.

Hopefully Spike will still be in Twilight's life. Even as a distant friend and sibling ruling another country.

Comment posted by lunaishot deleted Nov 30th, 2022

This was a fun read :) You have the makings of a full story line here; intrigue, drama, and shenanigans.

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I am glad you like it! Hoping to do more with it.

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I personally would love to see a sequal with spike staying as lord and ember being completly submissive to him

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We are considering a sequel but we are trying to work out the details of it.

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