Discord strolls around Ponyville before his visit to Fluttershy's cottage. Discord isn't exactly a pony easy to befriend, but ponies are quite rude to him. He wants to gain a mare friend to fill the gap in his heart, little does he know, he already found her. -Takes place after Keep Calm and Flutter On
Calm yourself, sex tag is just a reference, not actual stuff!
Wow that shop keeper seem suicidal. It's like he wasn't aware that he talk to the creature that turned their town into Wonderland few months earlier. And on top of that he dominated him xD
5454730 Haha yeah xD Guess Fluttershy turned him soft huh xD
Um...
Lord. Of. Chaos. He. Can. Teleport.
Was he just procrastinating? Also:
Lord. Or. Chaos. He. Can. Conjure. Up. Anything. He. Wants.
This one, I kinda get: he was putting effort in and physically buying it for her, to show her she's worth his time
Anyway. I like this story, and it's good on a first-fanfic basis. Keep it up
Dislestia?
I hope so
Dawww! So cute!
5459941 Haha yeah, the gift Idea I wanted him to put effort in it
Also, I just re-read your comment, thanks for the support!
5459975 You'll see next chapter!
That image is so funny
5460981 Okay then!
I personally like the chapter title.
Also, Alicorn? How long ago was this?
And I thought u said Twilight was a unicorn. If so, then how can she be the princess of friendship? That doesn't come until the end of season four an this is still season three!
U should change it to something like 'she does study friendship 24/7, after all'
I'm just trying to help but overall I think this has great potential.
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Actually she become an Alicorn AND a Princess in the end of Season 3. Season 4 just gave her a castle.
5454730 Yes, but she only officially became the princess of friendship at the end of season 4.
And both Fluttershy and Twilight refer to her as a unicorn
5462568 Ill change that right now! Thanks for that correction And the Alicorn part takes place before Celestia and Luna's rule.
Also, this doesn't take right after the Keep Calm and Flutter On, but i understand why you say that. I should change the time period that has passed by a few months. Thanks for the help
5463742 it's no problem
wow. Discord really is old
Really good so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! I FLUTTERCORD
By the way, if you need help editing, I'd love to! PM me if so! I may not be the most qualified, seeing I've not even finished my first story, but I think it would better help me learn and improve your story! It's a win-win!
I love this story so far
WHY ISN'T THERE ANOTHER CHAPTER...
WHY...JUST WHY...
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Im sorry! I've been busy lately, working on it right now!
5650553 yes! *hoof pump*
I love this Fanfic so far (sorry if im late)
next chapter please
Are you continuing?