"Rarity, she changed."
Pinkie Pie, the pony everyone loved, had a problem. But not any kind of normal problem. She had a murder problem
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Pinkie's and Twilight's transformasion to crazy killer is extremely forced and I am pretty sure that Pinkie and Twilight would say no and attack Rarity.
Well that was a fucking chapter.
I love that dialogue. I mean, obvious trollfic is obvious, but I laughed my ass off at how much it sounded like lines from The Room.
Oh my god, this one's even shorter.
I laughed so hard at this fucking story.
Oh my god...
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Imagine, like, David Caruso reading the synopsis.
What I love most is the sheer amount of effort put into making it look convincing. The cover art, for example.
5452099 great now I can't stop watching JonTron videos.
And the spiral into insanity begins.
The horror! Pinkie, run! Rarity turned into Lord Voldemort!
Fluttershy can be so stupid sometimes, I swear. Helping a friend? Come on now. There's a murderer out there! Way worse than a god of chaos.
The suspense is killing me.
I knew it. Rarity confirmed for Tom Riddle.
Le gasp! What a twist!
To be continued [youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GhMvKv4GX5U]
And then, Twilight knew.
Does the name of ED WOOD come to mind?
LOOK that name up please. . .
This may have been the
worstbest story I've ever read on this site.10/10
I cannot tell if this is supposed to be satirical, troll bait, or sincere. If it's satirical, try not just satirizing short chapters. If it's troll bait, it didn't get me angry. If it's sincere… try again when you're a better author.
Almost all the chapters are less than 100 words. This should be fun...
Chapter 1
Applejack
Yes, because that is totally how a news reporter is supposed to relay information.
Chapter 2
Does this mean Rarity is a vampire/vampony/whatever ya call it?
Chapter 3
Why isn't this marked comedy?!
Chapter 4
What a lovely little rhyme you have there.
Chapter 5
Nothing like a game of Would You Rather between two best friends.
Chapter 6
Does that mean Pinkie was a serial killer as a child?
Chapter 7
Yes, Twilight, because you were oh so willing to help Pinkie out earlier.
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
YOU AREN'T EVEN SPELLING HER NAME RIGHT!!!
Chapter 10
I got nothin'.
Chapter 11
So that's what happens when Twilight doesn't have Spike around to keep her in check.
Chapter 12
You're into some... interesting activities, Applejack.
I am convinced this is a troll fic, and it was most glorious for it. Especially Chapter 3.
On the off chance that this isn't a trollfic, I apologize for possibly offending you, but you really need to work on your writing skills.5452153 Fucking good.
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Witness the truth, see the glory that be!
THE NAME IS A LIE! :V
I think this is right up there with all the greats. "No John, you are the demons", "distoy us all the bad guys", that sort of thing.
Please, anybody, upvote this story. This is gold.
I read this, I commented, I proceeded with my day. Then, I remembered something.
This may sound graphic, but has anyone else heard of Peter Kürten?
Say hello to my little friend!
I can sympathize with Twilight here.
Feels for days.
It was hard to say no, I guess.
10/10 Twas good. -IGN
Clam down?
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Cheerlee... words cannot......
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My story with 3,000 words in the first chapter didn't pass moderation because, "There are to many jokes."
And after a moderator tells me this, I like to come look at stories like this and think, Oh, where did my faith in my fandom go? Oh wait, it died.
[EDIT:] I'm not saying this story is bad, it's pure gold, but it bothers me that this is okay and my shit isn't.
6759260 I could believe it. I once had a story fail moderation because I indented the paragraphs like a real book instead of putting a space between them.
No one's gonna look for her? Not even any of the ponies who can fly and have magic to defend them? Sure, for the others, like, what the heck guys, what kind of friends are you, but Twilight? That's low.
Pinkie Pie.
Is she a vampire? What the heck is going on? Why is she acting like this?
There is never a bad time for rhyme!
Pinkie Pie, why didn't you listen to Twilight? Or, you know, ALL OF STINKING EQUESTRIA'S WARNINGS! 
Pinkie Pie's all ready halfway to, um, that:
Rarity took her teleportation powers and probably the others too! Pinkie Pie, please don't turn on your friends like that. I will rage quit like I almost did with the "No, we don't feel like saving our friend from death." 
You deserve revenge. "No, I really don't feel like saving Pinkie Pie from a vicious murderer."
Oh sure, NOW you're going to save her.
Guess who?
Please, not Twilight, this is getting ridiculous.
I vote
goes crazy next.
I stand corrected. But really? This is getting crazy.
What!? THATS IT?!!! Few! These ponies acting way out of character! But I kinda wanted to see:
KKKKIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!