Kicks, Slices, and Stripes! The Vine Lady of the Everfree
A warning sign stood firmly planted in front of the pair, a miles away from a bizarre orchard of darkening trees seen from the distance. The crudely carved piece of wood showed that whoever made it had run off in fear of whatever was residing in the forest. Even though the sign looked old, it looked like it held the same, great amount of significance.
‘Danger ahead: Everfree Forest. Keep out.’ it read in sluggish and hurried handwriting, the ink splattered over some of the words making them somewhat harder to read, with bits of ink and wood scattered near it on the ground. It held a torn up, large yellow danger poster, covering the middle section, along with sketches of several kinds of strange beasts none of them had ever seen.
Zoro couldn’t help but grin slightly at the unknown terror. “Everfree Forest, hmm?” he asked nobody in particular, cocking an eyebrow at the trees. He could sense a malicious presence within the vicinity, possibly coming from said forest. It was a small presence, microscopic, but the many years he spent at sea taught him never to underestimate an opponent, no matter the odds. Although he always loved a good battle.
“You know, for such a creepy looking forrest it’s got a ridiculous name,” Sanji stated bitterly, flicking the butt of his worn out cigarette, fetching a new one from his pack and lighting it, never breaking contact with the sign. “Doesn’t help that whoever did this tried to make it look more threatening than it already is.”
Zoro folded his arms on his chest. “You think it has something to do with this island or its inhabitants?” Zoro inquired.
Sanji then gazed at the river’s road. He then drew a huff of his cig. “Only one way to find out,”
Sanji started walking along the stream before a blade was felt dangerously to his throat, stopping him. Although the cook was unfazed by the action, it did slightly infuriate him. “I’ll be the one leading us from now on,”
Sanji puffed a huff of smoke in spite, his trachea inches from the sword, glaring at his companion, puffing the smoke out. “And why would I let you do that?”
“In the order of things, when the captain is not around, it is up to the vice captain to the lead the team. Since Luffy isn’t here, it’s my duty to guide the team into safety,” he withdrew his blade from Sanji’s throat. “Even if that means getting your perverted ass out of here,”
Sanji’s eyebrow twitched madly in rage. “Who’re you calling a pervert, sword-mouth?!”
Zoro closed the gap between their faces, teeth baring in a deep growl. “Who’re you calling a sword-mouth, dumbass?!” he angrily shouted as they butted foreheads, their figures shaking from relentlessly pushing the other way to determine to see who would give up first as the fire in their eyes growing - red fire in Sanji while Zoro’s fire was blue. If close enough, a near silent war could be witnessed.
A scream erupted from the forest, causing Sanji to turn abruptly towards the source while still pushing each other off. Sanji was the one to take action. “Wait, that sounded like a… like a…” he stated, jumping away from Zoro, facing the entrance of the Everfree. A smile appeared on his face as he took on a lovestruck expression. “A lady! And she’s in trouble. I’ll save you!”
Sanji ran as fast as his black legs could, leaving dust to be thrown off in his way. “OI, I SAID I’M IN FRONT!” Zoro yelled, trying to match and outrun the cook as he raced up to him, unaware of the ever growing tree branches that blocked the entrance.
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“Don’t worry, my damsel in distress, I shall help you!” Sanji proclaimed as jump-kicked the wooden wolf in his snout, effectively breaking it and sending flinging him to the a tree, collapsing on the mossy ground. Whenever he stomped one out, another came right around the corner, lunging at the suited man, and like all his brethren, he suffered a devilish kick in the teeth.
“Hey, dumb cook, get back here!” Zoro warned, Sanji not far behind him, splitting two other pouncing wooden wolfs in half, green ooze sticking to his blades, but the swordsman didn’t care. All he wanted was for the stupid cook to follow the first mate’s orders. Now he was here, attempting to rush past him so he wouldn’t let the cook wander off again.
The night was quick to arrive, or so it seemed. When Sanji and Zoro entered the so called ‘Everfree Forest’ the light faded from the rest of the island as the environment darkened. The duo trekked on, kicking and cutting down every obstacle before them as they made haste to rescue the troubled woman, disregarding any and every sort of animal and logic in their way.
With his mind filled with determination (among other things), Sanji bravely skipped through the forest without a second thought to his actions. ”Outta my way, ya shitty beasts. I’m meeting up with lady destin-”
Zoro came behind Sanji, yanking on his tuxedo as he gained advantage, as Sanji nearly tripped from the pull. “Oh no, you’re not. If anyone’s leading us out of here, it’s gonna be me,” he reared up his arm, elbowing the side of the cook’s ribcage, throwing Sanji off his mark as he struggled to regain balance with a single hopping foot, which made him to crash into a nearby tree, all the while cupping a hand over his injury.
With the lead now at his disposition, Zoro unsheathed his blades as he took off on a much faster pace, carrying out the current mission. An opening was made more visible ahead as the swordsman approached it, and it left him with that weak sense of danger, but much more intense than last time. Still, he reached it, hoping he hadn’t come too late to save the screaming girl.
A sharp pain erupted from the back of Zoro’s head, followed by a heavy weight that made him lose his footing as his face fell on the earth below, eyes stinging . The weight increased slightly, before disappearing completely on top of him, an overly excited voice calling out “LADY!” as quick and loud footsteps were advancing. Picking himself back up and dusting off the dirt in his eyes, Zoro looked ahead to see Sanji already moving away from him. “You asshole, you’re gonna pay for that!” he commented loudly as he got back on track, unbeknownst of the failed entrapment of the ground collapsing.
“Oh, Sanji-chan, this monster wants to kill me,” the damsel squealed out in desperation as the giant, disfigured beast snarled all the way to the helpless princess, licking his sharp and rotten teeth, girding to sink them into her ample form. It bellowed a mighty roar. “Aaaah, help me Sanji-chan,” she faintly screamed, dramatizing her dangerous situation with a hand to the forehead, letting her precious golden locks flow away freely in the imaginary wind as the monster gave her a toothy smirk.
“I’m coming, my princess,” Sanji said, meaning to sound like a hero but ending up sounding more like a pervert, a dopey smile spread across his face. His heart raced, as did his feet, to reach the image of the beast as it gaped its maw. The noble was about to kick the monster and declare victory and the woman as his lover but was quickly stopped by a suckerpunch to the head from reality. “What gives, Mosshead?!” he inquired impatiently, turning to the culprit who ridded him of his fantasy.
“That’s what you get for slamming my face, bastard cook.” he explained, clenching his fists ever so tightly.
“You knocked me onto a freaking tree, shitty swordsman!”
“Oi, who do you think you’re talking to?!”
“What do you think you’re saying?!” Sanji and Zoro were back standing face to face. Literally.
“How about I cut those legs off?”
“Well how about I shove my foot up your ass?”
“Oh you dartboard browed-”
“- airheaded-”
“- lecherous-”
“- sword swallowing-” Sanji lifted his leg.
“- pink headed-” Zoro withdrew his blade.
“- dumbass!” they spat out in sync, striking each other’s cheeks with their respective hilt and feet. The impact sent them flying to opposite sides, slamming directly onto the bark, leaving another bruise next to the mark on their cheek. The look of death in his eyes was lost upon contact as Zoro crashed into hard bark, tumbling onto its roots.
Sanji, however, found that grass was the thing he met instead. Stirring from his stupor, he gazed around him, noticing the immense natural green patches on the ground along with a decrepit ruins of an aging castle accompanied by a lonesome river next to it. Sanji widened his eyes to get a better view. It was the same river they were following before. It also seemed to end near the foundation of the castle.
“The noise came from here...” he stated with a questionable hint in his tone, trying to regain his breath. Is this it? There can’t be anyone there if it’s that run down. I think we should turn back. A scream resonated from the ruins, bringing Sanji back to the matter at hand. Lady! “Zoro, get up, we have work to do!” the cook said to the pained swordsman, receiving a solitary groan in response, as he sprinted for the entrance, ignoring the green ropes slithering around his crewmate’s legs.
Passing through the broken gates, Sanji made his way in the ruins, where hundreds of small, mossy plant-like tendrils protruded throughout the walls, crumbling them. Sanji paid it no mind as he scanned the room for the woman in trouble. “I swear it came from here, I could feel it.” Sanji commented, looking on to the farther side of the room. It in the thick darkness, he could still make out something in the distance.
A single silhouette stood there, her back turned to him, its curvy features indicating it was female. Her hair had a mind of its own as it flowed despite the lack of wind. Slim arms gripped her chest as shallow breaths could be heard. From Sanji’s point of view, the breaths could have been confused for moans, which drove his thoughts to obsession.
“Princess!” he exclaimed, dashing once again towards the maiden, saving her from whatever monster was terrorizing her. With hearts for eyes, he leapt up, hoping to dodge the woman away from the (imaginary) monster’s teeth. Sanji could already see his future life with her, as evidenced by the severe nosebleed.
“Vine Clutch:” Sanji was knocked off his mindset mid-leap as he noticed that the woman he was falling for was not a woman, but thorny vines taking shape of a beautiful lady. Now they were contorting into an opening like a giant mouth, smaller dark green rising up and waving for prey. “Numb Senses.”
In one quick motion, the ivy shut its mouth-like appendage on Sanji, encasing him in their tight and wet grip. The cook found himself unable to move as he struggle in a vain attempt to escape its clutches, but the more he forced his way out the more he became cramped in his own body. He groaned in pain, feeling the blood in his veins to slowly stop its progress, the dreaded numbness overtaking him.
Hollow footsteps were audible as they echoed through the ruins, catching Sanji’s attention. It came from behind him so he couldn’t face the mastermind. The footsteps continued growing closer until they halted, from what he deduced to be, a couple of feet from him. It stayed like that, complete silence surrounding the two, with Sanji’s only sight being the ‘throat’ of the plant, before the footsteps moved again, this time away from him.
Sanji’s blood boiled, clenching his fist as he suppressed the massive anger that was manifesting inside of him. “Where do you think you’re going?” he scolded the intruder, the fire of his mind spreading to the rest of his body. He could no longer hear the footsteps walking. “You think you can just lure your victims by using beautiful ladies as bait, just to trap them in your sick tricks?”
The plant released a whine from its makeshift throat, but Sanji ignored it and continued as the flames surrounding his body burned the vines wrapped around his limbs. “I don’t know who you think you are or what you’re trying to accomplish with me, but you never - I repeat, never…” the flames had reached his head, causing the plant gag the cook out of its mouth as it was engulfed in fire. It writhed in pain, forlorn from his inability to put it out, rapidly turning into ashes right before Sanji’s eyes. ”Ever… use beautiful ladies for your own desire!”
His hair spiked up in devilish rage, slowly facing his captor. “If you think you’re gonna get away with this, you’ve got another thing coming. I’ll make you sure you pay the debt of such a disrespectful act, even if it’s the last thing I- huh?” the anger was suddenly lost in his voice as he stood before his opponent.
A zebra stood on its hindquarters, her weight supported a large oak staff on its side. From the many years of identifying women, Sanji could deduce this was a female, though the dark green cloak hid some features. Rings adorned her neck and right leg - hoof? - along with her long ears, with her hair - no wait, mane, Sanji corrected himself - in a mohawk fashion. Her expression showed caution and slight fear, eyeing the man for any sudden movements.
Sanji brought his focus to her flanks, showing an odd mark that kind of reminded his of his eyebrow, only with small black triangles around it. Must be some kind of tribal mark, Sanji thought, noticing she did seem like the exotic type. Overall, she looked like a very adorable thing even when in animal form. And because of this.
“OOOH, what a beautiful woman!” Sanji fell head over heels for the zebra-girl, who cocked a confused and dumbfounded brow at the blood shooting from his nostrils. He approached her, the biggest grin on his face, his entire body convulsing into waves that made the zebra-girl extremely uncomfortable.
Without hesitation, she reared back her staff. “Oak Chop!” she swung the staff to his neck, effectively breaking his stance as he shot off onto the ruin’s side, leaving a sizable dent on the rock. Sanji stood there, dazed and stricken with love, recovering from the attack and the adorable beauty of the zebra-girl. This left an opening for he, flicking the staff on her shoulders, pointing it at the cook as the tip opened up.
“Everfree Ivy: Poison Joke Shot!” she yelled out before four blue flowers shot out of the staff at blinding speeds, aimed at Sanji’s back. By the time he regained consciousness, Sanji could sense piercing shots approaching him at breakneck speed. Still in a slight daze, he was able to dodge the incoming attack, but not without them grazing his flesh, cutting off four different pieces of his suit.
Sanji fell on one knee at the unexpected damage, clutching his wound. They weren’t so severe, compared to what he had face this was nothing. Glancing around his shoulder, he saw the roots of the flowers had impaled themselves through the wall, leaving only the stamen on their side unharmed. Woah, they didn’t leave cracks. It’s like the Bon Clay incident all over again.
He stared back at the zebra-girl with a gaze of bewilderment, but accompanied with a smirk. “Gotta say, wasn’t expecting that,” he commented as he got back on his two black feet, dusting off the dirt from his suit, putting his hand in his pocket in search of a cigarette.
“The Everfree holds many wonders for all to see, and all of it is controlled by me,” the zebra-girl rhymed, tightening her grip on her staff while glaring at her opponent.
“Is that so?” he lit the cigarette between his teeth, huffing it in and blowing a cloud of smoke out, placing the lighter in his pocket as he readied himself. “I’m surprised to find somebody who could handle two different types of devil fruits at once. Especially such a beautiful lady, even when in her animal form.”
The zebra-girl’s gaze did not waver. “I am unaware of these ‘devil fruits’ you speak of, but flattery won’t allow you to see the land above. If you don’t want to feel the wrath of the forest, retreat, or I’ll make you regret not admitting defeat.”
Sanji chuckled. “I would if I could, but I can’t. My ship got wrecked on my way here and I’m trying to find a shipwright to get me a new one. So if you could save yourself the trouble, I would like to get to this land-”
Zecora slammed her staff down, asserting her dominance and territory as the cloak floated from the impact. “No pirate goes beyond the Everfree, lest they wish to face me,”
Sanji took a deep breath. “Fine,” he lifted a knee in a defensive pose. “So be it, if you want a fight, you’ve got one.”
It was the zebra-girl’s turn to smirk. “How can you start a battle when it is over?”
Sanji cocked a brow before his legs began to shake. It started off small, which Sanji thought was still weird since he couldn’t remember the last time his legs tingled like this - oh wait, he did. The okamas -, as he put his foot down gently, but it tremble even more intense by the second as he could feel himself falling to the ground, unable to use his legs in any way. He grew more desperate as he tried to regain the feeling of his legs, rubbing, beating and clawing them for any sign of pain, but none came.
The zebra-girl looked upon the pathetic paralysed form of the man in black. “It’s useless,” she stated, trotting towards him in an unbearably slow pace, letting the pirate alone to enjoy his moment with the doubt and misery. When she was at arms length, she spoke up with a scowl. “The effects of the poison joke turn the victim’s strong point into weakness.” she reached behind her cloak, pulling out a flask with a red liquid inside. “I have warned you to leave, but you chose to stay. For that, you will pay,” she placed the flask on the lower part of the staff, twisting it as it consumed the red liquid in an instant.
Sanji could only watch as she pointed the other end of the staff at his head, positioning it on her shoulders as she she stared down at him. “Concentrated Ivy: Burning Sca-”
“Karasuma Gari!” several cuts were heard near them, causing the two to scan the source. The wall nearby, previously punctured by the zebra-girl’s blue flowers, had been sliced clean, like a hot knife through butter, multiple times yet they remained in place from the sheer tension. Not too long though, the ruins walls-turned-rocks slid off their pattern, landing with a large thud on the ground. The zebra-girl gaped in fear and awe, while Sanji mentally cursed.
“And that makes three,” Zoro said as he stepped onto the destroyed rocks, two swords drawn and glowing in the sunlight, making his way towards the battlefield where he saw the zebra-girl stepping away from a downed Sanji. “I’m having a hard time keeping up on how many times I’ve saved you so far,”
“About time you got here,” Sanji used his arms as leverage as he took a seat on a rock. “For a minute there, I was certain you got lost.”
“That’s funny, I was thinking the same thing about you,” he then turned his attention to the elephant in the room, that was actually a zebra, still gaping widely at the swordsman. “Who the hell is this?” he inquired.
The zebra-girl perked up as her confusion waned, her anger rising. She glared at Zoro. “I am Zecora, Guardian of Ponyville and keeper of the Everfree. If any pirate desires to invade this peaceful land, they will have to get by me,” she retorted as she repositioned her staff.
“Alright then, Zecora,” he addressed her, finding her name to be quite… fitting. “I think you most likely may have misunderstood this whole mess. I don’t know what got through your skull to think we’re here to invade-”
“You are pirates, are you not?” Zecora interrupted him as Zoro paused in thought.
“... fair enough,” Zoro admitted. “I feel like whatever I say won’t make you change your mind,”
Zecora shook her head. “Just like the other pirates, their lies meet their end. You will be no exception,” she cocked her head to Sanji. “Much like your friend.”
“HE IS NOT MY FRIEND!” Zoro blurted out.
“I AM NOT HIS FRIEND!” Sanji blurted out.
“Concentrated Ivy:” the end of the staff opened, fire erupting from it. “Burning Scarlet!” a flaming red rose shot out, considerably slower than the blue flowers but packing a bigger punch as it left smoke in its way.
Zoro reacted fast as he pulled back one of his swords, sheathing the other. “Yakkodori!” he slashed upwards, creating a projectile of compressed air that flew from the sword, heading straight for the burning flower. They made contact, causing the flower to explode as the wind dissipated from the air. Zoro took this opportunity by holding the swords on his sides as he crouched down, all the while Zecora readied for another attack.
The swordsman leaped at Zecora, his speed blowing away the smoke from the blast. When Zecora finally saw him through, it was too late; he had closed in on her so she lost her footing, the staff falling off her shoulders. She cried out in surprise, her eyes like pinpricks. “Oni Giri!” the cut landed as Zoro appeared behind her, arms outstretched.
“This is a new record for me,” Zoro spoke grimly, sheathing his katanas as the zebra collapsed on her hooves. “You’re my first new opponent in another island and I’m already disappointed. So if you’re done will this preachy ‘guardian’ crap, I’ll be on my-” he spun around, about to head back to their journey before he sensed Zecora, striking him. He pulled out his Shusui, stopping the staff from hitting his neck. With her weight on his sword, he pushed forward, forcing her to jump off of him, landing further from him “Guess not,”
Zecora slumped back, but she pulled herself to her stance with the aid of her staff. A giant ‘X’ was imprinted on her chest as she panted heavily, and so tired she was barely able to move. She could not believe this pirate; not ten seconds when they started fighting and she was already on the ground, begging for oxygen. Truly she was not dealing with some regular pirate scum that came her way, this one was smarter, stronger, like a leader of a crew. Perhaps this man had eaten this ‘devil fruit’ the fool in black had told her. However, now wasn’t the time to wonder.
Zoro gritted his teeth as he saw the wounds on her chest recovering. “Damn it, I thought I was done with you animal morphers at the Galley-La,” ‘She’s logia type too, but that doesn’t make any sense. I haven’t seen anyone who could handle two kinds of devil fruits.’ Zoro sighed in his train of thought as he and Zecora advanced to each other. ‘Looks like I’m in for a surprise’.
Sanji simply sat there, watching the battle go on. Though he hated saying it, the odds were stacked in favour of Zoro, evidently. He could see the zebra-girl was having trouble keeping up with the swordsman, in speed, strength and skill. Whenever she tried to strike him, he always defended and counterattacked successfully. When she used the vines and plants to grab or prick him, Zoro kept dodging and weaving and cutting the vines down.
Sanji slowly slid down his seat on the rock, but caught himself before he could fall. He put his hand on his leg to try and stabilize them, to get the blood flowing, and that’s when he felt it; nothing. No feeling whatsoever came when he touched his leg, not even numbness. He pinched, rubbed, shook them to no avail. They had lost all blood circulation.
And his waist was also starting to tingle…
From the zebra-girl’s technique…
And she was fighting Mosshead…
Since he knew Mosshead’s habits…
Oh no… Bingo.
His eyes widened. “Zoro!” he bellowed, the piece of the puzzle in his coming together in the worst way possible.
Zoro ducked Zecora’s staff, turning to the cook. “Can’t you see I’m fighting over here?” he yelled back as he stopped another strike to his head, swiping at her midsection, ending up grazing her flesh.
“Listen to me, you can’t kill her!” Sanji cupped his hands on his mouth to increase the volume.
“What, are you actually concerned for this woman?” he crossed his swords with her staff as they came head to head, sparks flying from the impact, igniting the sliced vines..
“If you kill her, I’m gonna be paralyzed forever!”
Zoro faced him fully. “What?!” this left him vulnerable as Zecora saw an opening. She spawned a thorny vine on the tip of her staff, aiming it at Zoro’s side. With all her might, she thrust the thorn deep within him, stabbing Zoro as he groaned loudly in pain. Instinctively, he spun his Sandai backwards as he placed both in front of her. “Nitoryu Hirameki!” Zoro swung his swords right to left, cutting her chest and neck, causing her to jump back to get a breather. He did the same. “Hurry up and tell me!”
“When that woman and I were fighting before you, she hit me with one of these weird blue flowers that paralyzed my legs, but the rest of my body will go too, and only she possibly knows how to cure this. If you kill her then I’m gonna be paralyzed forever, which means I won’t be able to reunite with the crew and Nami and Robin won’t see how much I’ve changed,” he ended his speech with a slight nosebleed.
Zoro processed the new information. He gazed at Zecora, winded from the previous flurry. “If that’s so, I guess I better finish this now,” he said, sheathing both of his swords. Zecora watched in detail as Zoro picked up a third sword from his waist, this one having a white sheath and handle.
At this point, Zecora was exhausted. She did impale him with one of her vines, but it still wasn’t enough. ‘Maybe this is the right time to use my killer vine,’ she thought bitterly as she raised her staff above her head, her forelegs struggling to hold firm.
Zoro held his Ichimonji upright by his head, a tight grip on the handle, as he looked down to the floor, listening closely to the sounds around him. From outside, the soft winds blew the leaves, basking in the glorious sun. The trees were no longer dark, the sickening environment didn’t exist, replaced by a calm, serene landscape. He heard the cook, casually smoking his cigarettes, puffing cloudy wads from his lips.
It annoyed him immensely.
“Rose Reign:” she began as the ground trembled like an earthquake, casting many rocks that held the castle ruins in place.
Zoro paid it no mind. “Ittoryu Iai:” he said, while Sanji was quizzical, switching his gaze between the two, barely avoiding the falling rocks.
“Thorn Garden!” she brought her staff down hard as thousands of vines burst through the floors before them, effectively destroying whatever remained of the castle. They grew substantially as they rapidly approached the swordsman concentrating his move, not budging an inch to dodge the vines.
Sanji, on the other hand, did not waste another second as he scurried to his hands to flee the scene, his lifeless legs flailing about.
Zoro smirked as the vines came dangerously close. He had finally found it. Through the green plants, and collapsing building and the cook’s effeminate screams, he could her deep and shallow breaths behind those thorns. Above, behind and beyond, they circled around him so he wouldn’t escaped, if he were to gaze up he would only see green, but he didn’t. And he grinned more.
“Shishi” the vines engulfed him, penetrating and drilling into his body, dust immediately flying off of the area, covering the entirety of the ruins as the vines dug a deeper hole for the swordsman. They retracted to see a gargantuan hole where Zoro used to be, a grave made for the dead man.
When the dust settled, Zecora eyes were wide open as she was hit with a revelation. The damage to the castle was catastrophic, basically irreparable. The pirate in the suit was dealt with, and he was going to perish in this forest. It was not that, however. The pirate she had supposedly killed was not dead at all.
She could sense him. She saw him. She felt his cut. She knew it was over.
“Sonson!” Zoro yelled out behind her, right when the slash made it’s presence. A deep crescent cut erupted from her stomach to her chest, the pain that she shouldn’t feel came at her full strength as she wanted screamed in agony, but only a squeal came out of her mouth. The blood flowed from her wound, though not as much as Zoro wanted, as it made a small pool underneath Zecora. She succumbed to her pain, dropping on her knees as her mind fought their own battle to stay awake from the shock.
“I can see you gave it everything you had,” Zoro said, sheathing his swords as Zecora let her body fall, standing on the brink of consciousness. “I’m even more disappointed because of that.” he walked up to the zebra, sitting down near her as she turned her head to meet him. “Good, you’re not dead yet. Here’s what’s gonna happen; whatever it is you did to the ero-cook,” he pointed a finger to Sanji, attempting to climb out of a pile of rubble. “you are gonna revert it,”
Zecora coughed, staring incredulously at the pirate who defeated her. FIrst, he had outright terminated any possibility she had to stop them, now he was ordering her help his fellow crewmate? ‘This man is not a pirate…
“Don’t look at me like that, I’m giving you a chance to live if you help us out. I advise you to take it if you value your life,”
“And why… would I do… such a thing?” she wheezed out.
Zoro shrugged. “To be honest, I couldn’t care less if anything happened to you, but my captain promised our crew we would see each other again, and I’m hoping to keep that promise,”
Zecora took deep breaths before answering again. “Why do you… let me stay… alive… if you don’t care?”
He gazed deep into her eyes as Zecora became more fearful of the man. “I just told you why. Don’t make me say it again,”
‘He has mercy.’ she thought with a thankful smile. “And this… captain… of yours,” she coughed again, violently. “Does he know… where you are?”
Zoro blinked as he noticed the woman deterred from her speech pattern. He chose against mentioning it. “He doesn’t know where we are, we don’t know where he is,” Zoro looked on to the distance, remembering the newspaper. “Last time I hear of him, he was busting out his brother who was sentenced to be executed at the Marineford,”
“The… Marine base?” Zecora whispered to herself, the word bouncing around her mind as blurry memories came slowly flooding to her.
“Yeah, I remember reading about that,” Sanji dragged his half-limp body across the room, ceasing when he reached Zoro. “I wonder how he got Whitebeard and Crocodile to assist him. Even then, it wasn’t enough to save Ace.”
“Ace…” Zecora repeated.
“Luffy must’ve been devastated by it. He was his brother, and he witnessed his death in the worst way possible,” Zoro sighed as he remembered that moment he read from the newspaper after intense training. “I don’t wanna meet a man who looks good after that.”
“I wonder how he’s doing after that,” Sanji muttered silently, supporting his head with his arm. “Luffy’s tough, but how did he handle Ace’s passing?”
“Wait,” Zecora caught the duo’s attention. “Luffy… Monkey D. Luffy?”
“You know him?” Zoro and Sanji inquired simultaneously.
Zecora didn’t meet their gaze, as she was lost in her own mind. “No, but I know somepony else who does,” she shakily began to stand up, struggling to keep her strength, but a firm hand held her up. “Too bad he is not with us. He has told me the names of his crew,” she tore her gaze away from the floor. “Tell me, who are you two?”
“Zoro.” the swordsman stated.
Zecora nodded in acknowledgement at the quick introduction, turning to Sanji who was leaning in flirtatiously, a half-lidded gaze on the majestic zebra. “Zecora, was it? You may call me Sanji. ‘Black Leg’ Sanji of the East Blue, my darling lady,” he cooed softly, dismissing the concern of the lingering limp on his stomach for butterflies.
Her ears perked up, a sincere grin pursuing her lips. “I have also heard of your endeavors, of when the captain was away, it was you who protected the team in their adventures. At the Sabaody, you were separated by a machine named Kuma, who transported him to this island where he needed to leave sooner,”
Zoro flinched at her knowledge. “How do know all of this? Who’s ‘him’?” he furrowed his brow. “What’s with the sudden change of heart?”
“All will be explained in a better place, however we must make haste, for every second Sanji goes untreated, his body will surrender to the poison joke and your breath depleted,”
“So he’ll asphyxiate?” Zoro commented, standing fully erect as Zecora nodded her head. “You make it sound like it’s a bad thing.”
“I’m right here, you know,” Sanji said angrily.
Zoro ignored him, picking the zebra in his hands. Zecora was surprised at first, from his strength and the action, but soon settled as the swordsman held her underneath his arm. “Okay, so, where to now?” Zoro asked, facing the castle’s crumbled entrance.
“It will be long, for we are far away from my hut. Thankfully, this forest is my home, and I know a shortcut,”
“Perfect, just don’t do like the cook and get us lost.”
They proceeded to move out until a voice stopped them dead in their tracks. “Yeah, speaking of the cook,” Sanji called out, impatiently tapping on the floor. “Who’s gonna carry me?”
As soon as he said that, Zoro and Sanji grimaced, realizing their fate. “Shit.” they both thought out loud.
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“I said ‘turn left’!”
“She said ‘turn left’!”
“I am going left!”
“You’re going backwards! How do you misunderstand left as back?!”
“You dumbass, she said to go east, so I’m going east!”
“East is that way!” Sanji pointed a finger to his right as Zoro steered towards it.
“No, don’t turn!”
“You said too, you bastard striped horse!”
“I did not say anything, you… you… Mosshead!”
“Don’t call me that!”
“I call you as I see fit!”
“Why do your instructions suck!”
“You have gone the wrong way twenty five times, and you blame me?!”
“Well, if you said it more clearly, we wouldn’t have to screw up!”
“Don’t you dare yell at her!” the barrage of screams continued, with Zoro not following the orders, Zecora repeatedly yelling out the directions, and Sanji, clinging to the swordsman’s neck, as he assaulted him over the head with his floppy leg.
As Zoro turned back to the right way - for once - Zecora rubbed her temples, as a million thoughts came to her, all of them the same. ‘How did I get myself into this?’
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not bad at all... i will be watching.quickmeme.com/img/ca/ca26e7e2db7ed5bbebac0fee2184dc52aaa9faa2da7b57c241e68edd10c12e57.jpg
This is pretty good
Are the characters humanized or anthro cause the second chapter made it sound like zecora was humanoid in a way or something?
5808864 Neither, she just knows how to stand on two legs.
5810246 Don't expect regular updates, I write whenever I feel like it, or when my inspiration is at its highest.
I will say this fic is on the top of my priority list, and I'm proud to say I'm its writer.
5810306 Exactly. Fun fact; this fic practically writes itself.
This fic has my total atention my dear sir
please go on.
I expect two possibilities:
1. The cook enters a desert-making contest with Pinkie Pie.
2. The swordsman slices up Pinkie Pie and the cook bakes her into muffins.
Too bad I have no time to read on my hands right now.
5810726 You don't know how close you are to number 2.
seems like zecora meet ussop
5811823 That may be one of the things my editor and I will look over when he gets back. Thank for the feedback though.
Gore tag?
Is this really going to be full of blood and pony guts? Oh god, Sanji's not gonna try COOKING pony, is he?!
I would have enjoyed reading this story, even though I only have basic knowledge of One Piece. The things preventing me from doing that, are the typos and..... not so much the grammar, but the poor grasp of the English language that I read.
Another thing that got to me, is that I felt you were trying to describe an anime scene here. Way too vividly. You actually mention Zoro getting the angry vein thing to symbolize annoyance/anger in a character typical for Shonen anime. Don't do that. No sweat drops, veins, etc. Your main problem overall is that you're telling not showing, you really need to polish off your descriptions, they are just large and unwieldy. I hope some of this helps.
5813964 Those aren't typos. In fact, none of them are. I know I sometimes mispronounce some words, or forget to write others, but I usually see them when it's pointed out.
Also, I don't think you know what showing and telling means. Even I know when I'm telling and when I'm showing, and that's not it. Hell, the quotes you posted are the proof that I can show. If I was tellling I'd be something like "Zoro was angry at this" instead of what I wrote there so you might have gotten mixed up.
I will take your critique over the description, as I've said before my editor will possibly polish that in the future.
Overall... I'm sorry to say, this didn't help.
5812572 You seem to have missed the Teen rating.
5814050
Those quotes were showing that a lot that you've written just doesn't make sense. I didn't put up the typos I saw in your story, because I decided I wanted to focus more on the core of your writing.
"Discomfort of shame," is poorly worded, the general idea comes across, but it's just not a proper phrase.
"Blonde kempt hair," actually makes sense. That was my bad. However, you might want to describe his hair a little more instead of just using the single word "kempt".
You just need to add an "s" to sword.
"Several horizons, he saw no islands at all," several horizons doesn't make sense, there is one horizon, the second part also just feels choppy to me.
"While pulling his head back and fro the ocean," to and fro could work here, or back and forth, but this whole area could use some restructuring.
But, I will agree with you in one regard, you are showing instead of telling. I was wrong to say you weren't, but the way you're going about it isn't the best. The last example shows this. "A thick fog covered the surroundings of the ship, engulfing the sun to give the illusion of a land without time." How does a vision completely obscured by fog convey a "land without time"? Maybe gray and stagnant? Perhaps. However you might do better by instead describing the fog, instead of using some abstract term to describe the whole setting at that moment.
5815015 "Discomfort of shame" is there because it sounded better for someone like Zoro, as he doesn't usually feel embarassed.
Sanji's hair is... not something that requires many words to picture, and I refrain from using terms like "long" or "short" unless it's absolutely necessary.
Hmm, maybe I should have used "several ways of the horizon" or "several directions"?
Yes, that was a mistake, I admit that. I didn't realize the real expression was "to and fro". I apologize
There are actually 3 reasons why I put "land without time" instead of anything else, one of them I cannot say. I put it there to give it a sort of poetic justice (guilty pleasure) to add more to the scene, and I also used the term to explain how the surrounding felt like, rather than what it looked like since I wanted to include both of their perspectives and Zoro was asleep at the time.
5814214 Yesterday was...
Ah Zoro your so bad at directions, and it's actually pretty interesting that you made the pony world aware of the one piece world and actually a part of it, I wonder who zecoras been talking too about Luffy.
It would be cool if you had the Japanese translations along with the English version, good idea
5810785 Oh God, I really hope that's what happened.
so...ch.3 yes or no?....
6267314 I got 1,000 words in it right now, but certain circumstances in my personal life have made it stressful for me to write some more. Though expect an update in August.
6267838 ok
6267838 is August now...so were is the new ch
6290462 You know, continuously asking for a new chapter isn't gonna make it come out faster.
Nice, well written and seems like a decent plot is being set up.
will watch for now.