The Kingdom of Fiore. A neutral Country of 17 million people, It is a World of Magic!
Magic is Bought and Sold There every day.
It is an integral part of peoples lives. And there are those who uses magic as their occupation... Those people are referred to as Wizards!
The Wizards belong to various guilds, and perform jobs on commission.
There are a large number of guilds within the country.
And in a certain city there lies a certain guild
A guild from which various legends were born... Or rather, will continue to be born along the future... And its name is: FAIRY TAIL!
Chapters (9)
So far so good
Finally some one makes a cross over for Fairy Tail!
Seemed a little rushed during this chapter
"Show vs. Tell", my friend. Don't always tell us what the characters are doing, most of the time you should use description to show us what is happening in a scene.
"Ice Wizard Power!!"
shouldn't it be something like:
"Ice Makes!!"
or something like that?
When I first read that line I literally slammed my head into my keyboard...
405833 watch the anime.. i assure you that, That is how gray say it...
405863
Sub or Dub?
405876 Dub...
405882
Will that explains it
405833 <--- What he said.
405863 Realy now? *goes to watch a couple of episodes* it is "Ice-Make" only in the animax dub did they make it "Ice Wizard Power". "Ice-Make" also sounds so much better than "Ice Wizard power".
there needs to be more fairy tail crossovers!
@ lightningcrash
I got a weird feeling you got something against lucy >.>, but so far it is ok.
good. but i dont like the fact you made trixie cry. she might be a blowhard and annoying but i still like her. you evil being
From what episode of Fairy Tail does this 'start'. I don't want to end up reading spoilers on episodes I haven't watched yet.
This could seriously use a grammar fix. I mean, you misspelled Gray's name, for one.
488254 Somewhere between the end of The mission in Edolas... Or something...
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Edolas?
492830 you know, before they went in, imagine 6 weeks before they got sucked in edolas.
Really Sloppy writing but the story has potential
655773 Fixed... tell me how it is now
Ooooo this is getting so good here keep going I want toe READ SOME MORE!!!!!!!!!
697407 I better research on more about Fairy Tail.... And I mean... MOAR~!
697728YES MORE OF IT DAMMIT MORE!!!!!!!!!
oh can you help me with a name for Nastu, but a girl version because I'm planning on making a story with him as well.
697798 What about Naru...
697805Hmm it sounds a little like a guy at first hmm
698027 check out (Love Hina) Naru is a common Girl names.
698082Oh damn I forgot about that hahaha I'll use that name then thanks
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I have Vendetta(Revenge) on Discord for everything for two years and it's payback
His not gonna leave this place alive
This is for Twilight
This is for Soap
This is for everyone
This is Trixie Wizards make me cry
You are....SCHTUPID!!!
Twilight:Star!
Derpy:I don't remember the damn counter--(Thrown a watermelon his face)
Twilight:STAR!!
Derpy:Don't shoot!(Again watermelon hit her)
1,000,000 years later
Twilight:Our proper responses BOOM!!!
1,000,000 more years later
Twilight:Applejack!Move yo flank
Here we go again that's it turning grey color isn't going to happen in mah story
Grey's magic proceeded by "Ice Make" not "Ice Wizard Power"
Erza's magic is called Requiping, so it should be "Erza Requiped to her Dark Slayer Armor..."
Everfree is one word.
Given that the Elements of Harmony have experienced Discord's influence, Rarity (and the others) should be able to resist his attempts at manipulating their minds.
Its Ice make
I have watched some episodes 4 times and im 100% sure he says ice make.
You probably want to fix it since i saw 2 comments on it
405863 You clearly watch dubs... I always watch subs, cause that's how it's supposed to be said, and usually it's a lot funnier.
MORE SPIKE AND NATSU INTERACTION PLEEEASE!?! =D
I don't know why but I wanna see natsu teaching spike to use fire magic and maybe if he fights discord he like loses control over it or something,
*facepalm*
Oh good Lord. Natsu has already messed something up, and it's only the beginning of the story! This does not forebode well...
Random moustache!
This is such BS. She is more than a 1000 years old and this happens? da fuq. You need a proof-reader cause that was just horrible. And if you already have one get a better one, also there is quite a lot of spelling errors and the plot is meh. Overall it needs to be re-done because as it is i can only give it a thumbs down.
3445124 care to help me?
3455057 I wish i could but i barely have enough time to read and comment on fics. There are groups however that you can look for a proof-reader through. Here and here
3455391 thanks... lets see if someone can help me here~
Even though I love the idea of this, I have to be honest. in comparison to Turnabout Storm the quality is not quite as good. furthermore the characterization of the Fairy Tail characters is quite off.
4226319 A little help?
4232175 would love to but would like to know how