Base off the Sonic the Hedgehog games.
When Discord breaks free from his stone prison, he decide to have his fun again. This time he chose Rainbow Dash as his target and takes away Rainbow's wings! Rainbow now as to travel through Equestria on hoof to find and beat Discord to get her wings back! But how can Rainbow catch Discord if she does have her wings? By running of course! What? You think Rainbow too slow with out her wings? Well, You win some and you lose some right? Rainbow may lost her wings, but she got something better in return. Read to find out.
Ok, having trouble planning how the Everfree Forest is going to look when Discord change it and plan on going back to Ponyville Zone and make it a bit better.
Rainbow Dash as Sonic
Discord as Dr. Ivo "Eggman" Robotnik
Cover belongs to nickyv917.
Ok, Read it, and I'm gonna be real with you here. I like the whole idea of sonic the hedgehog, but replace it with Rainbow Dash. A harmless idea and very fun to write, I'm sure of it. Now although I'm not the best writer, I did notice somethings, grammar needs some work and a little bit of spelling as well. A few other things that I kinda found but that may be nit picking, just little things here and there. Thats it though, I like this story so far and I think you got a nice little fic here, Can't wait for marble zone. (not really though, that level sucks)
3927292 Thank you, I know my grammar is bad but from time to time I go over the chapters and fix them myself. Marble Zone will be a while because I'm not sure how Discord going to change it yet but I'll come up with some, of chose any ideas from other people are welcome too.
This seems a bit fast paced. Seriously, Rainbow Dash went through all three acts in ten seconds? Seems a bit ridiculous if you ask me.
Also as for the role of Tails, I believe that Scootaloo would be a better choice, since y'know, Tails is Sonic's sidekick and all.
3964177 Well, I left out the Badniks in that level so it when by really fast, but they show up in the second level which is Everfree Forest (Marble Zone). That one for Scootaloo and zero for Twilight. Your the first person to vote for Scootaloo.
if you want ideas on how discord changes the everfree forest i suggest something like he makes a place like the marble zone under the castle of the two sisters (mainly because the marble zone is a underground area) also i vote scootaloo
4409739 That help out a little. Thanks.
This is so great! Can't wait for more chapters
4691892 Thanks, I plan on making the first chapter longer and having trouble laying out the second level in the Everfree Forest.
4693113 Okay, good luck
4702042 Thanks.
4702045 No Prob
You could have Discord twist the flora of the forest into a road for Marble Zone.Also, some places that you could use. Canterlot, Appleloosa, Cloudsdale, Castle of Two Sisters, The Pie's rock farm, Manehattan, and the changeling hive for a boss level. Also, I vote Scootaloo.
Nice start and please bring in Scootaloo. If anypony can help Rainbow Dash learn how to be flightless, then it's her.
Besides, I'm alway view Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo as Sonic and Tails.
Please keep up the good work upon such a great idea like this one.
Dash is becoming more like Sonic!
Discord as Dr. Ivo "Eggman" Robotnik saw that one coming