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Shazam 25


I'm a guy who loves Video Games and is a Brony. I get different ideas for the mane six and mostly into game crossovers.

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Fluttershy gets a letter saying that she won a free Mansion, but doesn't remember enter anything to win one. Later that night, her friends go missing inside the Mansion and it fill with Ghosts! Can Fluttershy find the bravery she need to save her friends? Or will she be trap in a Mansion that fill with Ghost?

Base off the Luigi Mansion for the GameCube and I'll do the Dark Moon as well.

Proof Read by The Color Nine

Image belongs to Motherless-Goat666

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Comments ( 56 )

HAH! Fantastic picture!:rainbowlaugh: I love this story already!:pinkiehappy:

3676342 Dark Moon is after this.:twilightsmile:

Did you know this isn't the first Luigi's Mansion crossover on this site?

3676391 I do, but I'm not sure if this is the first Fluttershy Mansion on this site, I did read the one that had Sweetie star in it.

Was this machine translated? Grammar is all over the place.

3676485 Did you read that this was proof read? Twilight Mercer did that.

3676391 No...it's the first good luigi crossover

3678834 Glad you like it. I'm even doing Dark Moon after this.:twilightsmile:

I really like your story so im gonna follow u btw I don't have any storys yet im new srry. but u can always follow me . kk? kk.

3680607 It alright, I did have a feeling that Fluttershy's Mansion would a maybe top favorite for the fans. More is still to come.

Good idea but needs some polishing.:ajbemused:

3688425 Thanks and yeah I know. Twilight Mercer who proof read the first chapter went quiet for some time and the rest of the chapters I put up on my own.

I like it a lot. Luigi's Mansion is one of my favorite games, and so the Dark Moon. I hope you make it soon.

3722799 Dark Moon is on Fanfiction but it will be on here soon.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Shazam 25 deleted Jan 19th, 2014

I'm sorry but this isn't the first Lugi's mansion crossover:pinkiegasp::fluttercry:, but it is not be ahamed that you came up with the Idea. A stroy that is fantastic is sweeties' mansion with a whole lot of plot,action and drama:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::unsuresweetie:.

3859809 I know about Sweetie Belle's Mansion but that story was cancelled. I think this is the first Luigi's Mansion Crossover with Fluttershy. Plus I base off the game, which mind you and other Readers, I don't own!

I haven't even beaten the game yet and I'm about to read this story.:rainbowwild:

3960205 I don't even own the game!:pinkiehappy:

3960321 The game is so awesome, you need it. Your life will not be complete without it.

4208869 I don't have a GameCube and I can't download off my Wii either.

4208940 Which Wii do you have? If you have the original, all you need is a controller, a Game-Card, and LM.

4209002 The original Wii and I don't got the money to get all that stuff. Check out Fluttershy's Mansion: Dark Moon yet? It still being work on and it a lot longer this this one.

4209045 Nope. Still reading this one. I will be finished in a bit, so I'll check it out then!

4209049 Ok, just remember Dark Moon is much longer and I'm still not done with it.

4209091 Can I collab with you? I have already beat the game, and umm... No offense, but you need an Editor.

4209106 Yeah, Twilight Mercer did the first chapter and just stop all together and I put up 2-6 just so I can get a move on. I hear that too many times, Get an Editor. Way too many times, no one perfect.

3678834 Yup ! One of the other isns't too good and the one with Sweetie has almost no relation to the scenario of luigi's mansion

I just want to say that you are very creative with your Shadowbolt Ghosts name. Also I admire how you replaced the Ghosts with Shadowbolts this is turning into a great story. Also clever use of Nightmare Moon as king Boo:twilightsmile:

4874523 Thank you.:twilightsmile: I still have to finish Dark Moon and I got both games out of the way.

Want an editor? Your in desperate need of one.

4983133 Do you want to be it? The last two haven't been keeping up with.

4983155
I'll be one if you don't mind. But I'd have too do it on a weekly basis. Like Friday and Saturday?

4983169 Sure, If I'm right, chapter one has been proofread already, but not sure about chapter two. Do you want send by PM or a Google Drive?

i'm loving this plus if I get the game and game system I wold know wat to do

:fluttercry:I have to face ghosts?
:pinkiesad2::ajsleepy::raritydespair::rainbowhuh::twilightoops: HELP US FLUTTERSHY!!!
:fluttershyouch: ok I'll do it.

Dear our fellow spirits,
DON'T LAUGH AT THIS PEGASUS!!!! SHE'S BUCKING SCARIER THEN THE GRUDGE!!!"

NOOOOOO!!!!! FLUTTERSHY NOT YET!!! CURSE YOU NIGHTMARE!!! :twilightangry2:I wonder if Rainbow Dash knows how painful lightning is. :rainbowderp:You can do it Fluttershy, my Phantom Shadow brethren are rooting for you!

The hide and seek ghosts were always a huge pain. The granny ghost also merits a troll phase. The boss on the other hand is a troll leader, forms back into one after five bleeping seconds :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

The Antarctic ghost was always a major pain to fight! I guess Fluttershy still had a bit of Discords influence in her during the fight. Every pony has been saved :rainbowlaugh::ajsmug::pinkiehappy::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay:

I wonder if Fluttershy took the entire Nightmare funds. Hold it how did Nightmare Moon become a ghost? Unless...ILLUMINATI IS INVOLVED!!!:pinkiegasp::applejackconfused:

3676540 Then you need to double and even triple check. Just because it is proof read doesn't mean that there aren't any problems still. Because 3676485 is right about the grammar being all over the place. It kind of looks like a 1st grader tried to write it. I'm sorry if Twilight Mercer is a friend of yours or if I offended you with that statement. But he did his job very poorly... However, this is still a really good story. Even with the mistakes.

6698392 Thanks, I made it back during my first year on Fanfiction. So, sorry about the grammar. Twilight Mercer was taking so long I went ahead and post the rest of the story.

Fluttershy look around and saw candles. Using the fire she gain she light them up. The door unlock itself, before leaving the room she search for the Shadowbolt, caught it and went back to the room she was in before.

So light em up up up. Light em up up up. Light em up up up. I'M ON FIRE~!

Ceiling Shadowbolts and Bomb Ceiling Bolts HP: 0 Weakness: Just shuck them up.'

WRITE THOSE INNUENDOS, PEOPLE!

She knew there was a trick to this room as well. She place together the pieces and suck up one of the Meteors and shot the moon.

Random ghost: Oh no...
Fluttershy: I didn't mean it! I swear!

This is a perfect crossover story For MLP and Luigi's Mansion. Fluttershy is clearly the perfect pony to explore the mansion and rescue her friends. I love how you created an original pony for these stories that's supposed to be Professor E Gadd.

Ah, it's always nice to see a Luigi's Mansion story on this site.

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