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During the interception of a category III Kaiju, Western Belle and Vertigo Delta fall into Equestria. How will the ponies handle the situation? Or even better, how will the Jaegers and their pilots return home? And they aren't the only ones who fell through the portal. And they aren't the last by any means either...

A/N: This fic revolves more around fighting. If you do not want a lot of Jaegers slugging it out with Kaiju, then I highly suggest you look elsewhere......However, the ponies will still play a very important roll.

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Comments ( 73 )

The story will slow down just a tad later on. I just wanted to get to the fighting and meeting the ponies instead of dragging it out too much. :rainbowwild:

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This is an epic crossover! Everything about it is so awesomely done, but it's way rushed. If at some point you edit this, just extend it a bit, plus a few spelling errors here & there but other than that this is great!

On a side note, how the hell do you warm up to alien talking ponies that quickly, and then let them fucking ride in the conpod because one of them is intrested??

3211997 ADHD, THATS how. But now that you mentioned it..... Yeah I'll fix that.

Any more feedback is more than welcome :pinkiesmile:

3212014
Here's some quality additional feedback.

Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
Best Pacific Rim crossover I've ever seen...
*Reads Twilight introduction part*
DAMNIT!!!!

So yeah, it was absolutely fantastic until then.

3212051 I'm sorry. But I'm fixing it now as we speak (I have another window opened on fimfiction :twilightblush:) so I'll have it fixed in a few minutes. Completely re-writing a good chunk of the chapter :ajsmug:

When it's done though, please tell me what you think. :3

3212051 Oh, and as for the fight scenes (or parts since its not a movie :/ ). Whats your opinion on those?

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The fight parts were well done. I really liked those a lot. They ended fairly quickly, but were well written/described. Keep up on that kind of writing.

3212188 Thanks bro! ^_^

And actually, I was, and still am, going to explain why they ended quickly in the next chapter or two.

3212188 Alroity then. See if that's better. Fixed it in two chapters

Nice, very nice change. Just a quick question--Are the two pilots still in the conpod at the end of this chapter?

I'm still a little confused on the who thing whether the two pilots are always in the conpod, or got out. A couple other confusions are lurking but great fix up on everything else.

Comment posted by Rexzilla deleted Sep 17th, 2013

3212401 And I appreciate it bro!

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No problem! Keep me updated and keep up the great work!

I-I'm sorry. This story is great, really it is! It's just the dialog is so confusing!! I want to understand this so badly, but I'm giving myself a headache trying to do so. I would consider consider a (re) re-write of this chapter at least, or consult someone you know who is good at H.I.E. for writing tips/editing.

Anyways, this is pretty good, and I hope to see more soon.

3231414 Alright man. I really like the help. This is the first fanfic I have written so sorry about the problems with it :twilightsheepish:

dam this good stuff :heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

Well, tragedy/comedy are conflicting tags, just fyi.

3231605 True.... I think I may have made a mistake with the Tragedy tag come to think of it :facehoof:

3231605
Yeeeeaahh... I have to agree with ya there.

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Less is more with tags. Only use the ones that sum up your story. There can be comedy with a comedy tag. To make sure the story is taken seriously, I wouldn't use it. Maybe tragedy, but then folks assume it's gonna be pretty intense. Adventure is usually the way to go.

dam i love it :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

3231724 What he said! Why there aren't more Pcific Rim fics is beyond me...
(Also I had A Light that never comes on when I read this. Spoookkyyyy :pinkiegasp: )

3232789 sorry bout that. I coudn't help messing with the lights :twilightsmile:

3245727 What are you, magic!? Oh wait your a giant fighting robot, you don't need that...
And *Pacific, blame ios 7 for that. :derpytongue2:

3246665 Damnit Apple! If you're gonna do something, then do it right!

lol dam i love it :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

3339429 lol, glad you still like it :yay:

Comment posted by Rexzilla deleted Oct 19th, 2013

So uhhmmm, I just watched Pacific Rim again, and realized that a couple parts in this fic are very similar to scenes in the movie.... But I promise that was not on purpose :twilightoops:

awesome so far keep up the good work.

Comment posted by Rexzilla deleted Nov 4th, 2013

3463802 You're going to make ME cry now :raritydespair:

3472568 hummmm? sory but when i got round to reading that chapter the mane thing that hock me in seem too go'n some were elce and end up fulling force to go throw it to find the gem that i know that is there.

3472764 is that a good or bad thing?? :rainbowderp:

3479962 some of both but on one hoof you got good stuff hear but on the other one you seem to have nouthing to get other to come read this chapter. is like your not going at the tempo, that you set up, for your self hear but thing like that come's with time throw.

HOLY SHIT! CHERNO ALPHA TO THE RESCUE BITCH!

Also, FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


(Sorry if I spam first as a long word)

And also, where the hell is Twilight?!

Comment posted by Rexzilla deleted Nov 17th, 2013

3500642 Lol, I figured that being the brute Cherno is, he could lay some serious hurt on just about any type of being from hell.

And for Twilight, We'll just have to find out, won't we? ;)

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