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Shazam 25


I'm a guy who loves Video Games and is a Brony. I get different ideas for the mane six and mostly into game crossovers.

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During a walk around Canterlot Market, Celestia take notices of two young ponies working together to get food they need to live. When one of her guards try him some younger ponies the two stand up to him. Celestia discover that they are orphans and take them in to live in the castle. With Jazz and Phantom (names of the two ponies) now living in the castle, Celestia and Luna life are turn upside down. But can these two young ponies change a darkness that lies ahead?

Take place before My Little Pony Friendship is Magic starts, back to where Luna was on the path to becoming Nightmare Moon. Image belongs to littlewashu45, Thanks!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 28 )

This was really good so far, interesting build up there. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9532068 Thanks, the next chapter will be about Luna and Phantom. I'm thinking about how it will go. Might take me awhile to write it.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next. Keep up the good work

Man this are getting interesting :3

Awesome! Another chapter. Can't wait for the next one. But, first. Damn!!!

"Of course, then again. I know everything." The newcomer said before a portal open in the shape of a clock face.

Is that THE Clockwork? The time ghost?

I guess Princess Celestia? lol

That first part was a Tarzan reference

9608028 That's not the only disney reference I made. Look at Chapter 1, where Celestia see Jazz and Phantom for the first time. Back where they were stealing some fruit so they can eat. Guess which movie that scene is base on.

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Yeah I saw the Aladdin one as well forgot to mention i noticed that my bad sorry. Doing good work so far

Can you do some back story for balanced hope it's confusing on where he fits into this story, and will he have a major plot part does help the children or something its really confusing?

9646723 Balanced Hope isn't mine. He a OC that belongs to Crossoverlover242, who gave me permission to use. If you want to know more about the OC you have asked him. He's a user on Fanfiction.

You sure Phantom fan 21 you I can't use it.

9647165 I'm sure, you have to talk to Crossoverlover242 if you wish to the character. If you want I can talk to him. I see you call me by my Fanfiction name.

Yes that's how we talked in the past about the second oc the robot from South America with the adapting abilities and such.

I'm crossover lover and I give you permission to make a back story from my oc OK

9647286 Oh wow!:twilightsheepish: I didn't know! Sorry about that!:facehoof: I'll try to come up with something. Like I said, I'm not going to to spoil anything until after the next two chapters are done.

Lol I honestly thought you would of got it at the robot oc thing but eh what eves, but you do know, you have to give backstories about more than one character. like why sword was acting that way, why were phan and jazz separated from their parents, why/how balanced knows clockwork, what is the old council going to do to the princesses and jazz/phan, what is phan's red eyes some sort of power or something. Questions like that are filers were made for, add some dude.

9647358 I will. I will! I just want to get the next two chapter out of the way first. I need some pranks for Celestia and Phantom, I had to put up a blog because I couldn't really think of any and I did get some pranks. I also got to cover Jazz and Luna chapter as well. Which will give me some time to think on those.

are you continuing the story soon?

9861368 I am, Just a little stuck on something.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

i only just finished what's up so far but i can't wait to see what happens next.

Comment posted by geno extreme deleted Dec 1st, 2019
Comment posted by geno extreme deleted Dec 1st, 2019
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