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Hello everypony this story is based on MidnightChaos's OTVerse
And also to clear this up the Oc Amethyst Rose is my own and the other Oc's Belong to my sisters and best friend who have given me permission to use their Oc's in my story.
Chapters (13)
Incomplete Published: Jun 14th, 2016 Download
22,108 words
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Isseus
Isseus #1 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · · Chapter 4 Relearning to Drive w/ Hooves ·
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Lessee:
First story: Check!
Pony creator avatar: Check!
No cover image: Check!
Abundance of OC's: Check!
[link when updated]: ...check?

DAMN HAMSTER
DAMN HAMSTER #2 · Jun 14th, 2016 · · · Chapter 4 Relearning to Drive w/ Hooves ·
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Wow. Anyone else reminded of ShinraHigh right now?

Chrome Masquerade
Chrome Masquerade #3 · Jun 27th, 2016 · · · Chapter 6 ·
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Nice chapter! :twilightsmile:
BTW, if you ever feel that you need a proofreader, PM me. :raritywink:

ferret
ferret #4 · Jul 20th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 Rude Awakening ·
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Yeah, I’m a fan of Mlp along with 2 of my sisters, Katie, Courtney and of course Zoran, my Best Friend, I think he was the one who got me started watching Mlp, not at first, of course he mentioned it and awhile later I decided to check it out, and of course I loved it ever since, I turned off the screen and grabbed my bag.

That's one sentence. :trixieshiftright:

ferret
ferret #5 · Jul 20th, 2016 · · · Chapter 8 Discord!? ·
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Well, it's way too fast paced, and having the protagonist move in with Twilight, be friends with all the mane 6 etc, is really contrived. But it was kind of fun how they evaded the police, and everyone seems to be characterized pretty well.

Chrome Masquerade
Chrome Masquerade #6 · Aug 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 9 ·
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“Shh! Quiet I see Pinkie Pie” Sweetie Belle said

“Don’t say her name! Names have power! We don’t want anypony to find us” I said now worried that she would show up

“Don’t worry, she will be at a party she won’t be here much longer” Scootaloo said

I stared at them “Are you trying to get her to find us? We have to stay hidden”

“Ooh Who are we hiding from!” someone shouted in a whisper and I nearly jumped from the bushes and had a heart attack

“Pinkie!” I Gasped “What are you doing here?”

“Well, you four were calling my name silly fillies” Pinkie said

Well, pick it up, Sweetie called it! :rainbowlaugh:

Chrome Masquerade
Chrome Masquerade #7 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · · Chapter 10 First Day of School ·
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“Sure thing what kind of cereal do you want?” Spike asked

“Is there any Uh…” I thought “Is there any Cocoa Puffs?” I asked

“Ok” Spike said as he pulled out a box of Cocoa Puffs from a cupboard and began pouring some into a bowl for me and once he finished pouring me a bowl of cereal he placed on the table in the main room

“Thanks Spike”

I never thought i'd be able to use one of these in context, but hey.
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though, i'd be more partial to
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VioletVixen77
VioletVixen77 #8 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · · Chapter 10 First Day of School ·
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7483388 :rainbowlaugh: now I kind-of want to go back and edit the type of Cereal that is chosen now that I have seen that, However I think I would prefer the Luna Pops, and I'm glad that you are enjoying my story (Even if I'm 7 weeks late to say this) :twilightsheepish:

Chrome Masquerade
Chrome Masquerade #9 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · · Chapter 10 First Day of School ·
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7483620 if you Google "MLP cereal", you'd see bunch of them

Chrome Masquerade
Chrome Masquerade #10 · Aug 23rd, 2016 · · · Chapter 11 ·
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“Alright stand back, I’m launching it!” Scootaloo said, picking up the rope in her mouth to activate it

When she launched it I half expected it to just collapse right then and there... well, I was half right It did fall apart but not before launching the boulder far into the distance

“Where do you think it will land?” Sweetie Belle asked as we watched the boulder fly into the distance

“I have no Idea.” I said after thinking about it for a moment

*Somewhere in the distance*

Daring Do was running through a jungle being chased by Ahuizotl, her left wing injured and bandaged to her side. She was starting to lose him but then she heard the distant roar of the ocean and found herself on the edge of a cliff with jagged rocks sticking up from beneath the rough waves of the ocean crashing into the cliff face. She quickly turned around to spot Ahuizotl stepping out from the jungle. “There is no escape for you Daring Do.” He said coming closer

“Give me the artifact and I may let you live.”

Daring Do saw movement in the sky and looked at it from the corner of her eye and saw that it was a boulder and it was coming right for Ahuizotl. She grinned “I don’t think so Ahuizotl.” She said as the faint whistling of an object moving very fast through the air could be heard.

Ahuizotl turned to the direction it was coming from and tried to move out of the way, but was too late as it crashed into him and sent him off the edge of the cliff and faintly his voice carried as he fell. “Curse you Daring Do! This is not the last you will see of me!” He called out falling into the ocean.

Okay, that was pretty funny!

Ratmandango
Ratmandango #11 · Sep 19th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 The Bet ·
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“This is Gertrude, reporting from Scotland and we are getting reports of people beginning to change into Oc ponies that they have made apparent from the show My little Pony: Friendship is Magic back to you Larry” she said before the screen changed to a guy in an office.

That's some high quality news, they actually got the facts right.

Chrome Masquerade
Chrome Masquerade #12 · Sep 19th, 2016 · · · Chapter 13 All the memes... ·
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She pulls out a rubber chicken that looks vaguely like Scootaloo “Meet Scoota-Chicken” She said

Yeah, that was funny. In 2011. :ajbemused:
If you're going to talk memes, Pinkie, we need some fresher ones.

ferret
ferret #13 · Nov 23rd, 2016 · · · Chapter 9 ·
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hath thee

hast thou

when did thou

when didst thou

:twilightsmile:

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