Shinichi Kudo was a famous High School Detective until he got mixed up with an evil crime syndicate. When they caught him, they used a deadly poison on him, but it did not have the effect they had planned. Instead of killing him, the poison shrunk his body to that of a six year old. Going undercover, Shinichi took on the name Conan Edogawa, so that he could investigate the Crime Syndicate without giving away the fact that he is not actually dead. This means he must endure life as a six year old, and help a bumbling Detective solve cases.
One of his new classmates has a request for him. A request that may very well change his outlook on life.
Or at least result in interesting dreams.
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Holy fuck yes best anime plus mlp equals FUCKING AMAZING
... what happened?!?! i have no idea what wnet on most of the time and do i see harry potter reference
ROCKING!
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Alright, some words here. It's only fair, since I'm the first to downvote this fic.
First of all, it's an interesting writing style. For the most part I enjoyed it, but the formatting needs some work to make it easier to read. The prose is decent, but it could be made more readable.
The real reason for downvoting you is your OC. I was sceptical of him the moment you introduced him as "Twilights childhood friend", but I could fly with that. You might have a good reason for it. When you lumped on the romantic interest, I got even more sceptical, but seeing how brutally he got shot down by Twi, I decided to keep reading.
After that, I actually started to enjoy his character, but only because he seemed like a parody of a Gary Stue. Everything he did was shot down, generally with pretty fun results. I could get behind that! If he, at the end of this story, would finds that Twilight just don't like him that way and he's OK with just being a friend, then it could even be a good run. I would have enjoyed him as an OC.
But then, right at the end... You make him an Alicorn. Seriously. That's... Mayor WTF material Right There. If you wanted him as a magic student for Twi, you could have had weird magics change him into a Unicorn, rather than an Alicorn. That could have given amusing reasons for him to forget how he could no longer fly, which is good for comic relief and he wouldn't be an Alicorn. From the looks of it, you're also making it a huge parallel world where Shining will undoubtedly get his "Ran" at the end, which I find unlikely to work seeing how you showed Twilight as having no feelings at all for him aside from a very, very light friendship. (Compared to Shinichi and Ran, who were more or less "going steady" already.)
Anyway. There you go, that's my reasoning. Final verdict on your OC: He showed promise, but in the end, he deserves to thrown out and pelted with rotten tomatoes.
want to read something illogical http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/127236
Shinichi-kun!!!!
I was scrolling down your stories and saw the picture of Conan in the cover image. I knew that this would be the next story I would read.
Having written my share of DC fan fiction, I am always interested in more.
That was an interesting way to crossover/fuse the two series. I admit, that I'm not sure about having his pony counterpart in an almost relationship with Twilight. But if you wanted to continue it, I'd read more. I am intrigued.
For some reason, this statement terrified me.
Also, the only things I would suggest would be this:
1) I feel that Shining Secret should probably be referred to as "Secret" rather than "Shining", because it adds unnecessary confusion to the reader. Every time he was referred to as "Shining", I instantly thought of Shining Armor. Just saying.
2) Coltan's name as a pony was not very original. I thought Shining Secret was a great name for Shinichi, but Colton Philligawa seems like a very forced pun on his "original" name.
Regardless, you are a very good writer, and I'm sad you won't be doing more of this.
5778840 I kind of agree in retrospect. You see when I wrote this Fiction originally, it was actually before there *was* a "Shining Armor". I had Marathoned Season 1, joined the fandom, and was watching Season 2 as it released. I felt like proving that MLP could cross over with almost anything, so I made a Crossover with Detective Conan and posted it online. A little while later, someone commented on it, suggesting that I move it here.
Colton's name was meant to sound like a forced pun. I could probably have done better. If I had had access to Fimfiction at the time, I might have found some names of Brony Writers that write Pony Mystery Stories and taken parts of them for this name. I did not know about it at the time, though, so forced pun it is.