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LuluCalliope


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What drew her to him? Even she wondered this after she plucked the strings of his guitar and sang with her sisters. Why was he chosen to be her prey? Perhaps...it had to do with what had happened all those years ago. Flash Sentry/Sonata Dusk

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Great story Lulu! :twilightsmile:

I have already shipped this. :pinkiesmile: Glad it's catching on.

5096850 I was surprised it wasn't catching on sooner! Also, hello, I just noticed that my story has magically been added to groups! XD I'm new to this site. Anyway, thanks for the fave!

Unusual, but interesting, and pretty well-written. Good job!

5096935 Thank you! I wrote this on an impulse, and I had unusual ideas while I was writing it. Ultimately, I decided to use them!

5097091 That happens to me all the time. :twilightsheepish:

If the Dazzling knew about the portal, why didnĀ“t they use it to come back to Equestria?

5097150 They knew about the portal, but they didn't know that it would open for a brief period of time every thirty moons. They thought it was closed permanently.

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Why are some of the paragraphs centered?

5106937 Sorry! I've been having some problems getting used to the site (as well as a little fight with MS Word). Let me fix it!

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5107611
No worries, welcome aboard. :B

This just didn't really feel like Sonata to me, sorry. It also felt like you were more interested in creating backstory than you were creating shipping, so the latter aspect of this was weak and generic.

I totally thought the same thing when I saw her do that! I knew someone would make a fanfic about that. You pulled it off pretty well my friend!:raritywink::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

This story is awesome!It have many details in it and the ideas are very creative.I hop to see more of them! XD

Dayum... Re reading this for the third time and still awesome :moustache:

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