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Adagio Dazzle has just been banished, and she and her friends need money- fast. Who knew they'd ever sink so low to sorta lying to passerbys in cars?
On her first night of swindling (whatever you call it) Adagio meets a boy who sees past her ruse.

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Comments ( 29 )

They didn't commit the crime in this story because you're a fan of Sonata Dusk. :rainbowlaugh: Right? Anyway, I like this story! But I caught a small error...

Take car of yourself, sweetheart

Unless that was intentional. :ajsmug: Good job as always! :pinkiesmile:

4896994 That's too good for evil. :scootangel: And I agree with you.

4897064 I caught that, but I'm too lazy to fix it. :ajsleepy: :pinkiehappy:

So did it or did it not pass moderation? Cause if it hadn't, wouldn't we need to put in the viewing code?


But interesting concept. I can't wait to see what you do with it.:twilightsmile:

4897118 It didn't pass moderation. :ajsleepy: I think the viewing code is just for unpublished chapters.

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Hmm, interesting alternate backstory for the Dazzlings. :pinkiehappy:

He's a boy who looks about a year younger than me, with light blue skin, blue hair, and a white shirt with a plant on it.

This confused me for a while, since I couldnt think of a background char that fit that description, turns out it was a planet* xD

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RrvjAmzLJCA :3 CAPTAIN PLANET, HE'S OUR HERO! GONNA TAKE POLLUTION DOWN TO ZERO

Hmmm... *writes down a new item on list of ships* :pinkiecrazy:

5083541 I don't know why I ship it, but it's one of my favorites. :derpytongue2:

5084912 It's cool although I'm the main star of it Jk lol. Keep making more and more chapters plz.

5085105 Do you think I should do more? I'm not much of a Romance writer. :applejackunsure:

5085206 Okay. Maybe I'll try to write a little romance story in the next couple days. :pinkiesmile: :twilightsmile:

5085467 Of course for both! I'd love to be your friend! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiesmile: :twilightsmile:

"I guess so," I respond. "Hey, you never told me your name."

"Captain Planet, at your service,"

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