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CreatureofTheNight


An internet reviewer and lover of MLP. That's all I got to say Creature of the Night out

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This story is a sequel to The Moon Worshiper


The Sequal to The Moon Worshiper. Dark Sidewinder has been made an offer from Princess Luna herself! To become one of her guards, can he make it or is he doomed to fail before he started. Also, is there something on the rise.

Cover Art done by Oak Sabletwist

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 5 )

Also, is there something on the rise.

Oh shit. I've seen enough Gary Stu self-inserts to know where that's going.

Luz

It's a relief to know that this fic doesn't have a pony creator cover art.

UNLIKE THAT ONE >>>>>>>>>

You have amazing positive attitude and I love it. I can you are a beginner but so am I. One of my stories got 18 thumbs down so I knew it was the right thing. But you are not done yet. Go find an editor

The correct point of view for the chapter of this story is "To Protect a Hero"

Grammar needs work...mainly punctuation

Points for keeping with the story!

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