You're missing the "Sex" tag.

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Do I need a sex tag if there wasn't any actual sex in the story?

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Thanks for the feedback. I was kinda nervous about writing her.

5268203 Oh, I thought there was due to the suggestive nature and the mature tag.

5268203 No you don't, although apparently diapers are somehow considered "Sexual" now for some reason. I understand they're a fetish to some people. But that shouldn't automatically warrant a sex tag.

Oh well, I'm not a moderator, so I have no say in such a thing.

*Comes at the promise of Aloe and Lotus Sexy Fun Times.
THis is gonna be-
*See's the Diaper Warning*
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5268203
I'm not a moderator, but I believe you do if there are any sexual references, even if there is no sex. But I'm curious as to what warranted the Mature rating if it has no sex or gore. Language?

5268240 It's a fetish story, that's why.

5268238
Holy crap I laughed so hard!

5268209 I can see why. I think I can safely say that Rarity is the hardest pony to write in these types of stories. Simply because, it's the exact opposite of something she would enjoy at first glance.

Rarity was pretty much in character. However, there's a few minor spelling mistakes (bowls where bowels would be the correct word was one that stuck out at me).

The alternate ending got pretty dark though with the duo kidnapping Rarity; I'm not exactly a fan of that.

Diapers are a big turn off to 99% of users here.

You must be the 1%.

5268244
Fetish as in sexual fetish? Because then it deserves a sex tag.
If it's just fetish as in "abnormal fascination with something", I don't think it warrants a Mature rating. You write a fic about how Derpy is absorbed with Muffins, I don't think it warrants Mature.

5268275 Thanks for the corrections. And yeah, the alternate ending was pretty dark, but it was just an alternate ending. I hope you at least enjoyed the other parts of the story.

5268286 Well considering that I guess it warrants a sex tag. Thanks for letting me know.

5268280 Why yes, yes I am.

5268315
I begrudgingly read through the story (Actually, I skimmed most of the middle).

Being called cutie by a mare who just touched her privates caused Rarity’s already red face to become a bright shade of crimson, along with her ears.

This alone probably justifies the sex tag. Combined with the rest, and the sex tag is a good idea, even though there is no sex.

5268280
Guardian, how did you even end up here? Stop adding these fics to Knights, part of me dies inside each time this happens.

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It's my job, man. As founder of Knights, I must be obligated to read shitty stories

Actually wasn't as bad as I assumed it would be from the up/down ratio. But nothing was really out of character here, and the introduction to the relaxation was great. Not the first time I've seen a story with this, but an all right interpretation.

5268482 I would debate the point that having diapers in a story doesn't automatically make them shit, but it is your opinion after all. Also, not sure if the pun was intentional or not, but I still find it funny.

5268518 Thanks for the feedback.

5268280 you would be suprised if you knew the truth. And researched it before mouthing up. :)

you have an alt ending made but it's still incomplete?....

5279429 I hope that's just a mistake.

5279429 Nope, I'm just an idiot who can't remember to change the story status.

5283067 Good. I don't think there needs to be more of this, especially considering what kind of roads the alternative ending could lead to.

Love the story

Hmm interesting but... seems to be rushed and too short... I was thinking her sister aloe would soon intervene and help Rarity out or something. But its just me I kinda liked the regular then this ending

The spa seems a key place for special 'relaxation' techniques. This story added a bit more in how it showed how Lotus may have been long holding onto a dream of being a mother and was willing to do whatever it took to make it happen.

The "Alternate Ending" makes me go deeper into thought on what Aloe and Lotus are like. we know they are the "Spa Ponies" but not really much else. Perhaps they are happy with their lives but Lotus wants more and has had a lot of trouble in getting the chance to raise her own foal? Even if temporarily I can see how finding a way through her craft to satiate this need would make a lot of sense.

There could be a lot thought on as a "Before the story" segment. Like how Aloe felt when Lotus went to learn the technique. Or how Aloe genuinely feels about aiding in what she knows is less a 'treatment' as it is a way of fulfilling Lots' own needs.

Definitely enjoy stories where you can think far beyond the confines of the tale. Nice work. :)