Harpflank and Sweets: Interval

Lyra has been missing for days, and Bon-Bon is getting worried. But what if Lyra's exile is self-imposed? And what if she doesn't want Bon-Bon's help? Perhaps the answer lies in the story of the most important day of Lyra's life...

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Ezn

Ezn #1 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

That was an interesting read. Certainly a departure from what I'd usually expect from Harpflank and Sweets, but a departure that make the whole thing better. I've always felt that the best stories can speak to a wide range of different feelings and speak in many different tones.

Harpflank and Sweets, for all its attempts to just be an action-adventure kids' TV show with set formulas, is something more than that. You're really doing some interesting things with your characters, and it makes the story as a whole all the greater and more powerful. Thank you for writing this.

Jimmsajjin

Jimmsajjin #2 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

u sir r awesum really deep story loved it

have a moustache

RTStephens

RTStephens #3 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

Wow, I never would have expected this from your universe. It's touching and sweet, a really nice slice of life story.

Reading through Harpflank and Sweets, I always wondered in the back of my mind, what Lyra and Bon-Bon did before becoming superheroes and what that meant for their normal lives. I see that you were thinking the same thing.

This is certainly a departure from your other writings but you handled it splendidly. Bravo!

Boolyboo

Boolyboo #4 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

This was were good. This was a story begining to end right? Because there isn't realy any better way to end this. Very good though. Here have a Depry

Law

Law #5 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

You surpass yourself time and time again. Your evolution as a wordsmith is truly astounding. If I may; "We evolve beyond the person we were a minute before! Little by little we advance a bit further with each turn! That's how a drill works!" -Simon the Digger

Firebirdbtops

Firebirdbtops #6 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

Thank goodness that got sorted out. Cutie mark failure syndrome is a very serious condition. I would have rushed her right over to Redheart or Fluttershy.

Okliam