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How do you write, I have no idea what I'm doing

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This story is dedicated to the amazing Bonejingle as a farewell to her, for she is leaving this site. Her beautifully crafted fic Watch and Learn inspired me to create this story.

In high school, the jocks have always been considered as the popular ones. Their word is law. They see anyone below their ranks as a nobody.
At least, that was what Octavia thought. So why is Vinyl trying to befriend her when she's a "music nerd"? It just doesn't make sense. Vinyl is the high school quarterback and captain of the football team. Octavia is the head cellist for the school orchestra. They're from two different worlds, it wouldn't work.

...Right?

Rated teen for swearing. Sex tag for innuendos, nothing too explicit. Criticism is welcome. If there are any mistakes, please let me know
EDIT: Temporary cover art, made by me. Story is still humanized.
EDIT 2: Chapter 1 edited by NightmareAngel

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 60 )

I've read Watch and Learn, and the cancelled sequel and loved it, so to see something similar is great! Anything I can do to help, let me know.
One thing

To her further humiliation, she heard the blue-haired player snicker. Great Faust please just smite me where I stand she thought as she tried to copy an armadillo and curl around herself.

This needs italics.

-Twilight_Scratch

4879870 Found it and fixed. Thanks! :raritywink:
I really hope I can deliver with this fic. Watch and Learn was a beautiful story :pinkiesad2:

This is great. Bonejingle was great. She will be missed, but keep up this quality and you could be the next great OctaScratch writer.

This is a great idea and I hope you continue with the story. You might even become one of the more famous writers if you keep it up with stuff like this. As you can guess I enjoyed the story so far. Keep it up yo!

A story inspired by Watch And Learn?

By all means, continue.

You even put Vinyl's piano charm in the story too ^ ^ I can't wait to read more! :D

4882925 And more there shall be :raritywink:
4882661 But of course :twilightsmile:
4882412 I wouldn't go that far, I'm nowhere near that level :twilightoops:
4882136 I don't know about that, I'm just someone who wants to improve in my writing :twilightblush:

While I can't promise frequent updates, I'll write when I can and when motivation strikes :rainbowdetermined2:

This looks great, it's an interesting idea and the writing is good to boot, I have a feeling this could be one of my favorite stories, hoping for more soon. no rush tho.

4885696 If that is what you choose :moustache:
4886786 I'm pretty new to this, so I'm glad the writing turned out well :twilightblush:

I like this, This is good, decently written and its something new in regards to vinyl tavi fics. I find myself wanting so much more of it.

4957856 Glad to know you like the fic :twilightsmile: Unfortunately, due to college taking up much of my time, I have to limit my writing to the weekends. Updates won't be consistent but they will happen.

4957856 I agree with you there. This is a well written and I found myself really enjoying the first chapter. This looks like it could turn into one of the greats!

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This looks like it could turn into one of the greats!

I don't know about that, I've read fics that are WAY better than mine :twilightoops:

I love this so much!!! I can't wait for the next chapter :-3

5147470 Progress is slow due to college and work taking up my time :raritydespair: I have the next chapter thought out, it's just finding the time to work on it that's the issue :ajsleepy:

5148513 I understand :-) if there is any way I can help just ask :heart:

5149377 Thank you for offering to help :twilightsmile: I'm glad you like the story so far, I hope I can keep the quality up :applecry:

Please post the new chapter soon I am officially hooked do please :)

5254877 I can't guarantee an upload coming soon due to classes and work :raritydespair: but know that the next chapter is being worked on :ajsmug:

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Thank u and I know how you feel I haven't been able to work on my story due to work and stuff like that. No rush I know how stressful it can be whenever you get it done is whenever you get it done thank you for replying :)

5255112 I reply to all comments written on my stories :twilightsmile: Fortunately, my university gives a week off for Thanksgiving, so I'll have some time to write :raritywink:

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Cool! Can't wait to see what you've got planned :)

i loved Watch & Learn and was sad that it not gonna be cont. but im liking this one hopeing for more soon

5292004 Bonejingle will be missed :ajsleepy: As for the next chapter, progress is slow due to work and classes. However, I will be on Thanksgiving break this upcoming week, so I'll have some time to work on it :raritywink:

5292707 yay!! dont work too hard cant wait for it

Need more... Any idea when the next chapter is coming? I really enjoy this :3 :derpytongue2: :rainbowkiss:

5556669 I'm glad you like it so far :twilightsmile: This past week has been spent trying to adjust my schedule now that classes have started and my work schedule has changed. The chapter is outlined and more than half of it is written out, it's just a matter of how much writing it will take to complete it.

5557601 happy to hear! Cant wait for it :D :3

Is this going to be continued? I understand that lessons are getting in the way but is there any chance there could be someone helping you? I'd be willing to help write it out :-)

5793318 I'm finding a little more time now to write, I just finished a midterm and a project. Perhaps you can help me with editing? We can discuss more through messaging.

this story is great and I'd love to read more... But I've been waiting for ever! When is the next chapter coming out? :fluttercry:

5902278 The chapter is being edited by NightmareAngel, I'll have it posted when the editing is done

I am so happy you've updated. I've been waiting forever!!!! I am so in love with this you have no idea I am literally freaking out about what's gonna happen next :rainbowkiss:

Can't wait for the next update

5913171 The next chapter will take a while as I'm currently preparing for finals. However, some of it is outlined, I'm just having trouble coming up with a way to end it.

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I know how you feel. It's ok take as long as you need. This is a story worth waiting for :pinkiehappy:

5914354 I'm glad you enjoy it so far :twilightsmile:

This was so good can't wait for the next chapter :trollestia:

5916634 Not sure if trolling or not :rainbowhuh:

5918501 don't worry I'm not but once school out I'm going to be like non-stop looking for chapter 2

5919304 The next chapter will take a while as I'm currently preparing for finals. However, some of it is outlined. I'm just having trouble coming up with a way to end it.

When Octavia believed her friend would be able to function again, she motioned for the two to ead for the exit.

When Octavia believed her friend would be able to function again, she motioned for the two to head for the exit.

The edges of Lyra’s mouth curled up, her grin mimicking the Cashmere Cat, “she’s been acting a little flustered around you."

The edges of Lyra’s mouth curled up, her grin mimicking the Cheshire Cat, “She’s been acting a little flustered around you."

You need to update the story man.

6310517 First off, I'm sorry I haven't kept up-to-date with my stories. I'm taking 18 units, doing volunteer work for a class, and I work weekends. For 2 days of the week, I have 6 hours of class, and I've been burning out a lot recently from the work load. Hopefully things will calm down if we get more employees where I work.

Life getting in the way of yet another good fanfic. RIP

Good Luck.

I hope that things are getting easier at where you work! This has so much promise and I'm dying for octascratch stories that have one of the two in sports. The other one I liked kinda fell off the face of the earth. :fluttercry:

6886618 If things work out, my class and work schedules will leave me with Fridays and Saturdays off :pinkiehappy:

6887805 Yay! I can't wait for it to pan out!

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