Blackjack, an incompetent security mare from the dystopian Stable 99, suddenly has her monotonous life turned upside down when the stable is invaded by vicious raiders. Blackjack flees the stable with EC-1101, with the wasteland in hot pursuit.
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Holy Christ on crackers with cheese spread! Somber posts a chapter to PH and the whole of this sites perusers do not immediately cream their respective jeans in excitement and after a appropiate change of said pants immediately go apeshit and put this steaming pile of awesome grim dark to the top of the sites Popularity box.
FIMFICTION I AM DISAPPOINT AS CLEARLY INDICATED WITH AJ EMOTICON
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Wait what the fuck I thought this fic finished already
Edit: ignore me I'm not a smart pony.
I feel this is very fitting for what's to come:
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO damn... what a chapter, man, this was long, and I got two more to read
TEHEHEHE, AWESOME work well done man, well done.
Nice going kiddies... you lit a bomb.
BLOODY HALL! RUN JUST RUN!!!
I'm kind of surprised that these three chapters came at the same time... aw well, anyway. Nice job breaking it all of you, you just lit up a balefire bomb!
looked down at us.
One thing
Well Graves will find rest in the ever after now.. and Blackjack and expedition crew lit a freckn' balefire bomb.
What else? Rampage being Rampage, Rampage having moments, Rampage finding about about her past again. Shears actually being *snip* didn't occur to me. The smooze is actually dangerous to the touch, recycled RadAway helping, and a whole heck of a lot of foreshadowing. I do not have great expectations for the attic of Hightower.
And that's all I can read for now. Up to 28,000 worded chapters now.
And then Blackjack was all like....
Okay, maybe she won't do that, but she's not a smart pony either.
Two songs:
1.) for the end of this chapter
2.) for the next chapter
:D
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Poor Rampage. :C Well, this doesn't feel interminable or dragged out after all, and getting to find out a major portion of her backstory? Priceless. I'm very glad I was right about Snips. :3
It's pretty neat that you didn't give us this getting-together scene with the Marauders as the very first we see of them. Good writing! Also, I realize that I've never really seen Echo before, despite hearing his name mentioned. (Also that Doof is "food" backwards. I mean, that's not hard to realize, but now it's pertinent. XD)
So yeah, glad to see more about Rampage, a little Ponyville reunion, and Xanthe becoming part of the team. But I swear to god if Blackjack turns into an alicorn, I will flip this fucking story. >:B (no spollers plx)
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And even in cases with characters everyone doesn't already know, it's okay to get the audience interested in them before going into backstory? Crazy talk. You're a mad man, Present, a dangerous loose cannon and a liability to the force! Hand over your badge and gun. :V
Wait, you mean every new version of Superman doesn't need to start on Krypton or with a spaceship crash, every Batman doesn't need to show his parents' death at the get-go, and every Spider Man doesn't need to immediately recapitulate Uncle Ben's death and thoughts on responsibility and power, and it might even be preferable for them not to?
Well, i guess i should get to reading this....... it's just so long though......... Screw it, i love long stories!
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First, what's with the name of the doctors? Spectre? Bones? Graves? What the heck.
Second, OF COURSE Graves and Cerberus were killed off. Graves was just "that character who's alway's depressed and is probably going to be killed off after getting the one last thing they've been wanting" and Cerberus was just the group's pet guard dog (haha I'm funny LAUGH) that didn't have enough personality for anyone to care about. That and Somber seems to love killing off robots, especially the ones with sentiene/sapience.
Oh, Cerberus survived? Wasn't expecting that. Wasn't expecting that at all.
hmm? where is dimond tiara? didn't she die in a prison in a bathroom? goddamnit, this was the perfect moment for another Fallout Equestria reference.
LOOKS LIKE SOMBER DID MADE A MISTAKE.
Grammatical error Happens to the best of us, especially when the best of us write so much.
Hey...Blackjack...I think you've got a little Psalm on you, or something. Might wanna wipe it off when you come across the next necromancer or something.
Dang. I just love Angel.
So...BJ's got some new...organs.
Wow. And here I thought it stopped at "radiation, generation pink cloud flux filled puss sack on legs."
Looks like I was wrong on all accounts, you can always get weirder.
And boy, if Trixie isn't the warmest welcome committee I have ever met.
Yay! Let's break out the balloons and rum!
Wait...there's no rum?
What do you mean there's no rum!?
Why is the rum always gone!?
Congradulations!
What have you won?
Why, a beuitifal sunny hot day in the Wasteland!
Courtesy of a balefire bomb igniting under your feet!
Have a nice 7 hours until visiting the glorious Everafter! Home of the one and only, Puppy Smiles!
947,712 words down! Eighthundred something thousand to go!
You have officially become one of Blackjack's friends!
Thank you.
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Lacunae has the best one liners. And she is so amazing in general! Just having here in a scene instantly makes it better, whether it's through her humor, her life lessons, her badassery, her floundering over people giving her attention...
... Oh jeez... I think I have a crush.
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I know your pain sister, I know...
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I believe the work you are looking for is 'consensus'
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I cackled madly at this. Ooh man, having Tricia stuck in your head, telling you to obey? Oh dear Lord, the horror for Blackjack, the hilarity for me!
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THATS cool. Seeing through your friends eyes, hearing their voice, knowing their thoughts. Obviously invasive as we see here, but still awesome.
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This chapter was a blast. And we finally know what the deal with Rampage is. Finally getting some progress on that front!
hah! that made me think of Half-life 2 Ep. 1, where you have to fight your way through a Hospital crawling with Zombies. at one point Alyx Vance exclaims "what kind of hospital is this?" she also trades her usual pistol for a shotgun!
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Turns out this guard dog is tougher than the average dog.
According to this chapter: brain cancer gives you wings.
I remember this episode.
I think the Balefire ghoul is one of my favorite enemies.