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Hero Mode is a half dragon and half pony hybrid with a pegasus mare for a mother and a dragon for a father, he has been picked on and bullied as a kid but has made several friends since then now he is moving to Ponyville where he has made even more friends but he wasn't also expecting to find Rarity who he has a crush on however his friend Spike also has a crush on Rarity as well.
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With 21 stories you should know better about how much this idea is going to set people off.
Also, stop saying "The End" at the end of every chapter...
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Ooooook? you need to put mo' detail in that
ok as I love kirin but Hero Mode sounds like a mode I play in a video game which is the eases mode ever I played my games on God of Chaos and Darkness mode mwahahhahaha I just kidding not really Hero Mode is not easy mode but normal mode, but Hero Mode as a character overall hmmm I fell he is bland for some reason.
4816258 There's not even categories to add this to... that's new.
4816544 maybe a slice of life too I honestly don't know I am already confused that their is not a tag on this:
4816574 or maybe tragedy when Spike kicks his butt
4816574 and it would be funny when Spike wins ageist him because no one messes with Spike so we got are comedy holy hell I am on a roll.
Just constructive criticism here but people might be more keen to stick around for your story if you didn't have 20+ incomplete ones. Maybe finish some of those first?
4816755 Into which he clearly put an equal amount of effort. By which I mean only enough to shit out enough crossover content to pass moderation.
This guy may be one of the most productive and yet laziest writers on the site, in terms of quantity over quality.
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I thought that title belonged to JusSonic?
4818404 ...never actually heard of him until you just mentioned him. The problem is that, while he's got WAY more stories in a WAY shorter time, some of them do have actual positive reception, unlike dbzponyninja here.
I've just GOT a new OC myself... and he's known as Sarcasm Mode. He has something to say about your fic: "That wasn't a painfully predictable series of events with awkward dialogue, colourless characterisation and a dull hero. Making out The Power Rangers existed in Ponyville was just a complete masterstroke! Rarity going on a date with someone she barely knew and couldn't even remember the name of... Spike giving up just like THAT in his lifelong pursuit of the girl of his dreams handing over all his money in the process to Mr Personality... The GENIUS way you avoided writing about the guy's past by skipping 'five or six years'. You have a true talent, and I look forward to future updates with the same enthusiasm as my own funeral " Nice fella, my OC.
Can... can you not?
Please?
~TOOWC
I liked it.
Good job.
5936601 Thank you, I'm happy that someone finally likes this story.