Dark doesn't always have to be depressing, morbid shouldn't seem so mundane, and romance without regret just sounds... insane, rather than sweet.
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This story is a sequel to This is an Order: Lust
The gods have learned of Trixie's intentions, and now the time has come for Trixie to decide between love and life, not her own of course. She'd forfeit one the moment she was found out. Now Twilight refuses to trust her, Celestia could care less, Luna would leave her to the maggots, and Cadence just may be her final chance at redemption.
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Well I can assure you that I am with a native tongue and it's all I've ever known, and asking that because I have a horrid habit of going through "tenses" the same as scenes in a play, or channels on a television does seem a bit rude, insulting... funny as well in my opinion.
But I've already addressed my own faults in my blog posts, time and time again, though I'd like it if you were to point out specifics for you asking me a question. That aside, I like to inspire thought, leaving gaps allows one's mind to process an end or beginning of their own, dictating /every/ thought and action until its too obvious leaves little to the imagination, /thinking/ is healthy.~
And the world was always different, thus the "alternate universe" tag from the start, I understand my writing style can only approach certain minds, but those are the minds I'd like to read this over any other. Of course I'd like for everyone to enjoy this but I knew from the start this wasn't for /everyone/ it was just fun, so enjoyable that I made certain to see it to the end.
The Pink Menace,(Pinkie)
thing was answered in chapter two, hinted all over and then stated clearly; in the third chapter as well. Again if there are was something in particular you're welcome to say so here.
I read between lines and have a habit of studying breaths, I like to think like-mind others and those just in love with /Twixie/ as much as I am would enjoy the fable enough to give it a chance. One chance, one comment, that's all I want from all who've read this good or bad. You've given me that, thumbs up or down, I'm pleased to have had you speak your mind without censor.
And thank you for your kind review, I have quite a long way to go, nowhere near as far as I'd once believed of course, but far enough still.
These were spectacular, thank you.
Vary good story, a little on the flowery side and reminds me of some manga like Bezinghast. One thing that I think could have been expanded upon was the fact that Pinky killed Trixie, from what I remember from the first story it was supposed to be a pretty gruesome death. Did She intend to kill Trixie or was it just an accident? (If she did I don't see how that could sit well with any of her friends, as she seems to suffer no remorse or punishment.)
Oh wow, I never saw this until now. Anyway.
Good ending for this trilogy of oneshots. It finally revealed so much about their bond and why things have been so tense between the two. Strangely simple, but fitting all the same; an order, words of her own heart, given so carelessly. I like the subtle moral of being careful with your words because of the impact that they can have on another.
What I really love was the philosophy and nature of the AU in this story. The four Alicorns, representing near every facet of life and death and all that is in between is a interesting concept. But now Twilight's soul and in essence her power and reign over that between life and death is with Trixie. Twilight had given up her power and immortality for her and not regret a single thing, is a very powerful message of what love can mean. I have a very strong feeling that this story is going to end up like a Portal Fanfic that I read a long time ago, and I don't doubt that it will be just as tragic.
I say that this is the perfect place to end the AU since I much prefer this open ending full of hope and apprehension than one that is set in stone. Wonderful job with this, and once again I'm sorry for not finding this until now.
4699041 -sniff sniff- Is that some Black Butler I smell?
And Trixie shall help if her Mistress wishes.
For she's one hell of a butler.