Dark doesn't always have to be depressing, morbid shouldn't seem so mundane, and romance without regret just sounds... insane, rather than sweet.
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In all the years Luna spent imprisoned, the sun and moon still rose in Celestia's wake. How was such a feat ever performed or even possible?
In the last of Luna's efforts to find the answers,she agrees to a wicked wager, one she intents to win at any and all cost. Celestia cares for her sister truly... so much so, that there are just some secrets even she won't confess to without proper "incentive."
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It was very heartwarming
Great storytelling here. SPOILER REDACTED.
REDACTED luna... I loved that idea. I loved the lesson.
Well written and well done.
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First of all thank you for your kind critique, truly,~ I always write with pen before I type things, so the upload was a week behind once I'd actually realized how much I'd written.
But, that's a mighty-big spoiler you have sitting there,
and I find it rude to just delete comments; especially over something so silly. I was wondering if editing it out were possible? Positive or negative I like to keep all comments standing, every creature carries a voice for a reason after all.
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Its honestly the most heart-warming literature I've ever written, I'm more accustomed to morbid passions and pursuits actually. Though I want to explore writing as many genres as possible. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and cared enough to leave a comment at all.
4286915 OMG my bad. Lol I literally was readi NH your story at every damn stoplight on the way home I was that into it. Got carried away and spoiled it. I'm on my phone now but when I get to a computer I'll share your story to make up for anyone who saw my spoiler and potentially ignored the story.
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No, no that's fine really. Thank you for editing your comment, I appreciate the sentiment, but you've done more than enough.
So the history books of Equestria were incorrect, about Celestia raising both Sun and Moon?
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Well I don't recall Equestrian historical text stating she did, still the "Alternate Universe" insinuates that canon beliefs are contrary, hence why the tag is there at all.
....What?