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Car Cloth



Princess Luna slips through the dreams of her subjects, helping them conquer their fears and anxieties in any way she can.

But its a thankless task... one that often leaves Luna filled with the old bitterness she once felt before her banishment. The bitterness begins to take hold until, one night, she stumbles upon a pony who dreams exclusively of her... Perhaps her task wasn't as unappreciated as she thought.

(Artwork [with permission] from NastyLady on deviantart)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 69 )

An interesting concept you have here. I want to see where you are going with this.

I don't think I've ever seen this concept before. I am very interested to see how this turns out. Will you be doing more than one dream per pony?

The story revisits a select few ponies - hopefully you enjoy. :raritywink:

Thank you , Pip. Finally, a good dream. :twilightsmile:

Every one needs a hand now and then, to be told they are loved.

I like this chapter. I'm glad everyone could be helped.:twilightsmile:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. :yay:

Just reading Trixie's dream has me hooked already. I'm definitely following this.

This is very sweet ending and I do like Discord's dream.

Can you write a story farther in the future when Pip becomes a royal guard?


lolz - that was amazing. Love Gravity Falls. :rainbowlaugh:

That is such a emotional story! Especially the ending! I love it! :heart:

I'm just about to start reading this, but first, where did you get the awesome cover?:twilightsmile:

The source link is on the picture and I included a link to the deviant art user in the description box. Her name is NastyLady and she does amazing work! :rainbowkiss:

You've always got to watch the quiet ones. The shadows in the background. They're often the most important, unappreciated, beautiful pieces in the puzzle.

The dawws are flowing through me right now.

Dude, I wanted so hard to break legs of those two twin dickheads. Props to you my man.


:facehoof: Good sir, that should be Ponyville.

When will you make a new chapter? I love the new series so far! So excited to see where it goes! :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay::trollestia:

A new chapter to this story or to Guardian of the Night?

This story is completed but The Guardian of the Night will have more chapters. :rainbowkiss:

Amazing work. Thank you so much for writing it and picking up such a topic.

Wonderful, I've already read the sequel to this story, I must say that this story is amazing! Also the sequel, finish the sequel... thank u and ur awesome :D

The older colt, the same colors as she was, threw her into the hallway closet and locked the door. “Ha! Now what’re you going to do, Coco? This’ll teach you to go touching my things!”

Is there a typo in there, or was Coco's brother teaching to go touch his things? :rainbowhuh:

It was deliberate (when read aloud it sounds like something a teen would say, in my humble opinion), but I can always change it if you think it should read differently. I'm not overly attached it. :rainbowkiss:

Late comment is late, but this was a wonderful story :twilightsmile:
Shame I didn't read it prior to the Guardian of the Night, but still it didn't make it any less awesome :pinkiehappy:

Yeah, this only very loosely a prequel - I said in the description of Guardian of the Night that you didn't need to read it to understand everything that was happening (and I think that's true). Glad you enjoyed though! :rainbowkiss: This isn't my normal over-the-top adventure fic.

Good short story focusing on my favourite character from MLP.
I enjoyed it, now to read the sequel.

Late the the party but the author was simply typing as the character would actually speak. I honestly don't even know if it is grammatically correct but it is something people say in everyday conversation.

I liked this enough to go into my history to make this comment when I realised I forgot to comment. Well done.

“I am candy! I am cheer!” Pinkie roared to the dream citizens.

The mighty candydrake from the dragon kingdom.
Smaug is jealous. :rainbowlaugh:

That's adorable...
I wish I'd have read this one first rather then reading Guardian of the Night. It would've made much more sense.

But yes this was great!
So far all three of the stories are awesome!

during trixie's dream, I was thinking about when discord was trying to turn fluttershy grey.
sometimes you can't do things subtaly, you have to yell it at them in plane, simple words and wright it on a buildboard.

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