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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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It's Nightmare Night once again, and once again things are gonna go wrong. It seems that the Headless Horse, long thought to be an old pony's tale, is real, and is ruining Ponyville's Nightmare Night celebration! So Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie, conveniently already dressed as Sherlock Pones and Dr Watson respectively, must work, with help from their friends, to solve the MMMystery of the Headless Horse. Can they do it before somepony looses their head to the phantom?

Chapters (3)
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Can't wait to see who it is.:derpytongue2: i have some ideas who it is but not quite

Carrying a large bag in the middle of the night..... Not suspicious at all. :scootangel:

Nice can't wait for the second part:pinkiesmile:

collabration between luna, dash,pip, and fluttershy :trollestia:

Smoke-screens and a dropped bell. We also discover Trixie in a Star-Swirl costume.
Also note Pinkie's observations about the HH; they have to be light-weight and somewhat acrobatic.
Remember little miss Changeling's words? "Even [if] I have to get somepony else to help me!"
I think she found that 'help', the help of an illusionist. One thing led to another and we get...

Rainbow. But, helped by Trixie because of the smoke screens and "Pip's head"

A nice story, with a real "Scooby-Doo" feel to it. I shall patiently wait for the conclusion on October 1.

That's just mean i was looking forward into see who it was and now i have to wait to the end of the mouth

:flutterrage:You've GOT to be KIDDING ME!:facehoof: No no, it's fine. I can wait,:pinkiehappy: no problem:pinkiecrazy:

Yeah, I should probably mention that I wanted to make the "Halloween/Nightmare Night" thing a plot device, which is why I'm waiting for October 31st. Also, it will be all worth it, because I'm gonna have a whole explanation of the clues and motives and everything. This is a REAL MYSTERY! I put a lot of thought and logic into this, so it will be worth the wait.

Well, that was pointless.

1362109 WAS NOT there are clues in this chapter and I think I know who it is thanks to those clues and i'm not telling ether:derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:

1405418 I would assume that there were more clues, else this chapter WOULD be pointless and the author wouldn't have put it up. What I mean is that this chapter amounted to little. We found Pip, the 'headless horse' is good with mechanics and they really mean no harm (else they wouldn't have given Pip back). Other than that nothing much happened. We are almost exactly where the last chapter left off (as far as I can see anyway (then again I'm not exactly speculating who it is so it makes little difference to me)).

""Ha-ha! I pranked the Princess! I pranked the Princess!" he cheered in a sing song voice." - And then Rainbow Dash was male :rainbowderp:

Also, Pinkie Pie's a pretty awesome detective... But then, when you have the power to bend the laws of reality to your will, you kinda have an unfair advantage :pinkiecrazy:

Wow. You thought up of the Headless Horse before it ever became canon. Cool!

Called it. Who else would be the one to team up with Pipsqueak?

Also, for the purposes of this story Trixie's new name is Red Herring. :derpytongue2:

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