They took me from my family, and experimented on me like a lab rat. Now with the power of acceleration I escaped after three years of torture. But I ran too fast and broke through the barrier into a world of talking equines. With my old life gone, I seek to make a new life for myself, but those who used me will not let me go so easily. Am I destined for happiness, or doomed for pain and suffering?
What?
What?
What?
I have no clue what the fuck was happening.
How does Twilight and Spike know what a Huma- Wait.
OH SHIT!
It has EQG as canon! No! No!
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I assume you mean lasers as in lasers that can kill you, right? Those move at the sped of light, he's not dodging them.
This isn't a movie, this is a horrible scene transition.
Yay! Let's waste Trillions of Trillions of dollars that we don't have to do something that is impossible instead of getting another test subject! Idiocy for the win! Yay!
I'm sorry, was that supposed to be funny?
Oh dear god! You can't see energy waves!
Hold on! Hold on! So he can survive going faster than speed, but when he crashes he passes out! What? That makes no fucking sense at al!
4467466 The complexion thing will be explained, and he had just crossed through the fabric of time and space the travel would have exhausted him to some extent. And he was tired after so much running for his life.
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I'm assuming that you're answering my question as to how he passed out when he crashed.
What I gathered was that he passed out because of a physical injury like a concussion.
However, him being exhausted makes more sense, due to the fact that he can survive breaking the sound barrier.
4467496 Exactly
Three guesses as to which facility that was.
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4468039 I think the size of you picture is to small it only says Ape Science xD
>Accelerator
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...This isn't a Toaru Majutsu no Index crossover right?
4470259 No, though the character and his powers gave me inspiration to develope a speedster character as well as why he would look albino
Note I have not read this yet.
Okay...so...nopony objected to the doctor using Jake's fear of needles against him?
Anyway, great chapter!
4475452 It was merely to use in case Jake was planning to escape the hospital, after all Rainbow Dash made an attempt to
4475929 Makes a bit of sense...look forward to more anyway!
His explanation on how he can move so fast delves into 'Hollywood Science'... Not to mention how he was able to get to Equestria in the first place...
No offense, but you used 'admitted' a lot and not even in the right way.
4470999 *grumbles about this not being crossover of fave Anime*
Now that's comedy my friend and sonic is swe~et
plz put sonic in a suit aka monkey suit
I'm not sure what, the grammar, the pacing and the... Well trustyness I guess just pulls me out of it. I'll keep reading and I hope it gets better, good luck!
Mmm not sure. It seems like you need more experience but like that experience only comes from one thing so keep improving and watch the pacing
I'm really liking this story!
NEW CHAPTER yay
dr dagger
i hope dr dagger finds him so he can get sent to MOON!
DUUUUUUUUUUUDE that's sick with a capital S
Only thog i saw this whole time in my minds eye was the 'this is nightmare night' song on youtube. And with those specal effects i was awed at it. I beg of you continue.
this tory alsow rreminds me of the fanfiction angel of equestria. A human experemented on to be a supersolder thanks to nanites causes him to gain magic and wings. T ports to equestria to escape the goverment, marries twi, aj, rarity, and pinkie has kids, the us gove comes to get him back only to find he is now a alicorn(read the story for what happens here) starts a war, gathers worrors from the multiverse, defeates the us army(avatar styal army setup vs. Dragons, a necromancer, a gun phyco, the alicon mane 6, teched up mane 6, a cyborge, 2 meta humans, and the elements of life.) Pikie is killed by the gove offical looking for the archangel(mane charicter) pinkie is revived, and the goverment is taken down.
heres the link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9416090/1/The-Angel-of-Equestria
i like this chapter, ANOTHER!
Duh! Duh! Duh! Duh!
Oh shit!
Will dagger return?
Hopefuly... he f"cken wont! That daum bast3rd should rot in #ell for life because of his f"cken crimes!
arken as tres dentes mosante akrend hetrosamentopsano dekromand hetrocante espotanes muertos.
(*by the 3 devines move and bind this man and his guard to the 9th ring of deaths realm.*)
clestia"sorry, hes in a magic proof cell, he cant escape or be moved unless a unanimus vot of all the devines and demigods in our univers."
decante a manecas, ecroven detres. Monocana acres etrevenea monotres.
(*bypased by the powes of 3, sorry derrie. Hes bound to the innermost ring of Hell now*)
clestia" except you forgot to account for the cell to be boud to the castle dungeon. Cant be moved."
Arcens deconamas jante kares univa
(* he cel is in hell. The moment he steps one step outside the unlocked gate, he will be there forEVEor*)
Clestia" you put a lot of thought in to this diddent you?"
henehen
(*not really.*)
Clestia dedpan glair "relly?"
hai comenesi
(*yes my frend*)
Clestia "this isint over RC. I find a loophole to you soulebind evwntualy, thanYOUR the one whos gonna be stuck in tartorus"
4980101 hopefuly.. never.
Mots acerena re moa pi do.
(Moter acceleration set to max rotations)
gotta go fast!
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When I saw this
I thought 'if I was in his place right then I would have been all like "I need to sue somebody right now!" '
Uh... what? Is that a Donkey Kong reference? The banana irised out around him?
5363767 Not the banana. It's a cartoon thing that happens at the end of certain episodes of shows were a circle encloses around a figure. Sorry it wasn't written clear enough.
it "Fleur De Lis", not "Fleur Dis lee", it's means Flower Of Lisa in French,
Don't mix up the references.. Just stick with one or the other... it kinda sounds corny, no offense...
Eh.. This was okay...
Is there going to be a sequel?
4712322 youu know a character is disliked when someone gives them a flutterrage
5437819 http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Fleur_Dis_Lee
A very nice story I'm looking forward to more of the like... Good workπππ
Let's just hope the Ponyville hospital doesn't do anything to further fuel his truama.
Typical mad scientist that disregards humanity for the sake of scientific progess.
Admit it Dash, you liked dancing with him.
Love that Twilight used that spell again. But that is now how it works. For one the spell requires whatever species Twilight wants to turn into is present when she cast the spell, In other words, Accell has to be present for the spell to work. And second, the spell is not on a timer, the spell last as Twilight decides to break the spell.
say morning again, i dare you, i double dare you mf