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i dont recognize the cover art usually they tell what the cross over is but i dont know who that is so what is this cross overing with?
nope never mind i think its the overlord i had to think of the words minions of war
4212601 Yeah, that's the Overlord from Overlord II. I like to be a bit less obvious with Cover Arts as to make people guess a bit.
4212653 ive played an beaten overlord 2 where did the horns on the helmet come from cause i didnt have that
4212797 Okay, I got your message while at College. I did some research and it turns out the image I chose for the cover art was a Concept Art for the Infernal Armor. You can guess what happened to it.
4214422 Thanks!
4215072 dang they didnt keep the horns i wouldve thought that was so cool if it was a wearable helmet in the game
4215262 Yeah, it would've.
Wow, that was great! can't wait for the next chapters.
4217198 Well, once I check over it, I'll post up!
Really enjoyed it, like 8.5/10 to 9/10. My only current complaint would be longer chapters but, I know it can be annoying to do but if you can it would be SWEET.
he had better win the overlord doesnt lose to anyone and it would be nice to see evil win for once after a long and trying battle between him and the elements or something along those lines
4233387 Don't worry. He will.
4233322 Longer chapters? That second one alone was over twenty pages!
4233677 Elements of harmony corruption nice let me guess corrupts elements of harmony to join side of overlord or destroys elements upon use or makes them unusable correct or am I wrong
4234613 Not exactly. To quote a famous Soup Master from Seinfeld...
"No spoilers for you!"
4233677 In my defense I have seen monster 20k chapters. Not to say you need to but to salvage a bit of dignity.
Looking foward to when the OL is reunited with his minions again.
4249496 Trust me, you will die laughing. Hopefully not, but you get the idea.
LOVED the scene when the Minions woke up! Also, like how you made the Overlord on a bit more friendlier term with his minions, and he consider them pleasent Company, and not just Tools to be used.
4268886 Glad you like that. Yeah, after living over thrity thousand years, you tend to get attached to the little buggers,
4269127
Why do we need another one of these? We have Malideus, Phobos, Vulcan, an entire league of fanfics devoted to humans acting evil. We don't need another story featuring a paper thin villain who's evil just because.
And why does there HAVE to be a balance? Evil is good spoiled. It's a parasite. A twisted ripoff of good. It cannot exist without good. But good CAN exist without evil. There's no need for balance between good and evil. That BS was made up by bad writers who have no understanding of real philosophy and morality.
A truley great chapter, can't wait to see what will happen in the future.
stupid thing didnt give me an update for the new chapter
4305573 Look, Vulcan, Phobos, those fics are from what I can get, humans getting teleported to Equestria. In my version, Equestria is Earth, its just a future earth where the human race is no longer alive due to fictional WWIII.
4312377 We'll see...
yaaaay slave number 1 i know in the second game you could have 3 how many is he getting here also i know he already has the minions working for him but is it possible that he could get the griffons to work with/for him too to destroy the ponies?
4345292 Gnarl: Destroy the Ponies?! Are you MAD?!?! Why the very idea! The Overlord is not going to destroy them!
Well, Gnarl he will just not in the way Foresst is thinking.
Gnarl: True, true. After all, we all know that YOU know Evil better then anyone.
Thanks Gnarl. As to the mistress things, I'm going to go with more then that. Remember in the First Overlord, if you choose the corrupted path, you get ten Slaves, TEN added in on the mistress. and there's something you need to think of. When you see the Tower in the old lands in Overlord II, you see the spiked spire something you can only get if Velvet is chosen. That's safe to say that the Third Overlord had both Rose and Velvet as Mistress.
Gnarl: so you're going with more then the usual huh?
Yep.
4345369 i wasnt able to beat the first overlord and when you had to choose between the two ladies i chose the one that was the lady in the second one, she wore the hood
4345475 You never beaten the first Overlord? Shame on you! And you always chose rose? Okay, dude, you seriously need to stop being so...ugh, good. Here, read up on this.
http://overlord.wikia.com/wiki/Corruption
Gnarl: And he comes himself an Overlord? Granted Gratitude is needed but still! Better to have them under your thumb and subservient then frolicking about with him. Now i need to go find a dark corner and pummel something...perhaps Jester.
4347657 actually the game got stolen before i could beat it and only played it the 1 time
4348916 Wow...I'm not going to ask.
Gilda as a mistress?................I am intrigued.
4349552 yea it sucked and i was mad too cause it was a person i had let borrow it then he took it, lost it, then it was found like 2 months later broken
4349974 Hmmm...you know i never really gave much thought to Gilda as a mistress. I'll have to adjust that a bit.
Before I start reading this, do I need any prior knowledge to what this is crossing over with?
4414336 It's a Crossover with Overlord, a video game series that kicks ass.
Huh? What's this? Celestia and the OVerlord have a bit of history eh?.........I am intrigued.
I think the feeling is it just end kinda abruptly at least to me. Like there should have been another paragraph or two to extend kinda was Celestia was feeling or something I don't know.
4415535 Perhaps. That might have been what was nagging at me.
4414542 Thank you and I might play it sometime, but that doesn't answer my question. Do I need to play that game in order to know what happens in this story or not?
4416153 Not really.
so my favorite game is here and full evil and corrupted no less that is even better and now Celestia and Luna/Nightmare moon have history with him now i have one important question what about Jester and will he be overlord 1 jester or evil and corrupt jester from overlord 2
4472611 Jester? Who's Jester? No jester in this story sorry...least...not yet.
Wait a minute. He's a sociopathic conquering mass murdering enslaver but RAPE, oh, he draws the line at that? Why does he care? And BTW, there doesn't need to be a balance of good an evil. That's a fallacy. Evil is a parasite. It's good spoiled. Good gone wrong. You can have good without evil, but you can't have evil without good.
I can only guess that the "Infernal Commander" will be the first of the set to be returned but who to deliver it...................., Griffon or Minotaur? A Dragon will have the "Infernal Armour".
So will he bring out the "Elemental Armour", "The Evil Eye" and "The Warlock" on his march to reclaim him propriety?
4486242 Hey, i said once, i say it again, don't like, don't read.