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This story is a sequel to Room for Rent
"Come to Equestria, meet my friends, we'll have a few laughs!" One night, six mares, a karaoke machine, and alot of alcohol. What could possibly go wrong? This is the story of the night Louis visited Equestria, and the fun that ensued. It is not a sequel, but more of a bonus outtake from the Room for Rent sitcom.
Enjoy my first attempt at a musical story.
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First Comment? Sure, why not! There's not much I can say that I haven't already said on FF.net, but I feel that this story deserves a comment. So, Let's start with the fact that I love how you've maintained the characterization of each of the mane six, and Louis (even though he's more or less there for foil - Aka the Rickie Ricardo, Darren Stevens, and at times even Drew Carey - of the story). He doesn't need a lot, although he does get a little (in the words of Rainbow Dash Not that perverts!), of character development. We know he's the straight guy in this, and we know that Pinkie is going to turn his world upside down.
The songs you chose for each of the characters fit extremely well, and to be honest it's easy to sing them to the karaoke version of the music. (Yeah I did sing Freeballing to Freefalling.)
Having read all of the main story, I can see how things would have lead up to this. A night in Ponyville, and spending it with a good friend. (I bet that Don would have given his left leg to go. Hell, he would have most likely hooked up with Lyra).
All in all, this is a great little compliment story.
- LF
4135557 Well then, I feel my job has been done well.
This is exactly what I was aiming for.
4135557 I agree. It doesn't hold much if you treat it as its own original story. It only works as sort of side-story with an 'episodic feel. If you treat it as the filler that it is...it's remarkable.
4138345 And yet, nobody has spotted who he was with.
fallout equestrian reference classic
4156037 Finally, someone gets it
I want to know where dash, rarity, and aj are. I somewhat want to know if he did do it. I don't know if I want to know his reaction
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Those last four lines... Priceless
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Pinkie is going to be pissed. Hope you aren't ending this here.
EDIT: marked complete. Damn at least give us an epilogue with everyone's reactions. It's too good an opportunity to waste like this.
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4156903 I ended it this way purposely with a cliffhanger.
I leave the results and speculation to the reader.
i would much rather billy jean to be with spike than AJ
Pinkie pranked, and pranked good by Luna, yeah, that was awesome. Good job, If I could I would give this another thumbs up
Darnit, creepy Lyra!
Yay, Spike didn't become a prick when he hit puberty like some other people I knew from school!
Why is no one commenting on this?
You hope, lol!
Ye sit was, Pinks!
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I am surprised that this hasnt gotten as much traffic as the main story. C'est la Vie.
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Hell, I still come here and re-read it pretty often. I liked the fact that it's more or less just an added part of the main story. Although I suppose that if you really wanted to you could work it into the main story. Make it part of one of his trips to Equestria. It'd be fun at least.
4300048 It was originally a normal chapter, but it got to be so damn big, i split it off. Then I went back and made it so it was an outtake. This way it's never sure if it really happened, and it could have happened at almost any point in the main story, although I do drop some hints at so about when I happens. So just think of it as a "What if" story.
I continue to enjoy this series
nice
Imo the only thing worse than karaoke is elevator music. Makes me wanna perforate my ear drums.
If you wrote a story with Lyra in it. I'd read it.
Got a thumbs up from me.
4419281 One of my readers is writing the spinoff with her. Looks like he's taking it in a cloppy direction, but I've been giving him feedback.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/186183/be-careful-what-you-wish-for
"Whoo!" *wipes tear from eye.* "aww shit. that song louis sang... I've been slain by the Lulz." Dude you have to get someone to sing these songs. especially Freeballin' i"d pay money for freeballin
Yo, what song was ponified for 'Shy to sing? I cant tell and i really want a reference for it.
4479170 I put a link at the end, it was "Edge of Seventeen" by Stevie nicks
EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
I love it, but seriously da fuck is with Louis falling for Luna. I want to eventually have a Pinkie Pie human love story but two things must be done. one you be willing to not allow sex but keep some romance between the two, and two... down with luna ships, though she is best princess she will stay forever-alone is that understood!!!
(your appropriate response)
Eeyup
Good now go wallow in shame for not doing this earlier.
5095852 Lol, it wasn't a ship, it was Pinkie being trolled in her dream by Luna.
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... oh
Still he should eventually gain a crush on her.
Good read especially with all the songs. Love to see Louis meet more of the main 6 in the core story. And more about what inventions he's pony-fying
Why wasn't I notified about the existence of this story?
It was great!
Especially that ending... gold